A Poem, It Has No Name Yet
Posted 01-04-2009 at 05:34 AM by susa_24
And here i am, climbing a rooftop
After all I've been through,
Slipping and falling off now doesn’t look so bad.
But its new year, I can start again,
With no regrets, quick,
Make your resolve before its twelve.
Can't think of anything?
I'll help you, seek for happiness,
Too late, the fireworks have started.
What's this?
It’s a huge one,
But I can't hear the explosion
Here it comes, BOOM
I was waiting for it,
The roof trembled,
Car alarms and dogs barking.
Quick, its not too late yet,
Look behind you, your mom's waving
"Happy new year"
Good, that’s a start, talk to her.
Wave back, there we go,
"Happy new year dad"
Great. This is a good start for the New Year.
Come on, don’t be stupid
You can't expect this year to be bad
When it is bad, you'll know, not before it is.
BOOM, another one,
This has been going on for a while
The roof trembled again,
What if the house collapsed?
Would anyone care?
Would I survive?
BOOM,
Red, green and yellow flashes
Appear in the dark sky
That is now filled with smoke.
Quick, before they're over,
Make a resolve,
Think of happiness, its not that hard.
Be careful, don’t fall off now,
BOOM.
They are so pretty, aren’t they?
Yes, they are.
I'm scared, won't they fall over us?
I'm scared; I don’t want to start a new year.
Pen, paper, I need to write this down.
I don’t what this thoughts inside of me,
Quick, don’t cry in New Year.
January first, how I hate that date.
BOOM, come on, look at the fireworks,
You won't explode with them, come on,
They look so close, and they are.
"Happy" Shh, don’t speak now.
It should be happy, why isn’t it?
Come on now, don’t dry in New Year.
Quick, before they're over,
Make a resolution.
Don’t look back now,
they shouldn’t see you like this
But what if they should?
Come on now, don’t do this today,
Think about this tomorrow.
No, tomorrow is a new year,
I want this gone tomorrow.
You are so naïve Susa,
It won't be gone anytime soon.
I wanted this gone before 2009.
Its not, now, quick, make a resolution.
NO! I don’t want to think about this now.
If not now when?
Never…
Fireworks, they are really pretty.
It's amazing; I don’t want to look away.
BOOM, the roof trembled again.
Some big, some small, but they all end the same way.
Stop changing the subject,
You have to make a resolution.
No, I don’t want a resolution.
Great, they are over, what will you do now Susa?
That is a question I cannot answer,
Not even to myself,
What will I do now that the fireworks are over?
Start by climbing down of this roof of death, will you?
Take those shoes off, you'll slip and it’s a long way down.
Now, hug everyone
And wish them a happy new year.
Don’t tell me what to do,
I can do it on my own.
I doubt that, you haven’t done anything.
On my own…. Exactly….
Oh, and, Susa…
Happy New Year
i'm not sure its a poem, but i had to get this off my chest and i wrote it down, it may be confusing. Maybe they're jsut messed up thoughts
After all I've been through,
Slipping and falling off now doesn’t look so bad.
But its new year, I can start again,
With no regrets, quick,
Make your resolve before its twelve.
Can't think of anything?
I'll help you, seek for happiness,
Too late, the fireworks have started.
What's this?
It’s a huge one,
But I can't hear the explosion
Here it comes, BOOM
I was waiting for it,
The roof trembled,
Car alarms and dogs barking.
Quick, its not too late yet,
Look behind you, your mom's waving
"Happy new year"
Good, that’s a start, talk to her.
Wave back, there we go,
"Happy new year dad"
Great. This is a good start for the New Year.
Come on, don’t be stupid
You can't expect this year to be bad
When it is bad, you'll know, not before it is.
BOOM, another one,
This has been going on for a while
The roof trembled again,
What if the house collapsed?
Would anyone care?
Would I survive?
BOOM,
Red, green and yellow flashes
Appear in the dark sky
That is now filled with smoke.
Quick, before they're over,
Make a resolve,
Think of happiness, its not that hard.
Be careful, don’t fall off now,
BOOM.
They are so pretty, aren’t they?
Yes, they are.
I'm scared, won't they fall over us?
I'm scared; I don’t want to start a new year.
Pen, paper, I need to write this down.
I don’t what this thoughts inside of me,
Quick, don’t cry in New Year.
January first, how I hate that date.
BOOM, come on, look at the fireworks,
You won't explode with them, come on,
They look so close, and they are.
"Happy" Shh, don’t speak now.
It should be happy, why isn’t it?
Come on now, don’t dry in New Year.
Quick, before they're over,
Make a resolution.
Don’t look back now,
they shouldn’t see you like this
But what if they should?
Come on now, don’t do this today,
Think about this tomorrow.
No, tomorrow is a new year,
I want this gone tomorrow.
You are so naïve Susa,
It won't be gone anytime soon.
I wanted this gone before 2009.
Its not, now, quick, make a resolution.
NO! I don’t want to think about this now.
If not now when?
Never…
Fireworks, they are really pretty.
It's amazing; I don’t want to look away.
BOOM, the roof trembled again.
Some big, some small, but they all end the same way.
Stop changing the subject,
You have to make a resolution.
No, I don’t want a resolution.
Great, they are over, what will you do now Susa?
That is a question I cannot answer,
Not even to myself,
What will I do now that the fireworks are over?
Start by climbing down of this roof of death, will you?
Take those shoes off, you'll slip and it’s a long way down.
Now, hug everyone
And wish them a happy new year.
Don’t tell me what to do,
I can do it on my own.
I doubt that, you haven’t done anything.
On my own…. Exactly….
Oh, and, Susa…
Happy New Year
i'm not sure its a poem, but i had to get this off my chest and i wrote it down, it may be confusing. Maybe they're jsut messed up thoughts
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oh... if u have an opinion about it plz post, i dont care if its bad...Posted 01-04-2009 at 05:40 AM by susa_24
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Sounds nice, New years passed lol XD, and i think this could be a song ^^Posted 01-04-2009 at 05:40 AM by Tyeboi777 - u think so???Posted 01-04-2009 at 05:42 AM by susa_24
- yeah, just needs a beat......and a solo.or two solos
Posted 01-04-2009 at 05:44 AM by Tyeboi777 - hahaha... and a chorus..Posted 01-04-2009 at 05:45 AM by susa_24
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i think im gonna start doing the poem thing too cuz on new years i was in church just brainstorming and i couldnt stop until church finished lol somebody just give me a subject and ill do whatever comes to mindPosted 01-04-2009 at 05:57 AM by baller05 - yeah, it feels really good when you have alot on your mind and you write it down.... you should just write whats on your m,ind baller, anything that you want out...Posted 01-04-2009 at 06:03 AM by susa_24
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well looks more like a song is very nice i like itPosted 01-04-2009 at 08:48 AM by Dany1908 -
yeah i agree..if this had a chorus i'd think it's song lyrics
still cool thoughPosted 01-04-2009 at 08:52 AM by DeathView -
it was good, all of my writing is dark and depressing
Posted 01-04-2009 at 10:02 AM by kashshaptu -
that was lovely bellePosted 01-04-2009 at 11:42 AM by vesta
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