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Story of the fallen kingdom chapter 1

Posted 06-02-2009 at 02:47 PM by SilverShadow

i was bored so i decided to write to a story, names will mostly be ripoffs since im bad at names. Oh and if u find grammar and spelling errors good for you.


One day in the kingdom of Stormwind during a lavish banquet celebrating princess Diana's 17 birthday,king Muradin's only daughter,a messenger rushes into the ball room to give the king an important message.
"MY LORD , i apologize for interrupting your party but i have dire news from the eastern borders" sayed the messenger while trying to catch his breath.
The king obviously displeased with this interruption gave a cold stare to the messenger asking him what could be so important as to disturb his daughters birthday.
"I humbly apologize my lord but its about the bandit raids on the border villages" replied the messenger.
"You dare interrupt my banquet for a few bandit raids" shouted king Muradin.
The messenger fully aware of his kings impatience and cruel methods tried to quickly calm him down by telling him the rest of the message.
"That is the problem your highness, they were not bandit raids they were actualy soldiers from the neighbouring kingdom of Dranor, were being invaded my lord!",the messenger barely had time to finish telling his story when the king lashed out in anger: " THOSE FILTHY SWINES!! how dare they.I want all of them put to the sword, leave none alive!".
A middle aged(in his 30's) fairly tall, medium built man with short black hair and brown eyes stood up and asked the king for permision to go stop the attacks.
"AH! General Adrian what a splendid suggestion, take your White Dragons and crush those fools" replied the king.
"As you wish my lord" replied Adrian while takeing a small bow, then leaving the room while a young man(2o years max) of medium stature slim built medium length brown hair and green eyes rushed after him.
"Michael,gather the soldiers" sayed Adrian with a stern voice to the man following him.
"Right away sir" answered Michael, as he dashed off to gather the soldiers.
As Michael reached the White Dragon barracks on of the soldier shouted at him with a friendly comical tone: " Hey captain shouldn't you be at the banquet flirting with the princess".
Michael blushed a little but then he remembered what he was here for. " This is no time for jokes, we got to get ready since were leaving towards the eastern border to deal with the invasion" replied Michael.
"Sure thing captain we will get ready but while we do it mind telling us how it went with the princess" jokingly sayed another soldier, at which Michaels face turned red again. " Enough already guys we got work to do and its not like she would pick me out anyway, im not even of noble lineage" sayed Michael getting a bit depressed. Adrian had just walked in and overheard there conversation and while giving everyone a cold stare sayed: " Enough fooling around we have an attack to stop". A reply spoken with a slightly ironic friendly voice was heard," Scary as ever aren't you, commander" the reply came from a short slim built man about the same age as Adrian with long blond hair which was lieing down on a bench and playing with a knife. "Carefree as always aint you vice-commander Judea" sayed Adrian with a sharp tone. " OH come on don't be so cold, there almost done anyway,all that's left is to give the young captain some love advice " sayed Judeau as a joke." Fine, lets go we got a few hours till we get there!" shouted Adrian.

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    Dany1908's Avatar
    who cares about the grammar mistakes u didn't saw mines haha

    nice .....
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    Posted 06-02-2009 at 04:39 PM by Dany1908 Dany1908 is offline
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    erazeN's Avatar
    Silver writing a story?
    What has the world come to?
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    Posted 06-02-2009 at 04:46 PM by erazeN erazeN is offline
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    Posted 06-02-2009 at 06:01 PM by Yuukee Yuukee is offline
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    SilverShadow's Avatar
    Quote:
    Originally Posted by erazeN View Comment
    Silver writing a story?
    What has the world come to?
    rofl what you prefered me writing racist jokes

    thx dany
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    Posted 06-02-2009 at 06:01 PM by SilverShadow SilverShadow is offline
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    Rupks's Avatar
    seems good so far...
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    Posted 06-02-2009 at 06:32 PM by Rupks Rupks is offline
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    fouskas182's Avatar
    ok screw the manga i want to see what happens next^^
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    Posted 06-02-2009 at 06:47 PM by fouskas182 fouskas182 is offline
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    Duude... I don't log in for a day and you get so bored you write a story?!
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    Posted 06-02-2009 at 10:16 PM by BlazeCommanderASCE BlazeCommanderASCE is offline
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