Ok its finished and reasonably edited, of course there are my customary grammatical mistakes. This is a bit longer than the prologue. But Enjoy, and if you read this please tell me what you think, what did you like or dislike about it.

So without further wait. Here it is

Also if you haven't read the previous part here is the link to the prologue
http://www.animecrazy.net/forums/blo...ian-tower.html

Chapter 1 Part 1

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Leiv

I recently downloaded a few episodes of Death Note and went to play them on my media player when i heard the sound and i didnt see the show i was kinda annoyed. It said that there was an error downloading the codec. i came here and posted a few times but no one answered so i'm here to vent... U guys are free to comment, give advice or whatever

pistachio20

anybody seen Kimbo Slice fight on Saturday night fights on may 31,2008 or any of his other fights

s0ulEaTeR

ToshiroHitsugayaFan