Heart and Soul
Posted 01-26-2009 at 08:34 AM by AngieRox788
My world in the palm of your hands
Everything I feel
All comes back to the memories of you
I gave everything
And you shoved it in my face
Made me suffer the fate
The one I knew and left behind
It's reality again
And it's all I will ever know
Down in the dumps and lower
No reason to stay
Every reason to leave
All because of a few words
It's more than it seems
Finally, someone I trust
Someone to let in
I've lost sight of that
It's the things you say
That makes me path so unclear
Nothing to follow
Heart nor soul
Confused and lost
Crying in agony
And for these actions
There remains no answer
Again, comments/constructive criticism only.
Everything I feel
All comes back to the memories of you
I gave everything
And you shoved it in my face
Made me suffer the fate
The one I knew and left behind
It's reality again
And it's all I will ever know
Down in the dumps and lower
No reason to stay
Every reason to leave
All because of a few words
It's more than it seems
Finally, someone I trust
Someone to let in
I've lost sight of that
It's the things you say
That makes me path so unclear
Nothing to follow
Heart nor soul
Confused and lost
Crying in agony
And for these actions
There remains no answer
Again, comments/constructive criticism only.
Total Comments 3
Comments
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nice poem.......i likePosted 01-26-2009 at 10:55 AM by Dany1908
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thats really good
Posted 01-26-2009 at 10:20 PM by Gaara's_Pain -
Wow, that was really good, you should do more... =)Posted 07-03-2009 at 02:47 AM by MaximRide
