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Mainstory 1, part 2(?), "Complicated training."

Posted 01-26-2012 at 04:50 AM by FoxTails
Updated 01-26-2012 at 05:00 AM by FoxTails

Read last blog to understand, please.

This happens in the part where Alastor and Kinu were on the beach. I didn't add this before since I have a habit of rushing through things and don't add some stuff.

Alastor and Kinu are both standing on the beach, Alastor says to Kinu, "Okay, first, before we go anywhere, I want to teach you something." Kinu asks, "Like what?" And smiles in anticipation.
Alastor says, "If there is ever a time we get separated, I want to make sure you know how to defend yourself. First lesson, never let an enemy get behind you, that is the worst thing that could happen." Kinu says, "Okay, understood." Alastor walks closer to Kinu and says, "Another thing, there are a few types of enemies I know of. First one is the not too serious kind, they are the ones that don't seem to threatening, perhaps they won't talk much and will attack immediately. I call this 'type 1' level enemy. They usually look kind of suspicious, and will generally avoid you unless you talk to them, then if you do then they will get 'fixed" on you, which means they will continue to follow you and try something. You understand?" Kinu says, "Oh, I see what you mean." Alastor says, "Now, there is type 2, the kind that is generally evil, they may try to talk to you for a bit and disguise that they are evil, but it is easy to see through their tricks. But, the kind you really have to worry about is type 3.." Kinu says, "Oh my, that sounds scary.." Alastor says, "Yes, very, this is the kind that is completely evil, they will have no mercy on you and will use any trick to try and capture you, they won't hold back. Their purpose is to cause destruction and trouble anywhere they go, and they love to see others in pain. This is the kind you should avoid.." Kinu hides behind Alastor and says, "Oh, no, that sounds really really, scary." Alastor says, "Yeah, but these are really, really, rare, so don't worry about it too much, okay?" He then thinks to himself, "I'd worry a lot if I was him, after all, Darkness is that very kind of evil, but many times worse, but I'd rather not tell him about that. It's already really hard for me to even think about it without getting so worked up, but I have to hide that from him, no matter what."
Kinu says, "Okay, Alastor, I feel a little better now. I will never leave your side so nothing bad will ever happen. "
Alastor moves away and says,
"Hah, agreed, I will never leave your side, and I will always protect you, no matter what. In fact.." Alastor walks away from Kinu a bit. "I rather kill myself than to let something happen to you." Kinu gasps and says, "Woah, Alastor, really? That... means a lot." He then feels a little sad by Alastor's true feelings. Alastor walks up to him then kneels down before him and says, "I'm completely serious, I can tell you believe me, at least, and that is a relief." He then stands up and says, "But anyways, I have another thing to tell you, this is really important. If an enemy somehow has you pinned against something, and there is no way out, this is a last resort option I want to teach you. It's something I would only do if really necessary, and I actually came up with this on my own. I hope this never happens, especially if we are separated somehow one day for a certain period of time."

End of this part.

How is this? This is a work in progress, so I'm not sure how this is gonna go, but tell me what you think, alright?

~Hannah
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    naitsirk0's Avatar
    Howdy, it might be nice to put your works in The Library - AnimeCrazy.net Forums - The True Anime Streaming Community it looks like you have a lot of them : o

    People are more likely to comment on works in there.
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    Posted 01-27-2012 at 04:37 PM by naitsirk0 naitsirk0 is offline
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    FoxTails's Avatar
    Thanks, but, these stories I post here are all WIPS, I will only post finished ones.
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    Posted 01-27-2012 at 04:54 PM by FoxTails FoxTails is offline
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