A sonnet I wrote in English want your opinion xD
Posted 05-27-2012 at 04:43 PM by BloodVoxx
Tenacious, we are but alone we are weak.
To hold together through the wear and tear.
Of life, to live through the journey to seak.
And obtain the desired care, cure.
To be tenacious is a heart fullmetal.
We as one create the future path.
Alone we are weak as if paper torn.
When darkness falls we are ready, Hath.
Forth we will run straight to wars to be scorn.
To be tenacious is to be human.-Shaye
To hold together through the wear and tear.
Of life, to live through the journey to seak.
And obtain the desired care, cure.
To be tenacious is a heart fullmetal.
We as one create the future path.
Alone we are weak as if paper torn.
When darkness falls we are ready, Hath.
Forth we will run straight to wars to be scorn.
To be tenacious is to be human.-Shaye
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Its really good <333Posted 05-27-2012 at 04:44 PM by NioChan
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Thanks i iove to write poetry expecally(spelling) sonnets
like how shake spears wrote romeo and juliet
Posted 05-27-2012 at 04:48 PM by BloodVoxx -
awww <3
enter the competitionPosted 05-27-2012 at 04:50 PM by maria58 - ^ what she said! Btw check out my blog pweeshPosted 05-27-2012 at 04:59 PM by NioChan
- what competition?Posted 05-27-2012 at 05:25 PM by BloodVoxx
- june poetry competitionPosted 05-27-2012 at 05:27 PM by maria58
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u can ask her all abt the detailsPosted 05-27-2012 at 05:32 PM by maria58 - Thanks ill see whats upPosted 05-27-2012 at 05:33 PM by BloodVoxx
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lol details send
forgot saying
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Posted 05-27-2012 at 05:48 PM by Dany1908 - Oh I will Challenge Accepted
Posted 05-27-2012 at 06:19 PM by BloodVoxx
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