I dont know but read
Posted 09-04-2008 at 12:39 PM by Souske5
The darkness is soul is a never ending hole growing deeper and bigger every second i hold i mark my self with my thoughts of you Knowing i can never be with you again The sadness grows then theres more woes Missing you every second of everyday all i have to say is i miss you i want you back
I realize i suck this isent neccesarily a poem its just something i wrote when i was thinking of someone
I realize i suck this isent neccesarily a poem its just something i wrote when i was thinking of someone
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I would class it as a poem
poems dont need 2 rym, poems are just expressions of your feelingPosted 09-04-2008 at 12:47 PM by eschulz
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mmm i do that too!!1 its like thoughts put onto nice words that make it sound like a poem but its not!!! i thought i was the only one that did that!! i love it.. its really good!Posted 09-04-2008 at 08:19 PM by susa_24 -
its alright
tweak it alittle bit
and it will be awesomenessPosted 09-05-2008 at 12:15 AM by Darkerthenmysoul?
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