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poem help

Posted 11-19-2009 at 01:51 PM by genkuro
Updated 03-23-2010 at 07:14 PM by genkuro
Tags poem, poems

This is my story poem that I am writing, but i am stuck on ho to move on. I have a ending in mind but do not know how to bridge the gap. Any help and comments would be helpful.
The people in this poem are mine own. The story is my own. None of this story has been copied.


Natasha

the demon in me is free
there nothing left of the real me

ive given in to my fate
to hope is my mistake

tears of blood run down my...
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