Wel yeah, I think it looks a little better, the top one..... though I think I wouldnt have done the colours like that, but thats my opinion.....
(think maybe some blue or something might have been better....)
the second one, you did a little edit I see on the right side, made it less sharp, still a minor part that is a little to sharp....
to get more dept:
- Blurring/Sharpening
- Darker/Lighter
- Small/Large Sizes
- Lighting (mean with this, sometimes the light can add dept....)
I think it has okay dept though, so dont worry about it.... ^^
I could try and make an edit on them myself, to see what I could do to make them better... (not sure if I could make them better.....) but it would be easier to show then to add in text, cause not that great at explaining, sorry...
Also, you are welcome, I am here to help where I can, if only I knew how to help better I guess....
