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Alone to be

Posted 05-25-2012 at 12:59 PM by maria58
Updated 05-25-2012 at 01:02 PM by maria58

This creature of the night
With long black hair and big brown eyes
Where ever she strolled, died heart broken men
She saw nothing but fantasies in there heads

I have lived in vein for centuries
To reunited with this bewitching beauty
Who had cursed me with an undying heart
As i was the first man to ever touch that stone cold work of art

She thought she would never love
As everyone was blinded by thirst
I did not show her any affection
She finally knew she had met perfection

She lingered around me all the time
Asking for her hand in mine
I refused and told her im already engaged
I can not manage any affairs

In anger she said some magic words
Made me a living corpse, to walk down this earth
Only a true loves kiss, could set me free
But now, who would want to be with someone as dead as me

My love ran away, after looking at my hideous face
I wept till all my tears had ran away
This creature had disappeared, no where to be found
I have been alone, without love, without a house
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  1. Old Comment
    NioChan's Avatar
    You my friend
    are simply
    AMAZING!!!!!!!
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    Posted 05-25-2012 at 02:46 PM by NioChan NioChan is offline
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    Quote:
    Originally Posted by NioChan View Comment
    You my friend
    are simply
    AMAZING!!!!!!!
    hahaha thankyou best comment ever <3
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    Posted 05-25-2012 at 02:53 PM by maria58 maria58 is offline
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    BloodDrunk's Avatar
    *steals, composes, and performs this as my own*
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    Posted 05-25-2012 at 03:00 PM by BloodDrunk BloodDrunk is offline
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    maria58's Avatar
    Quote:
    Originally Posted by BloodDrunk View Comment
    *steals, composes, and performs this as my own*

    hahahha *hides it*
    sing wid me
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    Posted 05-25-2012 at 03:01 PM by maria58 maria58 is offline
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    BloodDrunk's Avatar
    Sure. Can you growl? :'D
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    Posted 05-25-2012 at 03:02 PM by BloodDrunk BloodDrunk is offline
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    maria58's Avatar
    Quote:
    Originally Posted by BloodDrunk View Comment
    Sure. Can you growl? :'D
    to some limit yes
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    Posted 05-25-2012 at 03:05 PM by maria58 maria58 is offline
  7. Old Comment
    BloodDrunk's Avatar
    Great, you're in.
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    Posted 05-25-2012 at 03:08 PM by BloodDrunk BloodDrunk is offline
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    Quote:
    Originally Posted by BloodDrunk View Comment
    Great, you're in.
    yay
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    Posted 05-25-2012 at 03:10 PM by maria58 maria58 is offline
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    Fireflyy's Avatar
    Omfg , Maria im speechless! <3
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    Posted 05-25-2012 at 03:20 PM by Fireflyy Fireflyy is offline
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    Omfg , Maria im speechless! <3
    really
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    Posted 05-25-2012 at 03:21 PM by maria58 maria58 is offline
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    I cried so much
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    Posted 05-25-2012 at 10:40 PM by fireflame2009 fireflame2009 is offline
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    Quote:
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    I cried so much
    awww flames
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    Posted 05-26-2012 at 04:38 AM by maria58 maria58 is offline
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    dean1999's Avatar
    u can write
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    Posted 05-27-2012 at 03:48 PM by dean1999 dean1999 is offline
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    u can write
    go away -.-
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    Posted 05-27-2012 at 05:11 PM by maria58 maria58 is offline
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    Shikamaruuu's Avatar
    Heartbreakingly beautiful! You've a wonderful gift there Maria dear. I look forward to reading more : ).
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    Posted 05-30-2012 at 04:32 PM by Shikamaruuu Shikamaruuu is offline
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    HighPiece's Avatar
    i'm speechless after reading this..
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    Posted 05-31-2012 at 07:19 AM by HighPiece HighPiece is offline
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    i'm speechless after reading this..

    thanku HP
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    Posted 05-31-2012 at 07:21 AM by maria58 maria58 is offline
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    Originally Posted by Shikamaruuu View Comment
    Heartbreakingly beautiful! You've a wonderful gift there Maria dear. I look forward to reading more : ).
    thankyou
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    Posted 05-31-2012 at 07:21 AM by maria58 maria58 is offline
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    You are awesome!
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    Posted 10-21-2012 at 11:35 PM by 7saxophone 7saxophone is offline
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