Poem # 98
Posted 11-04-2009 at 06:45 PM by ~Dany~
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"You're so beautiful like a rose petal,
In the arms forever to hold on in the face of a mild sunset
Don't let the rain to fall upon us my beloved angel."
I still recall when you whispered my that .
But now i feel my body numb by pain
And your touch i can't feel it on my body filled with scars ,
My hollow soul cries in your absence .
Yesterday i was holding in my hand a wild rose ,
Today has been transformed in dust like our love .
Is it to late now for sorrow and grief ?
In the arms forever to hold on in the face of a mild sunset
Don't let the rain to fall upon us my beloved angel."
I still recall when you whispered my that .
But now i feel my body numb by pain
And your touch i can't feel it on my body filled with scars ,
My hollow soul cries in your absence .
Yesterday i was holding in my hand a wild rose ,
Today has been transformed in dust like our love .
Is it to late now for sorrow and grief ?
Total Comments 4
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good jobPosted 11-04-2009 at 07:29 PM by zeonbell
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thanks zeon
Posted 11-04-2009 at 08:35 PM by ~Dany~
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:O I love that, the way you started with a quote and then worked on from there >> *gains inspiration* :'D
nice as always :')Posted 11-05-2009 at 11:11 AM by naitsirk0
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i like it as usual lol
nice onePosted 11-11-2009 at 12:27 AM by gokukurosaki
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