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Waves In The Sea

Posted 12-14-2008 at 10:56 PM by susa_24
Updated 12-15-2008 at 12:32 AM by susa_24

Happiness has come and gone
Like a wave in the sea,
It reached my toes and fell back from where it came
As I saw it coming, I was looking forward to it
As it saw it getting closer, I took one step closer,
As it hit me, I wished the moment lasted forever
As it stayed with me, I really thought it would last forever
As it started leaving, I took one step closer again, so it wouldn’t leave me just yet
As it kept leaving, I started to feel abandoned.
As I saw it leaving, I felt useless in this world.
As it disappeared into the big sea, I realized nothing lasts forever,
And as I realized that, another wave reached my toes,
And as it reached my toes, I discovered happiness may leave,
But it always comes back, just like the waves in the sea.

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    X HARDCORE X's Avatar
    its great ^_^
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    Posted 12-14-2008 at 10:56 PM by X HARDCORE X X HARDCORE X is offline
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    Snowchildkitty's Avatar
    that's true........
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    Posted 12-14-2008 at 10:57 PM by Snowchildkitty Snowchildkitty is offline
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    susa_24's Avatar
    thanks!!!!
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    Posted 12-14-2008 at 10:58 PM by susa_24 susa_24 is offline
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    yeah thats a great poem
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    susa_24's Avatar
    thanks
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    Posted 12-14-2008 at 11:09 PM by susa_24 susa_24 is offline
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    Scapeman198's Avatar
    awesome poetry
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    Posted 12-14-2008 at 11:10 PM by Scapeman198 Scapeman198 is offline
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    susa_24's Avatar
    again, thanks alot
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    Posted 12-14-2008 at 11:13 PM by susa_24 susa_24 is offline
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    elvispacman's Avatar
    i feel that this relates to somethign
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    Posted 12-15-2008 at 01:56 AM by elvispacman elvispacman is offline
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    susa_24's Avatar
    like what elvis?
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    Posted 12-15-2008 at 02:07 AM by susa_24 susa_24 is offline
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    mimzy's Avatar
    i like it ....that was so nice ...i didnt know you can write poems...
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    Posted 01-12-2009 at 04:11 AM by mimzy mimzy is offline
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    susa_24's Avatar
    i can and sumtimes i do some very nice ones
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    Posted 01-17-2009 at 01:48 AM by susa_24 susa_24 is offline
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