The captain Commander chronicals
Posted 11-02-2009 at 09:35 PM by foolcoolylover
Fooly chapter 2 part 1
fooly is unconcious on his desk with squad four captain attending to his wounds, fooly wakes up with a jump grabing the zan off his back and brandishing it at the squad four captain, fooly then realizes its just "belle", slowly he says "i'm... sorry" he puts the zan back on , but quickly brandishes it again this time at the door, where squad 7 lieutenant Foxuzumaki is standing, once again fooly puts the zan on his back and sits on the desk. "... you were convulsing, and wounds were appearing on your body almost like you were fighting, but you weren't healing so I brought you to your office and had susa work on you" fox said reluctantly susa chimes in "I healed most of your wounds, your back is stilled stripped of flesh" fooly winces a bit and the wound heals "I also couldn't heal your right arm, its almost like the whole arm is scarred black" she says puzzled, fooly breathes a heavy sigh and says "well i guess now is as good a time as any to tell this story" fooly waves his left arm and the office is once again replaced by a feild. fooly narrates to susa and fox "well normally on a day i would just float around or i would fish but this day something else happened, i joined pd to find my father's killer, this day i found out the truth."
a booming voice is heard to the illusion fooly to which fox and susa can hear, "jack..." fooly looks around "jack..." it says again, "to find the truth go to the cave of your forefathers" fooly looking down opens up a portal into hueco mundo, where he slowly advances to a mountain, as he moves hollows appear trying to stop his advance to which he impales his hand through their masks after a couple days he arives at a cave that is hidden to all but him, as he enters the cave he sees a zanpaktou resting vertically against a rock. fooly reaches out with his right hand to the zanpaktou to which it starts to envelop his arm with a dark aura and fooly goes unconsious, he wakes in his mind which looks like an mc escher drawing
, he sees a black mass standing infront of
him laughing "well well well, the great jack sparrow, if i remember correctly is son of the late captain of squad 6..." fooly reacting quickly tries to slash the dark mass, to which the mass laughs at "you will need to do better than that if you hope to avenge..." he stops and his face changes into fooly's father "...me" fooly drops the zanpaktou and falls to his knees "it was you wasn't it?" the dark mass responds with a laugh
fooly is unconcious on his desk with squad four captain attending to his wounds, fooly wakes up with a jump grabing the zan off his back and brandishing it at the squad four captain, fooly then realizes its just "belle", slowly he says "i'm... sorry" he puts the zan back on , but quickly brandishes it again this time at the door, where squad 7 lieutenant Foxuzumaki is standing, once again fooly puts the zan on his back and sits on the desk. "... you were convulsing, and wounds were appearing on your body almost like you were fighting, but you weren't healing so I brought you to your office and had susa work on you" fox said reluctantly susa chimes in "I healed most of your wounds, your back is stilled stripped of flesh" fooly winces a bit and the wound heals "I also couldn't heal your right arm, its almost like the whole arm is scarred black" she says puzzled, fooly breathes a heavy sigh and says "well i guess now is as good a time as any to tell this story" fooly waves his left arm and the office is once again replaced by a feild. fooly narrates to susa and fox "well normally on a day i would just float around or i would fish but this day something else happened, i joined pd to find my father's killer, this day i found out the truth."
a booming voice is heard to the illusion fooly to which fox and susa can hear, "jack..." fooly looks around "jack..." it says again, "to find the truth go to the cave of your forefathers" fooly looking down opens up a portal into hueco mundo, where he slowly advances to a mountain, as he moves hollows appear trying to stop his advance to which he impales his hand through their masks after a couple days he arives at a cave that is hidden to all but him, as he enters the cave he sees a zanpaktou resting vertically against a rock. fooly reaches out with his right hand to the zanpaktou to which it starts to envelop his arm with a dark aura and fooly goes unconsious, he wakes in his mind which looks like an mc escher drawing
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him laughing "well well well, the great jack sparrow, if i remember correctly is son of the late captain of squad 6..." fooly reacting quickly tries to slash the dark mass, to which the mass laughs at "you will need to do better than that if you hope to avenge..." he stops and his face changes into fooly's father "...me" fooly drops the zanpaktou and falls to his knees "it was you wasn't it?" the dark mass responds with a laugh
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Posted 11-02-2009 at 10:26 PM by 月に舞う魔人 Tsuki ni
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