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Alastor, the story of a pixie guardian. (edit)

Posted 01-24-2012 at 02:59 AM by FoxTails
Updated 01-25-2012 at 04:24 PM by FoxTails

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Alastor’s story after being released from the seal:

(This is written as if it is a storyboard, remember that.)


Part 1 title: "Guardian angel?"


Alastor has found himself released from the seal on the bracelet after 100 years ago, when Darkness, his greatest enemy, had sealed him away after killing his friend Marcus. He had tried to destroy the Light stone, but is not sure if he was sucessful. He now has no idea what to do or say to Kinu about what has happened, or how he will hide his feelings for what has happened. He feels as though Kinu could still be in danger, as Darkness may still be alive if that stone hadn't been destroyed.

“Huh, whoa, I’m…alive?” Alastor, a pixie with vibrant green hair said to himself, as he did not notice exactly how long he was sealed away, and that Kinu, a young red fox, was right beside him. He appears to have awoken beside a beach, in a town called Trandeluce, (pronounced tran-de-loose) “Wow, hey, are you okay? Who are you and what just happened? I just put on a bracelet and then you showed up.” Kinu asked curiously. “Huh. I have no idea, but I think I was just sealed up somehow, but you somehow released me..” Alastor said, feeling confused. “Huh?!” Alastor says to himself, then has a quick flashback of what had happened 100 years ago. He then gasps and then starts shaking a bit. Alastor thought to himself "Oh no, this is really really bad. What am I gonna do? I can't tell this kid about what happened, because I'm afraid of what he might think.." “Uhm, are you okay, Mister? You look pretty shaken up. Also, do you remember who you are?” Kinu says concerned. “Huh? Oh yeah..” Alastor stops shaking, but is holding in his feelings as he does not want to tell Kinu. “I am okay, but who are you? I’ll tell you first, as I might know. I am really a pixie guardian, you know? And I think I’m supposed to be protecting you.” Alastor says, as he now stands up and smiles just a bit. “Woah! Really! I’m not really so sure about you, I mean, I don’t even know if this is t-” Kinu is then interrupted as Alastor floats above him and says “Really? You don’t believe me? How about now then..?” He then comes down and stands by Kinu. “Ohh, okay, I am so sorry Mister, but, why are you protecting me?” Kinu says nervously, as he feels a little intimidated by Alastor. “Hey, you don’t call me Mister, but just call me Alastor for now, Kay? And I have no idea why I am supposed to be protecting you, but I do know this..” Alastor jumps back from Kinu and starts walking.. “Since I am supposed to be guarding you, we should, uh,” Alastor pauses for a bit and thinks about what to say next. “We should travel together, and then maybe we’ll find out why, but also find out how long I had been sealed up in this.” Alastor says as he picked up Kinu’s paw, and looks at the bracelet. Alastor really thought to travel because he wants to look for any sign that Darkness is actually alive. He also wants to make sure Kinu is safe, so he won't tell him for now.

Scene switches over here, and they are both walking along the beach,
“So. You’re my guardian? “ Kinu says, feeling confused still. “Yeah, completely certain, as I can tell.. But if we’re going to be traveling together, let’s make things a little less awkward. Would you mind if I turned you human so things look a little normal? Alastor says, as he stops walking to look at Kinu. “Sure, but, you can really do that?!” Kinu says, feeling surprised again. Suddenly, there is a flash of light, and Kinu is now a human. “Woah, did you really have to do that? I mean…” Kinu says to Alastor. “Haha, yes I did! Because, wouldn’t everyone find us suspicious if we were traveling together like this before?” Alastor says as he puts his hand on Kinu’s head. “Ah, I guess you’re right… “ Kinu says, feeling calmer now. “Oh yeah, better get rid of these wings first then..” Alastor says, and then his wings fade away.

“Oh, wow, you can do that? Then how can you fly?” Kinu asks. “Well, I can fly because my wings are just invisible, but truthfully, I can fly without them. See for yourself!” Alastor says, he then picks up Kinu and does a spin in the air, then sets him down. Kinu is laughing, as he appears to be having fun. Kinu says while still laughing, “Hehehe, you’re really silly, Alastor, you know that?” Alastor smiles and says “Haha, you’re a little out of the ordinary yourself. But, anyways, where should we head now?” Kinu says to Alastor, “ Oh, I know! We should go to Taruda, as I heard that Taruda is a really fun place, and that it’s not too far from here, and there are many secrets about it. Although I’m not sure how to get there, since the bridge is blocked off” Alastor chuckles and says “Fun, huh? Well, let’s ask around and see if someone knows how to get there. Kinu and Alastor walk into town and come across a girl who has pink hair, a black and white dress, and a black and white bonnet type hat who is sitting at a restaurant stand. Alastor says, “Excuse me, Miss, do you know how to get to Taruda?” The girl replies back by saying, “Um, I don’t really know how to get there myself, but I know a friend who knows a lot and he can tell you how to get there, his name is Desié.” Alastor replies by saying, “Ah, really? Thank you, Miss.”


The girl replies by saying, “You’re welcome, and just call me Hannah, please.” She then stands up. Alastor says, “Pleased to meet you, Hannah, I’m Alastor, and this is Kinu.” He then smiles. Hannah says, “Nice to meet you both, if you don’t mind me asking, why are you trying to get to Taruda?” Kinu is about to explain the actual reason and then Alastor interrupts by saying, “We are travelers, and best friends, we just want to travel all over the world one day, that is our story.” He then puts his arm around Kinu. Hannah walks up to both of them and says, “Oh, I see, I wish I could be like you guys. You see, I work at the hospital as a nurse, along with my friend, Desié, so I can’t really travel as much as I want to. But, enough chatting, I’ll take you to my friend, Desié, so you can ask him how to get there.” The three are now walking along a bridge on the way and Alastor asks, “Do you live here, Hannah, you appear to know this place very well.” Hannah keeps walking, then nods and says, “Why, yes, my grandmother used to take me past this route through here pretty often when I was little.” Kinu then stops walking and looks at the bridge and says, “This is pretty high up, and wobbly, are you sure this is..” He then slips through a loose board and before he falls, Alastor catches his arm and pulls him back up. “Woah, there, you better be careful, Kinu. Are you okay?” Alastor says, as he looks concerned.

Hannah runs up to them and says, “Oops! I’m so so so sorry! I didn’t know the board was loose and, oh my gosh..” Alastor reassures Hannah and says, “No, no, its fine, nobody got hurt, and you didn’t know, so everything’s okay.” Hannah replies by saying, “Oh… really? But you coulda gotten hurt and that is what really bothers me. Plus, you guys probably think bad of me for potentially putting you in danger…” Kinu says, “Ohh, its fine really, I don’t think badly of you, cause it wasn’t your fault, and, Alastor saved me, so it’s fine.” Hannah thinks to herself, “Ohh…” And the scene ends here, and switches over to the hospital, and there is a boy who is mopping the floor of what appears to be a hospital room. He has neat blond hair that is dark in some parts, and he is wearing an MP3 player and is singing to himself. He then stops and thinks to himself, “Hmm, this feeling, I sense someone approaching, but this isn’t anyone I’ve met before… Oh, this is troubling.” The boy seems to be hiding something, which is why he seems troubled. Hannah opens the door and says, “Desié, I met some people, and they want to know how they can get to Taruda.”


The boy, who appears to be named Desié looks at Kinu and Alastor and says, “Nice to meet you both, you can call me Desié, my name is pronounced Des-ay, not Des-eee, okay?” Alastor says, “Haha, nice to meet you, my name is Alastor, and this is Kinu.” Desié looks at Alastor and thinks, “Hmm, this guy… He seems a little odd, but I think he is okay for now.” Hannah says, “Desié, they are travelers and they want to know how to get to Taruda, you know a way?” Desié sets the mop down and walks over to a drawer, he then picks up a map and says, “Hmm, Taruda, huh? Well the nearest bridge had been blocked off by some trees, so I think the quickest way is if you cross the forest down here, and then go past the road here, and then go down this path… But, tell you what? Since it’s my day off today, I’ll guide you guys there, how’s that?” Alastor says, “Really? How nice of you to do that for us, but you don’t have to do all that..” Hannah says, “I’ll come too! I can tell you all the sights you can see along the way.” She then smiles. Desié says, “No, its fine, Alastor, It won’t be long, plus, I’ll have to go there anyway to pick up some stuff.” Alastor says, “Okay then, its settled, lets all go there, then.” END


This is part 1 of the story of Alastor, not sure what to call this, but for now, how about "Mainstory 1" Tell me what you think.
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    Oomikins's Avatar
    I enjoyed the conversation between the characters.

    I think you need to work on describing the environment around them a little more, it helps create an overall picture of the place(s) there are in. Adding in what a character is thinking internally also helps get a feel for what the character is really like and adds to the story.

    Otherwise, good job and I'm looking forward to what happens next!
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    Posted 01-24-2012 at 06:45 AM by Oomikins Oomikins is offline
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    FoxTails's Avatar
    Ah, thanks, I know, most of what I put on here is a work in progress, but this is just the run down of the events, I just forgot to add a lot of stuff here, so keep checking back to see.
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    Posted 01-25-2012 at 12:02 PM by FoxTails FoxTails is offline
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