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Posted 06-20-2012 at 11:41 PM by Genkuro
A tangled maze of self-destruction,
Shattered visions are all I’m holding.
No matter left or right it always centered,
With every breath it’s always bitter.
Behind these smiles are never clear,
The fact I have one is my weakest fear.
Pointless thoughts of dreams never obtain,
Irony so funny no need to curse in pain.
With one last laugh I open to see,
Endless mirrors simple await me.
Shattered visions are all I’m holding.
No matter left or right it always centered,
With every breath it’s always bitter.
Behind these smiles are never clear,
The fact I have one is my weakest fear.
Pointless thoughts of dreams never obtain,
Irony so funny no need to curse in pain.
With one last laugh I open to see,
Endless mirrors simple await me.
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Your writing is twisted like mine, nice
You should enter the poetry competitions on here, that is really good, dark, but good
Posted 06-21-2012 at 12:19 AM by narusasu1
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Yes, I agree with narusasu1 that you should enter the competition because this was very well written.Posted 06-21-2012 at 12:34 AM by matinthehat77 -
ya but which
fires or mines
Posted 06-21-2012 at 06:42 AM by Dany1908 - I was reffering to yours I forgot about the other one, I only pay attention the the monthly one.Quote:Originally Posted by Dany1908
ya but which
fires or minesPosted 06-21-2012 at 07:09 AM by narusasu1
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