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a poem

Posted 02-19-2012 at 02:35 AM by sweetk

The night sky,
creeping with beautiful light,
these amazing stars gazing attentively at me,
thousands maybe millions,peeping through the sky.
A full moon huge and bright can't deny it, an extremely thrilling site.
the grass soft and green,seedlings peeking their heads up high.
The wind gentle and cool,
as the trees swayed with those mouthwatering fruits, Unfortunately there was no way i could've eaten them.They were way to high in the tree.
An innocent girl surrounded by the dark creatures of the night,
Lonely and fragile running around,
in the tiny cornfield where there was no light,
A dark figure appeared on this very night.
Her accelerating heart,piercing out her chest.
Her trembling leg, her sweaty palm, her breathing fast enough to suffocate her.
The figure came closer, shouting her name.
She felt like surrendering but her legs didn't want too.
They moved so quickly,
nearly tripping off the stairs.
she opened the door and felt safe at last.
She searched for the figure and was astonished to see that it was
only her mom.
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    nagato yuuki's Avatar
    Nice poem, lol at the ending. Good one
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    Posted 02-19-2012 at 02:39 AM by nagato yuuki nagato yuuki is offline
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    sweetk's Avatar
    thanks
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    Posted 02-19-2012 at 02:57 AM by sweetk sweetk is offline
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    Fireflyy's Avatar
    Wow nice, but mom x'D lol
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    Posted 02-19-2012 at 03:31 AM by Fireflyy Fireflyy is offline
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    fireflame2009's Avatar
    lolz nice m.m
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    Posted 02-19-2012 at 04:31 AM by fireflame2009 fireflame2009 is offline
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    spiriter's Avatar
    rofled at the last bit XD
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    Posted 02-19-2012 at 08:13 AM by spiriter spiriter is offline
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    Sissy's Avatar
    Lol :]
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    Posted 02-19-2012 at 04:04 PM by Sissy Sissy is offline
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    Glacier's Avatar
    it is very good
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    Posted 02-22-2012 at 04:36 AM by Glacier Glacier is offline
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    sweetk's Avatar
    thank you everyone
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    Posted 03-04-2012 at 06:14 PM by sweetk sweetk is offline
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    Beautiful poem
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    Posted 03-16-2012 at 01:27 AM by Marker Marker is offline