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A poem for the one I love

Posted 08-20-2008 at 04:49 PM by animegabe
Updated 08-20-2008 at 04:52 PM by animegabe

A poem for the one i love I


Walking in a total darkness,
reaching out for her hand.
That's the meaning of safty,
That's my love,
my home,
and my land...

she is the one for me,
She is the reason not to cry,
She is my dream and my reverie,
And she is my wings when i fly...

Through hate and envy,
Through sorrows and pain.
her smiles, that's the happiness
that's the light of my love to remain...

For her i wrote a poem,
For her i sang a song,
I walk away and crawl back to her arms,
I get weak and she makes me strong,
I imagine her face and get lost in her charms...

Walking in a total darkness..
Still,she finds her way to my hand,
she is my world,
And the only thing i want to understand
And one of the few things i love...
And the one i love most

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    BlazeCommanderASCE's Avatar
    good job on the poem!

    Comment gabe style:
    good..........................

    no really it's good
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    Posted 08-20-2008 at 08:26 PM by BlazeCommanderASCE BlazeCommanderASCE is online now
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    elvispacman's Avatar
    wow great job
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    Posted 09-04-2008 at 02:26 AM by elvispacman elvispacman is offline
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    Son Guido's Avatar
    Is he talking aboot weed? I think it's written nicely, but kinda dark.(I'm no expert on love poems, though.)
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    Posted 12-09-2008 at 08:29 PM by Son Guido Son Guido is offline
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