Less We Forget the Sun
I gaze up into the whirl-wind beauty of the night;
the shadowy wraiths of clouds blending shades of black,
the glistening stars of this cold night twinkle back,
to my eyes, who wonder and dazzle in their delight.
Though the stars were bequest of glistening light
and this wondrous night has all the elegance of an aristocrat,
the comfort of the sun was missing and so on the grass I sat
With this mysterious soothing...

Hey all I did a heavy revision of one of the previose stories that I have posted here. It is a lot cleaner, and I feel overal better some aspects have been cleared up and others have been removed or made more dramtic. The story also gained about two pages from all the editions. Well I hope everyone who reads it will enjoy and be sure to leave a comment telling me what they think.

Part 1

Daniel yearned for the biting feel of the chilled autumn wind upon his cheeks as...

Hey all new story is written and so as per request I am posting it up. This one is the longest as of yet. This one is a little raw due to the result of the time contraints I had to do it in, and teh fact that halfway through I lossed half of it and had to rewrite it at six in the morning so it hasn't been proofread as much as I would like, but still I love the concepts explored within it

ENJOY



Requiem for Tomorrow
His parents were dead now,...

Ok heres my next story sorry its a week late but didn't like the one I wrote last week. This one is a bit less raw than usual but as always needs work. I hope you enjoy it

When I was young I was asked to do a paper on the morality of Euthanasia, at the time I naively saw it as a sign of personal weakness to resort to suicide. Just the thought of not fighting to the bitter end appalled me. I had been brought up admiring the final stands of histories heroes. How the Spartans fought...

Ok this is a different type of story. This one is also still raw and needs work as well sorry.

WARNING this one is quite dark and has sone disturbing content.

PART 1

ECHO


The white hum of the florescent lights always hurt his eyes. Eric always felt as if he was blind when he was around them. The light radiating all around him, small blinding rays of flickering light slowly pulsing their way into the back of his head, distorting...