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What has happened

Posted 05-24-2012 at 04:46 PM by maria58
Updated 06-28-2012 at 04:35 PM by maria58

That trembling in my bones,
Every time i think about the pain
Every tender passion lit up in flames
From an enchantment to an abomination
How many more hearts are you gonna break?
Repulsive you must have felt, didn't you?
In my arms but thinking about someone new

How do i ask for anyone's affection?
When all i feel is your haunting from every direction
To trust someone with my love again
Has been destroyed from every end
When i see another man, my blood turns cold
My broken heart cant keep the score
To wonder, if he may treat me the same or worse then before
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    ammara's Avatar
    nice poem
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    Posted 05-24-2012 at 04:55 PM by ammara ammara is offline
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    nice poem
    thankyou ammu
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    Posted 05-24-2012 at 04:55 PM by maria58 maria58 is offline
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    rest_revive's Avatar
    uhh nice one ~
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    Posted 05-24-2012 at 05:06 PM by rest_revive rest_revive is offline
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    uhh nice one ~
    thankyou pink retarded clapping pony
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    Posted 05-24-2012 at 05:12 PM by maria58 maria58 is offline
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    NioChan's Avatar
    I love your tone can you read mine please
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    Posted 05-24-2012 at 07:51 PM by NioChan NioChan is offline
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    Y do your poems have pain in them
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    Posted 05-24-2012 at 08:28 PM by CrazeOP CrazeOP is offline
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    FireclawX's Avatar
    all poems are either super super happy, or painful... thats what makes them poems worth reading...
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    Posted 05-24-2012 at 09:39 PM by FireclawX FireclawX is offline
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    I know but she has too much pain in her life atm I think

    Oh I think the bones is something else in this poem , or a pain equivalent to the pain of bones shredding , or I need a nap , yes its nap I need , my brain can't get this poem stuff and it won't mind getting in near future too
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    Posted 05-24-2012 at 09:46 PM by CrazeOP CrazeOP is offline
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    I know but she has too much pain in her life atm I think

    Oh I think the bones is something else in this poem , or a pain equivalent to the pain of bones shredding , or I need a nap , yes its nap I need , my brain can't get this poem stuff and it won't mind getting in near future too
    hahahah craze its like u know me to well
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    Posted 05-25-2012 at 03:33 AM by maria58 maria58 is offline
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    i know you too well must be my lucky day
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    Posted 05-25-2012 at 09:23 AM by CrazeOP CrazeOP is offline
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    i know you too well must be my lucky day
    thats creepy bt i like it
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    Posted 05-25-2012 at 09:28 AM by maria58 maria58 is offline
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