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The Obsidian Tower

Posted 05-28-2008 at 04:24 AM by Leiv
As a result of the amount of people who requested to read this I decided I will just blog this fantasy story I'm writing. The story is based on the Forgotten Realms series of books as they take submissions form any author. I will post each chapter as I finish it

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Prologue Part 1

The ground crunched softly beneath the exquisite black leather boots, as the light beat down upon the back of his neck. The handsome elf was attired in a Black vest and a pair of baggy black trousers. Both garments gleaming in the light of the dim sun. The vest hung loosely from his shoulders, its open front exposing the defined muscles of his chest and abs. The short silver hair that adorned his head was immaculately groomed up into small spikes, except for a single stand that fell between his vibrant green eyes. The perfectly balanced features of his attractive face were currently held in deep thought his narrow eyebrows furrowed in contemplation. Idly he rubbed the diamond stud that was twinkling in his left ear. A twin pair of scabbards bounced at his hips as he continued his walk along the barren wasteland of this layer of the abyss. Each scabbard was encrusted with twinkling diamonds that had been designed as falling stars. And his hands were hidden beneath a pair midnight colored leather gloves,
The flat land he walked upon was dry and cracked. But in the distance the sound of a roaring river could be heard, accompanied by the acoustics of a cascading waterfall, the water endlessly running off the sides of the massive platform that formed this particular layer of the hell commonly referred to as the abyss. A Sphere of swirling eldritch fire surrounded the platform providing the soft steady light.
This lithe elf looked out of place on the barren landscape of this hell. Large winged demons patrolled the sky, some took notice of the much smaller elf, but all kept a respectful distance from that particular being as he continued his casual walk towards a palace made of black crystal in the distance.
As he approached the palace the gates began to rise. Two large iron golems quickly rotated the wheel that raised the black iron portcullis, their well oiled joints gliding by each other in utter silence as to not disrupt the tranquil state of the fortress. By the time the elf made it to the entrance of his abode, the Iron Gate had disappeared completely into the wall. He walked through the entryway as the portcullis noislessly glided down behind him.
As he strolled through the courtyard, he finally paused too take in the scene around him. The scenery had drastically changed, where as outside the palace walls the land was barren and dead, inside those obsidian walls was a paradise of natural beauty. Exotic trees and plants blanketed the courtyard, with an assortment of flowers which were allowed to grow freely around the garden. Several unique creatures ran around tending to each of the floras individual needs. The scene seemed to mock the natural order, this beautiful and vibrant garden with its limitless pallet of color, was in stark contrast to the beauty of the artificial obsidian walls which surrounded it. The lone humanoid figure in this artificial natural paradise once again returned to his thoughts, and continued his way towards a pair of heavy oaken doors. Pushing his way passed the doors he calmly entered the well lit corridor that followed.
Attempts had been made to try and make these corridors more sensually appealing, a plush red carpet had been lain down with stylistic torches lining the corridors providing a warm glow. But that hard glasslike stone remained, its cold beauty making these attempts of little use. As he walked passed a passage that trailed off to the side, his ears were assaulted by the harsh cries of the tortured souls. This was the only spot in the castle that such normally demonic sounds could be heard; crude as it was, it still remained a necessity.
As he turned down another passage, out of the corner of his eyes he noticed a half-demon, the elf noticed that this particular one seemed to draw strongly from its Tana-ri heritage. The only trace of the apparent human influence that had been apart of its birth was a humanoid face that was stretched in trying to contain an overly large set of teeth, and a lack of fur. This one seemed to be of glabrezu decent, with two muscular human hands protruding from its chest, and at the end two even more muscular arms that extended from its shoulders, which ended in a pair of pincered hands. As the half fiend passed by the elf, a scroll slipped from its grasp and instinctively it brought about one of the pincered claws to catch the fragile document before it smashed onto the floor. The great limb swung out from behinds its back and would have clipped the elf’s shoulder if he had not quickly moved out of its path. The mighty half-fiend slowly turned its head its eyes landing upon the lithe figure, the bloodshot red eyes widened in fear, instead of the normal string of obscenities such a creature would normally spew forth.
“Lord Zrax,” the half-demon gasped, and began to stammer out an apology.
Zrax’s voice seemed to flow from his mouth, a soothing calm present in his voice “no Qu-izt it is perfectly fine, it was but an accident.” Zrax picked up the scroll and quickly glancing at the archaic writing scrawled upon it in some exotic violet ink, he then preceded to hand it back to the demon. “There now lets not let this happen again” that same soothing melody seemed frightening as a pleasant smile spread across the elf’s face. The twelve foot high half-fiend blinked in disbelief, and slowly backed away bowing an muttering apologies. Comedic Zrax mused to himself
Qu-izt briskly walked off, not wanting to spend another moment with Lord Zrax less his master’s mood changed. The half demon didn’t breathe again until it had disappeared around a corner. On instinct the large half-fiend took a quick nervous glance backward. Zrax had vanished. The demons eyes swirled in their sockets in vein, his desperation straining his eyes. And then every fiber of being which Qu-ist was froze when he felt the cold metal of a blade at his back. The half demon roared in fear swinging its powerful claws in an attempt to eviscerate his master, but that powerful roar became a gurgle. Qu-izt turned and tried to swipe at the smaller figure, the clawed arms falling limply to its sides and the half demon fell to its knees as second cold blade pieced its spine. Qu-izt fell to his hands and knees as the sensation of one of the blades being wrenched from its back perpetrated his senses.
“If you had a next time, I would suggest just accepting it, maybe I wouldn’t make it hurt so much,” the elf’s eyes burned red, it was as if a powerful inferno raged within Zrax’s eyes. “Or maybe I would.” With that Zrax slashed open the demon’s throat, the narrow slit gushed blood, and as the once mighty half-fiend lay their dieing. Zrax ripped his other matching blade from the creatures back, and walked off, he would have to remember to have some of the servants clean the rug.
Zrax took a right and walked down another passage till he came to a dead end. He quietly muttered a command word, and the black glasslike stone peeled itself back, to reveal a spiral staircase. Zrax nimbly climbed the long spiral stair case. Until he at last came to a corridor, adorned with high arched windows set into both sides the windows displayed the lands around the palace. He stopped and looked. He hated the lands of this insignificant endless layer of this infinite hell, dry and barren, the ground cracked like a salt flat, horrible twisted squat trees dotted the landscape. The lone exception to this dreary landscape was around the clear flowing river that surrounded the dark palace. This sole area was lush and green, he had put his gardeners hard at work to slowly convert this land from a barren desert, to a grassy plain, but the transition wasn’t easy. Earth had to be brought in from the material plain, and water was constantly being bled from the plain of water.
He turned from the arched window and headed towards the finely crafted double doors that were at the end of the corridor. The golden handles had finely carved to look like falling stars. He pushed them open and entered the lavishly adorned room. A large plush four posted bed was to one side, draped in red satin sheets, and velvet feather pillows. On each side of the bed were matching oaken cabinets, the varnish that gave them a deeply rich color still looked fresh and glossy. A desk filled with scrolls stood near a stained glass window which depicted a starry sky and a hellish fire, the whole room lay atop an expensive looking red and silver carpet. One set of doors similar to the ones he had just entered lay directly in front of him. Another pair of doors was off to his right; this led to the rest of his personal chambers.
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Prologue Part 2

Zrax pushed through the doors that lay directly in front of him. The portal gave way to another corridor formed of the same black glasslike stone. Varnished oak doors adorned the sides of the hallway. Each had an ornate depiction a falling star upon the front of the doors. Without giving much thought he pushed his way through the one closest to him and entered a fairly Spartan room. A simple wooden table was all that separated a plush satin dais and a host of similar wooden chairs. Zrax walked in and lowered himself down into the plush cushioned pillows that rested in the corner of the room farthest away from the chairs.
Soon, after he entered the room, a feint knocked broke the tranquil silence of the silent room. “Please come in,” Zrax voice melodically spoke. The far door squeaked open and a small bat like creature entered the room. The large wings were beating behind it, pushing it across the floor, its small clawed feet just barley scraping against the black stone. The things bony tail ended in a wicked barb that curved inwards, a thin drop of acidic green venom ran down the spine of the tail.
The imp’s voice screeched and cracked as it spoke, in its high pitched voice “shall I show them in my lord?” Zrax didn’t even bother to answer the wretched creature and half heartedly waved his hand towards the door. The imp, stuck it’s skull like head through the open door, and gave a quick shout, soon after two larger creature entered the room. The first looked human with long raven black, hair and dark feral eyes contrasting with his pale skin. Two fangs could be seen as it smiled and bowed.
The other wasn’t even a Tana-ri, which was the ruling class of demons in the abyss; this already put it low in this hells pecking order. It was a Nakyrien, the word translated to a very perverse form of Lore Master. Zrax controlled several of these lesser demons, they were physically frail, being literally skin and bones, but were knowledgeable in their particular fields of study. Demonic scholars essentially and most powerful Demon Lords employed at least few of the creatures, withstanding the displeasure of their company. It had the head of a large wolf, with thin patches of matted grey fur giving way to yellow bone. The demons eyes sockets where empty, the only other part of its body visible underneath the thick grimy red robe was a pair of inverted skeletal hands.
“Tyzd I want you to go and finish the matter we discussed previously.” Zrax’s eyes finally fell to the Vampire as he addressed him. “You and two of the Glooms will go and make the arrangements; any more will be notice and interfered with.” The vampire turned and dashed from the room. Tyzd simply would have teleported for the sake of brevity, but this palace didn’t allow for such magic. One of the original architects had once boasted that even the gods couldn’t penetrate the fortresses confines without using the front gate, Tyzd didn’t know if this was true, as even the gods handled affairs with Lord Zrax tenderly, and as of yet no being had actually attempted to break into the Crystal Palace.
Zrax let his eyes hold onto the sight of the sprinting vampire for the fraction of a second that is remained in the room, once the vampire had quickly and departed, He let his vibrant emerald eyes fall uponthe Nakyrien. This particular specimen was an accomplished alchemist. Demonic alchemist were much different form their mortal counterparts, they specialized more in the transmutation of souls and flesh instead of the customary metals and potions that mortals preoccupied their time with.. They were more along the lines of a scientific necromancer. Zrax didn’t really care for the Nakyrien species as a whole, but occasionally found them useful, this particular one helped manage his laboratory in the northern tower.
The thing finally realized that it was supposed to speak, “the specimen is ready lord.” This was another reason why Zrax wasn’t fond of the creatures, their voices. It had no tone, no pitch, no emotion; it was just a generic lifeless voice.
“Dismissed, go to the laboratory and wait for my arrival.” The Nakyrien turned and left. Zrax now let his gave fall upon the diminutive bat like demon in front of him, Imps were actually fairly similar to the Nakyrien physically and magically weak, but very intelligent.
The imp rubbed its boney fingers across its skull’s forehead. “Lord Infernal I am confused. Couldn’t you have done all you ordered on your own?” The imp truly was confused, not a pleasant feeling for an creature that relied on its intelligence to protect it from much larger and stronger demons in the barbaric world of the abyss. It is why his kind served as familiars for wizards, and servants for more powerful entities such as Zrax. Normally imps were malicious sarcastic little creatures; Nelzt though didn’t want to anger his current master, frustrating a wizard on the material plane was one thing, tempting a being who could obliterate Nelzt’s existence, was another.
“Nelzt please inform me as to why keeping you around is not a complete waste of my energies.” The imp gave a little gulp, flapping upwards in anxiety. Most lords in the abyss were predictable; they were going to be chaotic, angry, impatient, and violent. Zrax wasn’t. “Time passes differently here than on the material plane.” Zrax said offhandedly. Nelzt remembered now, his Lord had been “killed” on the material plane, by the fact of being an infernal creature he couldn’t return until a time limit had passed, and he had been summoned back. And more than a simple summoning circle was needed to bring forth an entity such as Zrax.
“Of course Lord, but that still doesn’t explain the use of the Nak.” The last word was spat from the imp’s thin lips.
“Nelzt this particular process could draw attention from some unwanted sources, better that it leads to a Nakyrien than my self.”
“Yes of course Lord Infernal.”
Zrax had always liked that particular title. He lithely lifted himself from his languid position on the dais, and walked from the room.
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Prologue Part 3

Zrax walked through the door, actually through it. This was one of his more favored possessions, it wasn’t particularly powerful or rare, but the Lord Infernal always appreciated ingenuity. He walked through the rows which had been organized by the magical researches that spent most of their time here. Not paying much attention to the volatile liquids that that glowed within the beakers in the darkened room, he proceeded past the desks and aisles. To his right was the skeletal form of a young dragon, a large open metal lockbox lay at its feat, in it were the brilliant golden scales the dragon had worn in life. And the things blood ran through fermentation system below it. Zrax appreciated that particular trait of dragons; every part of them was useful for something. The blood had a number of different uses, in alchemy and spells, while the scales would be forged into armor for some of his more elite troops.
Several of the palace wizards ran about tending to various experiments, and concoctions. They ranged from humans, to a few undead, and a grumpy half demon, that favored its dwarf heritage. Once they noticed that the Lord of the castle had graced their presence, all fell silent, and still. The Nakryien was over a stone table pouring various potions, and applying salves over a corpse, a drip system had been worked up that ran tubes through the body. Zrax didn’t bother to look at this as he walked towards the stone table and positioned himself on the far..
“Pull the tubes.” Zrax said. The Nakyrien gestured with its skeletal hands and two of the human apprentices ran forwards and started to remove the tubes that ran through the body. As each of the individual conduits exited blood splattered the floor, as the heart pumped the blood through the veins and arteries. It appears the Nakyrien had lived up to what it had promised, the body had been brought back to life, but right now it was slightly less than a living zombie. It was a theory that Zrax had wanted to attempt for a number of centuries, if the body was brought back with limited use of either the direct use of divine or arcane magic, in theory would make it harder for the God of the Dead and the God of Magic to recognize that a soul was being brought back to life. Hopefully it worked, the last thing that Zrax needed at this stage of his plot was Kelemvor or Mystra to sense he was doing something like this.
Zrax slowly closed his bright green eyes and began his chant, his hands pressed tightly together with his index fingers resting against the bridge of his perfect nose. As the rhyme rolled from his tongue the already darkened room, grew darker, as if the light was water running through cracks in the floor. The various apprentices, wizards, and alchemists in the room were hypnotized by the arcane mastery being shown before them. It was known that the most powerful clerics could occasionally return the dead to life, for it to be done with arcane magic was almost unheard of. The chant picked up speed the ancient words rolling from Zrax’s tongue. As the chant increased its speed the final glimpses of light were sucked from the room, draping the laboratory in a veil of darkness. Still the chanting reverberated through the darkened room, now underlined by a soft humming. As the spell continued and the hum grew in volume, a soft golden glow faded into existence in the room, but the golden glow of the light didn’t illuminate anything, it was just a light in darkness. The glow was then slowly pulled into a sphere that was anchored in place in the air above where Zrax’s head would be if the darkness didn’t hide everything from sight. Suddenly the room was bathed in harsh silver light, as if the newly formed ball was a small sun.
Now the only movement came from Zrax’s left hand as he reached up to grab the golden sphere of light, his palm gently wrapped around it as if grabbing a child’s plaything. But regardless his arm began to shake with the difficulty of trying to move the glowing sphere downwards. Each inch that the golden ball was brought down towards the body, produced a writhing black tentacle that grew from the surface of the ball, and by the time the golden sphere had traveled half the distanced it was enshrouded in a writhing mass of darkness, it was as if the ball was consciously fighting the movement to its destination. The ball was now moved down another notch, the tentacles seemed to explode from their writhing mass, shooting outwards groping, latching on to anything their blind bodies happened to touch. Soon after several screams and gasps came forth from the macabre audience, as several of the spectators narrowly dodged the initial barrage of black writhing shadow. Zrax finished his chant with a soft song of a syllable barley audible over the now torrential hum of the golden ball, and screams of the others in the room. The Nakryien stood at its corner of the table and leaned towards its master.
“Perhaps a scarify Lord Infernal.”
Zrax nodded in agreement, his hand which wasn’t involved in the struggle with the ball of light snaked forward towards the demonic alchemist, one of Zraxs short swords had somehow appeared in his hand, and with a looping slash he severed the Nakryien’s arms cleanly at their respective shoulders. The lesser demon didn’t even have time to let out a gasp of surprise, it attempted to grab for its lost arms, but nothing was there to grab with. Zrax pulled his sword back, both arms balanced along the blade at the elbow, and with a flick of his wrist he tossed them upwards into the roiling mass of dark arms which stuck out from the golden sphere. The tentacles consumed the skeletal arms of the Nakryien, hungrily devouring the appendages. And with that they vanished. The resistance of the ball evaporated and Zrax slammed the glowing golden ball of light into the chest of the corpse.
The newly incarnated man crashed to the floor as the stone table split in two. He began to fling about wildly, the arms flailing at nothing as the torso twisted and turned, the legs kicking wildly, slamming into the stone beneath him. He rolled over onto his stomach and lifted himself onto his arms as vomit spewed forth from his coughing sputtering mouth, green and yellow liquid was continuously coughed up onto the floor. The man’s head turned around as he looked at his “saviors”, his dark eyes wild with a mixture of emotions.
Zrax stepped over the crumpled form of the Nakyrien, nursing trying to nurse its missing limbs, yellow puss coming forth from inside the bones. Zrax leaned down starring the man in his eyes. A entertained smile curling his lips.
“On behalf of Hell I welcome you back to life.”
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Posted 05-28-2008 at 04:25 AM by Leiv Leiv is online now
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Oh ya btw if you read this can you leave your opinion of it please
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Posted 05-28-2008 at 04:35 AM by Leiv Leiv is online now
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i liked....good work
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Posted 05-28-2008 at 10:06 AM by dany_elle1908 dany_elle1908 is offline
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OMG its very good leiv!!! i like the way its written... like describing every little thing.... but you managed not to make it boaring.... aawesome..
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Very nice. Hope you write some more.
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lol i like it i find it uuhhh "interesting" that the Lord and Leiv look,dress, and act virtually identical but ya its good
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Posted 06-04-2008 at 04:37 AM by Hollow Master Hollow Master is offline
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Despite your grammatical, spelling and punctuation errors (sorry I'm quite picky when it comes to writing -_-)you’ve described the characters and settings superbly that it feels like I’m Alice myself, lol.

May I ask whatever Kelemvor, Mystra, and Tana-ri are things you’ve made up or from your studies and reading?

Didn’t know your prologue will be this long though! Haha. I look forward in reading the rest of the chapters
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i read one paragraph and it didnt really catch my attention.... no offense to u but ya good luck on the story ^_^
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