Thought I'd share (the 1st part of) a chapter of a story I'm working on. Warning: this is over 700 words long.

Chapter 1: A Return Carriage
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Kaiyako "Kai" ('Child of Forgiveness')

Kaiyako is the younger sister of Mika and is the main protagonist of Kaiyako Chronicles. However she is not Mika's full-blooded sister, they share the same father but different mothers. Their father slept with another women and together they conceived a daughter and he took the shame that came with it, as well as the responsibilities that came with his new child and lover. But after her birth, Kai's mother died. She was given the name...

It started a few days after she found the stone; Kai began to talk to herself…or was she talking to the stone? I could never tell. But ever since that day, I haven't been able to sleep through the night with out waking up wet with sweat––and crying. On the night of my seventeenth birthday, I woke up like I did every night, but the dream wasn't the same as before…it was different.


I could feel the wind blow gently on my face as I ran to the fields. The trees whispered...

Hey, so...

Ya, I'm probably gonna use my blog as a place to post a story that I'm writing right now. It's not a fanfic or anything, just something that popped in my head and I really like where it's going (I just actually have to write it) ^ ^

So I hope you enjoy the story so far and check out my album for pictures I've made, some are characters for this story.

-Aneko ^ ^

There once lived two peasants and they were twins. Their names are Yoi and Gin. They one day met Lisa and Misa who are also twins. They were so beautiful and Yoi fell in love with Misa and Gin fell in love with Lisa.

Later that day they again saw those girls. This time Yoi asked out Lisa and Gin asked out Misa. These guys were good looking and were twins, so the girls accepted their proposals.

The next day Yoi went on a date with Misa and Gin went out with Lisa. This...