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Dark twilight

Posted 11-14-2009 at 11:14 AM by Dany1908
Updated 11-14-2009 at 11:29 AM by Dany1908
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Chapter I:Two worlds -light and darkness
First part


I feel all my body numb and i can't breath.The pain i feel in my shoulder is even more sharp and like is burns me . I hear an unknown voice which comes from behind. I barely understand what it says but i think is something like" run,don't stay ". Yes ,this i think is yelling. I'm trying to run but my body is not listening me,I can't move and those hungry eyes which is watching from the deadwoods of the old trees are hypnotize me. On my back i feel a thouch and cold shivers i feel. I am scared and i see like through the mist. Were are you? Are you still alive? Or are just questions without an answer. I wan't to scream but someone he puts his hand over my mouth and taken in his arms . I am trying to see who is but a warm fluid is falling over my right eye . I am feeling sick and i wan't to sleep. Yes, thats what i should do, i will sleep and when I will woke up all will be just a nightmare...

- Angelique? Angelique ,were are you? We must leave to the hospital to see our father or you forgotten, said an young man which was dressed in black pants and a white shirt which was unbutton .
- I am here in the garden i am taken some flowers for him ! said Angelique while she was lifting from the green grass filled with dew with a finger in her mouth because she got prick with a thorn from the white roses which were in the all garden.
- Kids , lets go ! an old women voice could be heard . Your parents are waithing at the hospital and you know that Dr. Reinard hates to wait.He will scold both again.
- We anderstood ! both said at once while they were smiling at the old women which was staying in the from door which was toward the garden.
- Joseph close a button or two from the shirt you will get sick again and your skin you'll burn again. Said worried the women while she was watching at him. He was different and the color to white of his skin was not saw to good for the mos of the people.
He is delicate but is my little brother and I love him. I think i am the only one which loves him from our family and the nanny . She promisee us that she won't leave us only in the grave or that place we all fear. Our mother always scream at him with hate and my father is not watching when is talking with him . I must find before is to late why. We are settle oneself to leave and the chauffeur came with the car in the face of the house . It has black windows to protect him from the nocive sunlights which for his health are dangerous. We decided to leave in the morning because the hospital were our parents work is on five hours distance with the car. I didn't saw them or about few days ,they prefer to stay more thre than home.

Our road has not been so peaceful how i wanted. We been stoped near the see on the exist from the town by the army and the police because of a convicts transportation. Now all which were been found that threatened the safty of the population, the murders, the robber, even the prostitute which are found without the identity card with the heath examination on day are arrested ,judged and send with all in that sinister place. That place show up fifty years ago after a biological accident on the biggest medical laboratory from the entire world. It was at two days on see . There are send those wich has the symptomes are has the disorder which came after the accident. In that times to this new ill they put the name of vampirism and half of the human population died or get it from a virus which has been made in that laboratory. Is not been found no cure for it . Half of the world has been submerged in darkness by the big powers of that time by bombing the infected zone to stop the extinction of the virus to the others regions. This zones fifty years become the land of the infected ones. They were not humans no more,only hungry creatures which were attaking everything in their way. In the prezent day we call them ghetto or district. The truth is we don't know if omeone lives now there or what will happend with the convicts in that place. Now in the prisons are only lock those with minor offence. To that place i lost my grandfather to,i had only seven years when they arrested him. He was the head of a mafia organization.
The symptomes at first are like of a ordinary cold, than the whitening of the skin , the absence of the appetite , subtraction , insomnia,the change of the iris color toward white ,the continuously thirst for lood and fresh flesh and in an end cannibalism. Is a dredful malady on which we all fear. I feel sorry for the poor souls which goes now toward the unknown .

Four days passed since we saw our parents and the seeing again wasnot how i expected . The altercation between my brother and my mother continued. I can see that Joseph is feeling more tired by the days are passing and now is staying more in the garden illed with flowers near the hospital " they are lovely and makes me feel happy even for a moment when i am between them" this is telling me every time i ask why he stys nly there. That was the last time i saw his innocent eyes and his childish smile. In that evening the twilight has been dark in my soul.

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  1. Old Comment
    Dany1908's Avatar
    ok this is my new story sorry for the mistakes
    i cut few thing on the translation
    the scond part of the first chapter i will post soon
    enjoy
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    Posted 11-14-2009 at 11:15 AM by Dany1908 Dany1908 is offline
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    twlightstars's Avatar
    you now have a fan i love this story when is the next chapter be posted
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    Posted 11-14-2009 at 11:24 AM by twlightstars twlightstars is offline
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    HollowX's Avatar
    Isn't it a bit over dramatic?
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    Posted 11-14-2009 at 01:16 PM by HollowX HollowX is offline
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    Dany1908's Avatar
    thanks for the comments
    hm don't know soon

    hm i don't think it is
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    Posted 11-14-2009 at 02:25 PM by Dany1908 Dany1908 is offline
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    TheLoot's Avatar
    very nice dany!
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    Posted 11-14-2009 at 02:35 PM by TheLoot TheLoot is offline
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    some1unoe's Avatar
    Wow, nice work^^
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    Posted 11-14-2009 at 03:21 PM by some1unoe some1unoe is offline
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    i like it dany nice plot developing

    i will defo read next issue

    well done
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    Posted 11-15-2009 at 09:22 PM by
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