Preview of new series "Half moon"
Posted 01-17-2012 at 03:30 AM by FoxTails
Updated 01-17-2012 at 03:58 AM by FoxTails (New stuff added)
Updated 01-17-2012 at 03:58 AM by FoxTails (New stuff added)
Its only a part of it though.
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A boy with black hair that is wrapped up in a ponytail is
lying on the ground unconscious. His name is Won loo,
and he appears to be poisoned. Soon, what appears to be a
human, but has orange hair, clothes, and boots, and also
has pointed ears, and wide orange eyes is covering him in
flowers, and he also puts a crown made out of flowers on
him. He then writes a note and then leaves. The boy wakes
up and reads the note. It reads “I hope you’re okay now,
I healed you and left you a gift. If you are brave enough
to come see me, you will come into the village to find
me.” The picture of the orange haired boy is left there,
and a smiley face is drawn next to it, the note also has
a sweet smell. Won loo gets up and walks out of the
forest and stumbles upon a village.
He walks through it and smells the same smell from the
note near a little house. He then goes into that little
house and the orange haired boy resides inside. He is
lying on a stone throne and is looking straight at Won
loo. The orange haired boy says “So, you were brave
enough to come see me, huh?” He then gets up and
approaches Won loo. Won loo says “Um, yeah, thanks for
saving me there.” And as the orange haired boy
approaches, he feels more nervous about him. The orange
haired boy says “Hehe, sure thing, I see you kept your
crown, I made that myself. “ Won loo takes it off and
blushes from feeling a little embarrassed. “Uh, yeah,
anyways, Mister, what is this place?” Won loo says,
feeling confused. The orange haired boy puts his hand
around him and says “This is my village, I am the prince
here, and you can call me Trinity, not Mister. I am an
elf, along with my villagers.” He says with a smirk. Won
loo gasps and says “Woah, really? How cool, so you were
able to heal me because of that?” Trinity smiles and says
“Well, you wouldn’t be alive right now if I wasn’t able
to now, would you? But, never mind that, weren’t you
looking for a necklace?”
End of preview.
This is a preview for my new series "Half moon" About an
orphan named Won loo, and his friends, Dexter, Aubree,
and Ishibi. Won loo wants to be something called a "Tai-fu champion and swordsman" which is a martial arts style, and he goes on an adventure with his friends to learn how to become one, as all the famous ones have traveled with friends before. He eventually has to retrieve a stolen necklace for a queen in order to start a ceremony for this town, but goes alone and meets the one who stole it, he gets cut by his sword and gets poisoned right before retrieving the necklace, and these events follow. Tell me what you think.
~Hannah
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A boy with black hair that is wrapped up in a ponytail is
lying on the ground unconscious. His name is Won loo,
and he appears to be poisoned. Soon, what appears to be a
human, but has orange hair, clothes, and boots, and also
has pointed ears, and wide orange eyes is covering him in
flowers, and he also puts a crown made out of flowers on
him. He then writes a note and then leaves. The boy wakes
up and reads the note. It reads “I hope you’re okay now,
I healed you and left you a gift. If you are brave enough
to come see me, you will come into the village to find
me.” The picture of the orange haired boy is left there,
and a smiley face is drawn next to it, the note also has
a sweet smell. Won loo gets up and walks out of the
forest and stumbles upon a village.
He walks through it and smells the same smell from the
note near a little house. He then goes into that little
house and the orange haired boy resides inside. He is
lying on a stone throne and is looking straight at Won
loo. The orange haired boy says “So, you were brave
enough to come see me, huh?” He then gets up and
approaches Won loo. Won loo says “Um, yeah, thanks for
saving me there.” And as the orange haired boy
approaches, he feels more nervous about him. The orange
haired boy says “Hehe, sure thing, I see you kept your
crown, I made that myself. “ Won loo takes it off and
blushes from feeling a little embarrassed. “Uh, yeah,
anyways, Mister, what is this place?” Won loo says,
feeling confused. The orange haired boy puts his hand
around him and says “This is my village, I am the prince
here, and you can call me Trinity, not Mister. I am an
elf, along with my villagers.” He says with a smirk. Won
loo gasps and says “Woah, really? How cool, so you were
able to heal me because of that?” Trinity smiles and says
“Well, you wouldn’t be alive right now if I wasn’t able
to now, would you? But, never mind that, weren’t you
looking for a necklace?”
End of preview.
This is a preview for my new series "Half moon" About an
orphan named Won loo, and his friends, Dexter, Aubree,
and Ishibi. Won loo wants to be something called a "Tai-fu champion and swordsman" which is a martial arts style, and he goes on an adventure with his friends to learn how to become one, as all the famous ones have traveled with friends before. He eventually has to retrieve a stolen necklace for a queen in order to start a ceremony for this town, but goes alone and meets the one who stole it, he gets cut by his sword and gets poisoned right before retrieving the necklace, and these events follow. Tell me what you think.
~HannahTotal Comments 4
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Posted 01-17-2012 at 03:47 AM by SakuraHaruno90
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Posted 01-17-2012 at 03:48 AM by FoxTails
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That sounds really interesting.Posted 01-17-2012 at 02:07 PM by Chaos12193
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Posted 01-17-2012 at 03:13 PM by FoxTails
Updated 01-17-2012 at 04:01 PM by FoxTails
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