In here i will post my stories ,poems and different things that comes in my empty mind
Dany motto: "Smile even if the life is harder sometime"
Poem # 99
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Love
In every morning you woke up wishing
To feel again her perfume on your skin ,
Swallowed by darknes without her you're feeling,
While after a kiss you're craving .
Towards the colored garden you look at ,
How those flowers are wither without her today.
Is painful to not have near you
The one you love .
In an end you wish to come back ,
To wisper sweet words of love ,
And in her eyes to sink forever
In the garden which once you said to her"i love you".
In every morning you woke up wishing
To feel again her perfume on your skin ,
Swallowed by darknes without her you're feeling,
While after a kiss you're craving .
Towards the colored garden you look at ,
How those flowers are wither without her today.
Is painful to not have near you
The one you love .
In an end you wish to come back ,
To wisper sweet words of love ,
And in her eyes to sink forever
In the garden which once you said to her"i love you".
Total Comments 7
Comments
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ok sorry for the mistakes
just wrote it and i had 2 translate it
enjoyPosted 11-16-2009 at 08:09 AM by Dany1908
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8.5 coz of the wrong spelling, anyway great poem
Posted 11-16-2009 at 08:55 AM by JverBeta -
Its pretty :]
"you're" a good writer
Posted 11-16-2009 at 08:56 AM by andrew.wa -
*Dies within elle-chan poem *Posted 11-16-2009 at 08:58 AM by Yuukee - thanks for the comments:
-beta- well i know that has mistakes but english is not my language
-andrew ya i know that with you"re" lol i don't know why wrote like that..lol ..thanks
- zan-kun XDPosted 11-16-2009 at 09:47 AM by Dany1908 -
nice there,
Posted 11-16-2009 at 01:27 PM by Masterworla -
You get a 10 from me!Posted 02-01-2010 at 07:23 PM by Deathknight
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