alright, never done this before so i welcome [I]constructive[/I] criticism [I]only[/I]
what can i say?
i'm 15. i enjoy anime (obviously). i live in canada and i am extremely Pro-war. i don't mean i like the war in iraq, i just mean i think war is great. a war every now and then is a healthy thing i believe.
anyways, for religious beliefs... let's not go there. suffice it to say, you believe what you want, i'll believe what i want. it's just easier that way:)
now, the reason i ever came to AC was to watch two anime in specific that i couldn't watch on my TV. the first one was (and say what you want but i thought it was great) Ouran High School Host Club. my favorite character on the show was Kyouya Ootori because he was consistently evil (still a protagonist though) and those are my favorite kinds of characters.
the second one was Gunslinger Girls, an anime my brother informed me of. to those who have not seen it, let me give you a rundown of the first episode: a girl and a guy in an apartment building, they knock on a door, a gangster comes out and threatens the guy, then the little girl whips out a P20 submachinegun and annihilates everythin in that room. pretty sweet huh? although, now you can't watch it on AC because i think they removed it:mad:
so ya, thats me, and thats why i fisrt came here. then i checked out a chat thread, and decided to stay. any questions?
what can i say?
i'm 15. i enjoy anime (obviously). i live in canada and i am extremely Pro-war. i don't mean i like the war in iraq, i just mean i think war is great. a war every now and then is a healthy thing i believe.
anyways, for religious beliefs... let's not go there. suffice it to say, you believe what you want, i'll believe what i want. it's just easier that way:)
now, the reason i ever came to AC was to watch two anime in specific that i couldn't watch on my TV. the first one was (and say what you want but i thought it was great) Ouran High School Host Club. my favorite character on the show was Kyouya Ootori because he was consistently evil (still a protagonist though) and those are my favorite kinds of characters.
the second one was Gunslinger Girls, an anime my brother informed me of. to those who have not seen it, let me give you a rundown of the first episode: a girl and a guy in an apartment building, they knock on a door, a gangster comes out and threatens the guy, then the little girl whips out a P20 submachinegun and annihilates everythin in that room. pretty sweet huh? although, now you can't watch it on AC because i think they removed it:mad:
so ya, thats me, and thats why i fisrt came here. then i checked out a chat thread, and decided to stay. any questions?
PD - The Assassination of the Gotei 13 Chapter 4
Posted 07-30-2009 at 09:14 PM by Runne666
[B][U][CENTER]Chapter 4 - Alert The Media[/CENTER][/U][/B]
Squad 10 Captain Hitsugaya Toushiro vanished into thin air, moving so swiftly he was invisible to the naked eye.
Squad 1 Sergeant Commander White was just as swift, simply twisting his arm and pressing his released zanpakutou against his back, stopping the steel of Hitsugaya's own released blade in it's tracks.
"They always go for the back. So predictable," White sighed, flaring his immense reiatsu, forcing the Squad 10 Captain to his knees.
Hitsugaya's eyes widened as he collapsed, unable to move beneath the boulder of reiatsu resting on his back. White spun lightly on his heels, pointing the curved tip of his released Zanpakutou at Hitsugaya's throat.
"You know [I]Shiro-chan[/I]," White mocked. "I didn't think it was possible, but you actually look shorter down there."
Hitsugaya let out a small growl of irritation, deep in his throat. He inhaled deeply, and closed his eyes for a moment.
"Ban-kai" Hitsugaya said simply. He leapt into the air, his reiatsu pushing against White's on equal terms now. "Daiguren Hyōrinmaru," Hitsugaya continued, glaring down at White, icy wings adorning his back and frozen claws stretching down his arms to the hilt of his Zanpakutou.
"The strongest Ice-type zanpakutou in Soul Society," White whistled, his scythe resting on his shoulder. "Impressive. Psycho Cutter." White flicked his wrist forwards, releasing his Scythe which spun so rapidly it appeared as one bladed circle. it shot up at Hitsugaya, sawing right through Hitsugaya's left arm before he even had time to react. Hitsugaya's remaining hand shot to his left shoulder, eyes wide with shock as he collapsed down to the ground again.
"This power..." Hitsugaya struggled to speak. "It's... not possible!" He shouted.
"I'd tell you you're wrong, but actions do speak louder than words," White winked mockingly at Hitsugaya as he snapped his fingers, and the Psycho Cutter bent downwards, approaching from behind Hitsugaya and sawed through his remaining arm.
Hitsugaya's eyes shook, darting back and forth as he realized his fate. White stepped past him, seemingly absent-mindedly holding his scythe out to the side, catching Hitsugaya around the throat.
"Sorry kiddo. I've got bigger fish to fry." White placed a single Marigold flower in Hitsugaya's haori, and pulled his Scythe forward, cutting deep into Hitsugaya's throat.
[CENTER]Elsewhere, a little later that night.[/CENTER]
12 Hell Butterflies fluttered in the night, back towards the Captain-Commander's chambers, followed rapidly by eleven Squad Captains.
"Where is Squad 10 Captain Hitsugaya Toushiro?" The Old man croaked, looking directly at a young officer from Squad 10.
"He.... he's dead Captain-Commander, sir." The Officer replied.
There were murmurs of shock and amazement around the room, and even a snicker from Squad 12 Captain Mayuri Kurotsuchi.
"What did you say?" The Captain-Commander opened a single eye to glance at the young Officer before him.
"The boy's right," A figure said from the other side of the main door, leading into the meeting room. The door flew open, and a man none of the Captains had seen before strolled through.
Everyone, except the unidentified man, reached for their weapons. "No no put those away," the figure waved his hand dismissively. "Squad 10 Captain Hitsugaya Toushiro is dead. As is his Lieutenant Matsumoto Rangiku, Squad 3 Lieutenant Kira Izuru, and Squad 13 Unseated officer Rukia Kuchiki."
More murmurs around the room, some of the Captains held the hilts of their weapons firmly. "I told you, those won't be necessary. I am not here to kill you... [I]yet.[/I]" The figure's last word caused several Captains to tense up, including a furious Byakuya Kuchiki. It also prompted another snickering laugh from Mayuri Kurotsuchi.
"How fascinating, just who are you? And what has brought you here?" Mayuri inquired gleefully.
"Captain-Commander of Pure Destruction, Runne666. And I am here," Runne bowed. "TO STRIKE DOWN UPON THEE WITH GREAT VENGEANCE AND FURIOUS ANGER" Runne roared inside the large room, raising his reiatsu level so that the earth itself seemed to quake in fear. When it seemed that every Captain's eyes widened in fear, he wide grin spread across Runne's face as his body and clothing flashed a deep black colour, and he melted into the ground.
[CENTER][B][U]To Be Continued[/U][/B][/CENTER]
Squad 10 Captain Hitsugaya Toushiro vanished into thin air, moving so swiftly he was invisible to the naked eye.
Squad 1 Sergeant Commander White was just as swift, simply twisting his arm and pressing his released zanpakutou against his back, stopping the steel of Hitsugaya's own released blade in it's tracks.
"They always go for the back. So predictable," White sighed, flaring his immense reiatsu, forcing the Squad 10 Captain to his knees.
Hitsugaya's eyes widened as he collapsed, unable to move beneath the boulder of reiatsu resting on his back. White spun lightly on his heels, pointing the curved tip of his released Zanpakutou at Hitsugaya's throat.
"You know [I]Shiro-chan[/I]," White mocked. "I didn't think it was possible, but you actually look shorter down there."
Hitsugaya let out a small growl of irritation, deep in his throat. He inhaled deeply, and closed his eyes for a moment.
"Ban-kai" Hitsugaya said simply. He leapt into the air, his reiatsu pushing against White's on equal terms now. "Daiguren Hyōrinmaru," Hitsugaya continued, glaring down at White, icy wings adorning his back and frozen claws stretching down his arms to the hilt of his Zanpakutou.
"The strongest Ice-type zanpakutou in Soul Society," White whistled, his scythe resting on his shoulder. "Impressive. Psycho Cutter." White flicked his wrist forwards, releasing his Scythe which spun so rapidly it appeared as one bladed circle. it shot up at Hitsugaya, sawing right through Hitsugaya's left arm before he even had time to react. Hitsugaya's remaining hand shot to his left shoulder, eyes wide with shock as he collapsed down to the ground again.
"This power..." Hitsugaya struggled to speak. "It's... not possible!" He shouted.
"I'd tell you you're wrong, but actions do speak louder than words," White winked mockingly at Hitsugaya as he snapped his fingers, and the Psycho Cutter bent downwards, approaching from behind Hitsugaya and sawed through his remaining arm.
Hitsugaya's eyes shook, darting back and forth as he realized his fate. White stepped past him, seemingly absent-mindedly holding his scythe out to the side, catching Hitsugaya around the throat.
"Sorry kiddo. I've got bigger fish to fry." White placed a single Marigold flower in Hitsugaya's haori, and pulled his Scythe forward, cutting deep into Hitsugaya's throat.
[CENTER]Elsewhere, a little later that night.[/CENTER]
12 Hell Butterflies fluttered in the night, back towards the Captain-Commander's chambers, followed rapidly by eleven Squad Captains.
"Where is Squad 10 Captain Hitsugaya Toushiro?" The Old man croaked, looking directly at a young officer from Squad 10.
"He.... he's dead Captain-Commander, sir." The Officer replied.
There were murmurs of shock and amazement around the room, and even a snicker from Squad 12 Captain Mayuri Kurotsuchi.
"What did you say?" The Captain-Commander opened a single eye to glance at the young Officer before him.
"The boy's right," A figure said from the other side of the main door, leading into the meeting room. The door flew open, and a man none of the Captains had seen before strolled through.
Everyone, except the unidentified man, reached for their weapons. "No no put those away," the figure waved his hand dismissively. "Squad 10 Captain Hitsugaya Toushiro is dead. As is his Lieutenant Matsumoto Rangiku, Squad 3 Lieutenant Kira Izuru, and Squad 13 Unseated officer Rukia Kuchiki."
More murmurs around the room, some of the Captains held the hilts of their weapons firmly. "I told you, those won't be necessary. I am not here to kill you... [I]yet.[/I]" The figure's last word caused several Captains to tense up, including a furious Byakuya Kuchiki. It also prompted another snickering laugh from Mayuri Kurotsuchi.
"How fascinating, just who are you? And what has brought you here?" Mayuri inquired gleefully.
"Captain-Commander of Pure Destruction, Runne666. And I am here," Runne bowed. "TO STRIKE DOWN UPON THEE WITH GREAT VENGEANCE AND FURIOUS ANGER" Runne roared inside the large room, raising his reiatsu level so that the earth itself seemed to quake in fear. When it seemed that every Captain's eyes widened in fear, he wide grin spread across Runne's face as his body and clothing flashed a deep black colour, and he melted into the ground.
[CENTER][B][U]To Be Continued[/U][/B][/CENTER]
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poor toushiro T_T
wow,didnt know that you cant write the stories this good
Posted 07-30-2009 at 09:24 PM by memica
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......some part of me wishes people were going up against other members of the group. Still quite entertaining if a bit cheesy.
Posted 07-30-2009 at 09:25 PM by GeneralArrow - [quote=GeneralArrow;bt43150]......some part of me wishes people were going up against other members of the group. Still quite entertaining if a bit cheesy. :D[/quote]
rofl you get that in the sparring thread. not that it's any less cheesy there :p:D
besides, sometimes the Cheesy stuff, is the best stuff ^^Posted 07-30-2009 at 09:27 PM by Runne666 - Oh I know, theres a reason why I didn't trash it lol. Cheesy is good. Esp on Nachos.Quote:Originally Posted by Runne666
rofl you get that in the sparring thread. not that it's any less cheesy there
besides, sometimes the Cheesy stuff, is the best stuff ^^Posted 07-30-2009 at 09:29 PM by GeneralArrow -
I don't like it anymore.
Posted 07-30-2009 at 09:35 PM by Hitsugaya` -
dude.. i so wana be in this....Posted 07-30-2009 at 09:35 PM by Garraofduhfunk -
Damn! white did you have to be so mean to poor little hitsugaya?
I soo want to be in this now!Posted 07-30-2009 at 10:55 PM by jsquared130 -
nice runne-samaPosted 07-30-2009 at 11:30 PM by Andre_Nintendo08 - This was amazing!
best out yet!
Great job!Posted 07-30-2009 at 11:42 PM by -
Impressive...Posted 07-31-2009 at 07:35 PM by Urary -
because as nice as i can be i can also be one hell of a heartless bastard...Quote:Originally Posted by jsquared130 Damn! white did you have to be so mean to poor little hitsugaya?
I soo want to be in this now!
EPIC WIN! Nice workPosted 08-01-2009 at 04:57 AM by White
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