Next Writing Piece Intro
Well... it hapens rarely, but it seems like I got an inspiration for writing something... this has been twisting in my mind for a while... and now I have the intro for my story... but I would like to know what you guys think... plz comment and be HONEST!
"schitzophrenia, we all know what it is. We all know what it means. Multiple personalities, inexplicable mood swings, other wierd behaviour.
In short: you're a freak.
You have, or think you have, one or more people in your head.
but what if, just what if that person in your head happens to be your recently deceased best friend?
wierd? sick? creepy?..... well, welcome to my world."
"schitzophrenia, we all know what it is. We all know what it means. Multiple personalities, inexplicable mood swings, other wierd behaviour.
In short: you're a freak.
You have, or think you have, one or more people in your head.
but what if, just what if that person in your head happens to be your recently deceased best friend?
wierd? sick? creepy?..... well, welcome to my world."
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i don't see anything, hun...where's the intro?Posted 08-09-2009 at 08:02 PM by
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Its awesome!
.... wait.... what intro? =OPosted 08-09-2009 at 08:04 PM by TheBw 
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sorry...edited it already... pressed the wrong button ^^Posted 08-09-2009 at 08:04 PM by Ayame - ahhhh ok i see it now
very nice, hun!!!Posted 08-09-2009 at 08:05 PM by - now it was epic... seriously... I grave for more!!
Its not nice, teasing us this way >.<Posted 08-09-2009 at 08:06 PM by TheBw - lol bwPosted 08-09-2009 at 08:07 PM by
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Sweet intro Aya, its just that multiple personalities is a different disorder to Schizophrenia. Other than that its nice after the intro it hooked me into wanting to find out more, good stuff.Posted 08-09-2009 at 08:19 PM by Karyuudan - Damn it I knew I'd gotten my facts wrong >.< thanks for that.... I'll correct it in the originalQuote:Originally Posted by Karyuudan
Sweet intro Aya, its just that multiple personalities is a different disorder to Schizophrenia. Other than that its nice after the intro it hooked me into wanting to find out more, good stuff.
lol... I got the first chapter done.... but I'm waiting with posting it... I need to finetune here and there and I want to see the reactions I get ^^Posted 08-09-2009 at 08:22 PM by Ayame - That's cool, I'll be looking forward to reading it. ^.^Posted 08-09-2009 at 08:25 PM by Karyuudan
- awesome!! ^^Posted 08-09-2009 at 08:43 PM by foxuzamaki
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