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Tranquility

Posted 07-08-2010 at 03:15 PM by Spicynoodle
Updated 07-08-2010 at 07:37 PM by Spicynoodle

Well, i'm bored. Decided to make up a short story on the spot since i have an interest in writing (though english isn't my prominent subject). I'd rather try my best without planning and let my imagination take place. The articulation that my brain wants to be released is etching through my hands, thus a story shall be written.

Tranquility: Chapter One
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Snow was thought as our world, our only world, wearing away all the atrocities and sins of man kind - melting away everything corrupt and manifesting it into some enchanting, something worth all the suffering. It was her favorite season, she taught me so much. I made a promise that i'd stay strong, that i wouldn't cry over such a thing. Kazuki fighting!

"Kazuki-kun!"
"Kazuki-kun, wake up you imbecile! We're late for school!"

"Just a minute, sweety pie. I'll give you some lovin', come here with those beautiful leg..." The boy stirred, oblivious to reality - half asleep, half-brained.

"UGHHH, BAKA!"
The feminine figure lifted up her leg and thrusted it foward to an unlikely victim's face.
-SMASH-

The male layed butt-first on the wooden ground, still half asleep. His amber hair looked as though it'd been in a war fighting to get away from the emptiness of the cranium it layed recumbent on. Drool was exposing from his moist lips; ostricized.The female figure grasped the boy's collar, unamused, and dragged him into the kitchen.

"Hurry up, Kazuki. If you foil my perfect attendance record, i'll be pissed."

"Prolly the only thing you have to look foward too. I have my gratitude towards you, m'lady." Kazuki let out a sigh of ascendency. "Oh, and by the way, the hairs on your leg are showing. Goes well with that manly face of yours." He smirked, bowing his head and sprinted out the door.

"KAZUKIIIII!"


Chapter two is up!
http://www.animecrazy.net/forums/blo...apter-two.html



Well, that took up a good 20 minutes. :3 Tell me if you guys like it and i'l make a chapter 2. ^^;
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    Pad Frank's Avatar
    I approve : o
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    Posted 07-08-2010 at 03:28 PM by Pad Frank Pad Frank is offline
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    Tsunade46's Avatar
    I second tht ,,,do write some more : p
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    Posted 07-08-2010 at 03:43 PM by Tsunade46 Tsunade46 is offline
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    Lucian Silver's Avatar
    I don't.

    Make chapter 2 and I will too :O
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    Posted 07-08-2010 at 03:44 PM by Lucian Silver Lucian Silver is offline
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    naruto846's Avatar
    I lahhhkkk. Do make a chapter two. ^.^
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    Posted 07-08-2010 at 03:52 PM by naruto846 naruto846 is offline
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    animeluver22's Avatar
    Vary good! ^.^ make chapter 2!!!
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    Posted 07-08-2010 at 04:03 PM by animeluver22 animeluver22 is offline
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    Lord Revan's Avatar
    thats pretty funny.. : D
    although, put a little more bang for the dollar.
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    Posted 07-08-2010 at 04:22 PM by Lord Revan Lord Revan is offline
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    Spicynoodle's Avatar
    o:
    thanks guys!

    haha, i didn't think i'd get this many responses from such a rushed subject. haha.
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    Posted 07-08-2010 at 04:49 PM by Spicynoodle Spicynoodle is offline
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    Spicynoodle's Avatar
    double blog post.
    Chapter 2 is up! d:
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    Posted 07-08-2010 at 05:44 PM by Spicynoodle Spicynoodle is offline
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    Random Ms K's Avatar
    "jus a minute sweety pie"
    at that, you had me. now on to the next chap!
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    Posted 07-08-2010 at 06:34 PM by Random Ms K Random Ms K is offline
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