blue hell
sitting here looking at you
i see hell in your eyes
as you pull me yet deeper
into that beautiful blue
its suffocating and intoxicating
looking at you this way
an exotic prince never expected
for someone like me
it stings and thrashes at my soul
but i like how it feels
you are the elegant talented hunter
and i am a willing prey
your hands and arms surround me
as i fall to your will
the only question that still remains
will i live untill tomorrow
i know seriously free form people but i hope you like it
i see hell in your eyes
as you pull me yet deeper
into that beautiful blue
its suffocating and intoxicating
looking at you this way
an exotic prince never expected
for someone like me
it stings and thrashes at my soul
but i like how it feels
you are the elegant talented hunter
and i am a willing prey
your hands and arms surround me
as i fall to your will
the only question that still remains
will i live untill tomorrow
i know seriously free form people but i hope you like it
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wow
i really like you're poems my favourite lines are : i see hell in your eyes as you pull me yet deeper into that beautiful blue |
Posted 09-06-2008 at 04:41 PM by Starlight
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thanks i liked it too its what made me wake up this morning...lol i know dreaming poems is weird. glad you liked it
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Posted 09-06-2008 at 04:44 PM by katiana
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wow that was really good
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Posted 09-06-2008 at 04:44 PM by Takeo
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okay i commented just like you asked
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Posted 09-06-2008 at 04:49 PM by elvispacman
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Pfft..this is AweSome
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Posted 09-06-2008 at 05:38 PM by zantosx
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sweet...........i love poetry
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Posted 09-06-2008 at 07:38 PM by animegabe
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oooooooooooooo love it
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Posted 09-08-2008 at 04:38 AM by JanembaX
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Wow, beautiful
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Posted 09-08-2008 at 11:57 PM by animebuff2006
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