poem help
This is my story poem that I am writing, but i am stuck on ho to move on. I have a ending in mind but do not know how to bridge the gap. Any help and comments would be helpful.
The people in this poem are mine own. The story is my own. None of this story has been copied.
Natasha
the demon in me is free
there nothing left of the real me
ive given in to my fate
to hope is my mistake
tears of blood run down my face
the darkest hell is my embraces
i cast my wings aside
the demon Natasha has arrived
Ah Satan
my wings fall off and burn away
my horn come out ive went astray
my pure black soul is nice to see
hells worst demons bow down to me
i cause pain and fear to all who love
i see despair in the ones above
the angelic blood fills the air
fallen wings every where
i see what mine past darken eyes
i pity you Natasha's flys
Natasha's Note
the light in my eyes has filled with blood
lost of hope i have won
fear is now what i control
the darken soul will take is toll
power and greed are in my hand
to take the soul of ever man
my finest day will come to soon
the purest of hearts i will consume
Mai
feathers and blood fall from the sky
Mia looks up and wonder why
she look in horror at what Natasha has done
wondering if light can return to the falling one
she hold her hands and begins to pray
hoping to light this darken day
a single cloud forms in the air
one drop of hope they hear her pray
Natasha & Mai
the cloud of hope catches Natasha eye
the light one let out a excruciating cry
he fly down with despair in heart
Mai is the only one to keep the apart
she gazes into the darken soul
her purest spirit begins to fold
the feeling in her heart start to change
Natasha smile a puppet obtained
Mai Descent
the evil flows into the holy heart
dreams and fate are torn apart
bliss and happiness turn to pain
a cleansed mind no longer obtained
the fallen lady begins to rise
the sky darken and starts to cry
she cast off her wing and dawns her horns
she glares at Natasha a new world it born
Mai's Note
i tasted evil and i am pleased
im the one to bring man to there knees
what fools you were to believe in me
your cause is lost when will you see
your heart will blacken and rot away
Natasha has let me come out and play
you stand before the purest of pain
i will corrupt your soul your life is my game
Natasha Weaken
Natasha see his lady in waiting
how her light is no long sustaining
the once pure love in her eyes
has wither away as angels cry
the pain in his soul begins to crack
pieces of feather return to his back
he become loss in dread for what has done
how could he have done this was he the one
Natasha & Mai Pt. 2
Natasha goes to his fallen love
try to heal the one from above
as Mai feels what he has to give
she pushes him away in evil she lives
she cast her dream and faith aside
Natasha plead for her good to abide
she love her power the darkness has brought
forgetting the way the lightness has taught
Natasha see his cause is at a lost
he will have her back at any given cost
Mai's Repentance
Mai turn to end this fight
to end it all this fallen night
she reaches deep into her heart
hatred pain ones damning spark
what she finds was lost to all
the sky light up and tears start to fall
she meets Natasha with a warm embraces
renewed hope on both there face
The people in this poem are mine own. The story is my own. None of this story has been copied.
Natasha
the demon in me is free
there nothing left of the real me
ive given in to my fate
to hope is my mistake
tears of blood run down my face
the darkest hell is my embraces
i cast my wings aside
the demon Natasha has arrived
Ah Satan
my wings fall off and burn away
my horn come out ive went astray
my pure black soul is nice to see
hells worst demons bow down to me
i cause pain and fear to all who love
i see despair in the ones above
the angelic blood fills the air
fallen wings every where
i see what mine past darken eyes
i pity you Natasha's flys
Natasha's Note
the light in my eyes has filled with blood
lost of hope i have won
fear is now what i control
the darken soul will take is toll
power and greed are in my hand
to take the soul of ever man
my finest day will come to soon
the purest of hearts i will consume
Mai
feathers and blood fall from the sky
Mia looks up and wonder why
she look in horror at what Natasha has done
wondering if light can return to the falling one
she hold her hands and begins to pray
hoping to light this darken day
a single cloud forms in the air
one drop of hope they hear her pray
Natasha & Mai
the cloud of hope catches Natasha eye
the light one let out a excruciating cry
he fly down with despair in heart
Mai is the only one to keep the apart
she gazes into the darken soul
her purest spirit begins to fold
the feeling in her heart start to change
Natasha smile a puppet obtained
Mai Descent
the evil flows into the holy heart
dreams and fate are torn apart
bliss and happiness turn to pain
a cleansed mind no longer obtained
the fallen lady begins to rise
the sky darken and starts to cry
she cast off her wing and dawns her horns
she glares at Natasha a new world it born
Mai's Note
i tasted evil and i am pleased
im the one to bring man to there knees
what fools you were to believe in me
your cause is lost when will you see
your heart will blacken and rot away
Natasha has let me come out and play
you stand before the purest of pain
i will corrupt your soul your life is my game
Natasha Weaken
Natasha see his lady in waiting
how her light is no long sustaining
the once pure love in her eyes
has wither away as angels cry
the pain in his soul begins to crack
pieces of feather return to his back
he become loss in dread for what has done
how could he have done this was he the one
Natasha & Mai Pt. 2
Natasha goes to his fallen love
try to heal the one from above
as Mai feels what he has to give
she pushes him away in evil she lives
she cast her dream and faith aside
Natasha plead for her good to abide
she love her power the darkness has brought
forgetting the way the lightness has taught
Natasha see his cause is at a lost
he will have her back at any given cost
Mai's Repentance
Mai turn to end this fight
to end it all this fallen night
she reaches deep into her heart
hatred pain ones damning spark
what she finds was lost to all
the sky light up and tears start to fall
she meets Natasha with a warm embraces
renewed hope on both there face
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Depends on what you'd like to end it with.Posted 11-19-2009 at 02:03 PM by jumbojer
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Posted 11-19-2009 at 02:06 PM by genkuro
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Well I don't really have an opinion. More of a branch in my head for lines it could follow.
Out of Natasha's view:
-Could turn to darkness as well, together in darkness
-Could turn to darkness, Mai sees the light, apart again
-Could kill Mai, to prove his love
-Could hug Mai, to prove his love
-Could kill himself, Mai's darkness takes over
-Could kill himself, Mai turns to light
And many more, that's why I said, it all depends on the ending sentence.
Posted 11-19-2009 at 03:51 PM by jumbojer
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