失礼します!
Recycler (poem)
Posted 03-29-2012 at 07:36 PM by Rokyoku
A gunfight in the elevator brings us down to the earth
My crime was a grand theft of the undertone
These were nothing but loaned words from wiser men
Auxillary messages from our dead audience
I cried for the very first time when the womb spat me out
I waited for my turn to be baptized in a pool of sharks
Climbed down from the tree just to walk on glass and rubble
Smiled with a piece of paper saying "will work for food"
After hours discussions with men of future
A clean tie strangling the sound to whispers
Of what was promised to me by my mothers tears
I want to see it shatter
My crime was a grand theft of the undertone
These were nothing but loaned words from wiser men
Auxillary messages from our dead audience
I cried for the very first time when the womb spat me out
I waited for my turn to be baptized in a pool of sharks
Climbed down from the tree just to walk on glass and rubble
Smiled with a piece of paper saying "will work for food"
After hours discussions with men of future
A clean tie strangling the sound to whispers
Of what was promised to me by my mothers tears
I want to see it shatter
Total Comments 6
Comments
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Your poems always leaves me with a puzzle feeling, while I like your style of writing very much it does gives me goosebumps in a good way of course
Posted 03-29-2012 at 09:10 PM by Luna15
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There are so many ways to interpret this that I can't settle on a singular.
I'm very intrigued to think of where your thoughts were as you wrote this....but equally I enjoy the feeling that it is open to interpretation.
Regardless of that I think it is a wonderful piece...made me think for a while. =)Posted 03-29-2012 at 09:48 PM by Yuri Hyuga -
I just saw a short movie in my head about a homeless guy. : OPosted 03-30-2012 at 09:17 AM by Dirtyah -
As always your talents have no end Kyo. It felt apocalyptic to me...definitely a thought provoker. I do wonder what inspired you to produce this piece : o.Posted 03-30-2012 at 09:41 AM by Shikamaruuu -
Thanks all for reading ^^.
Hehe, this one i will keep a secret, but it was an experiment. More like experimenting with emotions to bring something up
Posted 03-31-2012 at 08:22 PM by Rokyoku - Now I'm intrigued more than ever! You sure know how to dangle that carrot :P.Posted 04-01-2012 at 09:13 AM by Shikamaruuu
