Breaking Point (Poem)
You realise what you've come here to do,
You wish i did too.
Spit it out already,
Do not tell me you have a speech ready.
I love you,
You wish you did too.
But face it honey, you don't.
So please, hurry and get to the point.
Breaking up for you means nothing,
Because in this game i was the one betting everything.
Just say it, stop playing.
Or do you wish to keep pretending?
You want to keep toying
With feeling that arent yours.
But all you'll bring in time are tears,
From eyes that dont belong to you,
But all i wish is that they streamt down your eyes, too.
Don't say you're sorry, admit it.
You were lying from the start, face it.
And even though you knew i was lovesick
You went and smashed my heart with a brick.
Save it, i dont want to be your friend,
Not right after you said this is the end.
Just leave already,
I'm not in the mood to talk to you, really.
No, there is nothing you can do,
So just leave, dont say you dont want to.
This sickness has no cure,
So just walk yourself to the door.
I dont want to see you again,
Atleast, not until i'm done hating men.
Again, if you think of a name plz tell me
You wish i did too.
Spit it out already,
Do not tell me you have a speech ready.
I love you,
You wish you did too.
But face it honey, you don't.
So please, hurry and get to the point.
Breaking up for you means nothing,
Because in this game i was the one betting everything.
Just say it, stop playing.
Or do you wish to keep pretending?
You want to keep toying
With feeling that arent yours.
But all you'll bring in time are tears,
From eyes that dont belong to you,
But all i wish is that they streamt down your eyes, too.
Don't say you're sorry, admit it.
You were lying from the start, face it.
And even though you knew i was lovesick
You went and smashed my heart with a brick.
Save it, i dont want to be your friend,
Not right after you said this is the end.
Just leave already,
I'm not in the mood to talk to you, really.
No, there is nothing you can do,
So just leave, dont say you dont want to.
This sickness has no cure,
So just walk yourself to the door.
I dont want to see you again,
Atleast, not until i'm done hating men.
Again, if you think of a name plz tell me
Total Comments 7
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Hiatus...or Breaking PointPosted 01-22-2009 at 04:36 AM by Kain
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ohh thanks!!!Posted 01-22-2009 at 04:38 AM by susa_24 - Welcome...I'll read your other unnamed poem later...they seem interestingPosted 01-22-2009 at 04:39 AM by Kain
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nice poem
u write them long is goodPosted 01-22-2009 at 06:04 AM by Dany1908 - thanks dany!Posted 01-22-2009 at 06:34 AM by susa_24
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oh susa, very well done. i really enjoyed this poem.
Posted 01-22-2009 at 12:29 PM by vesta - u did?? awesoome!!!!Posted 01-23-2009 at 01:03 AM by susa_24
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