Poems
Posted 06-30-2009 at 03:16 PM by tokyomk1
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This is a poem I had to do for class so I thought I would share it with you. I think it's bad, but somehow it managed to get a A+.
I had always knew,
that it wouldn’t be caught.
I always knew what it would do.
It always flew.
With myself I fought.
I had always knew,
I searched for a crew,
For my old one had left me in a boiling pot.
I always knew what it would do.
My heart felt like goo.
For happiness, I sought.
I had always knew
I always knew it would never come true
My heart was left to rot.
I always knew what it would do.
I felt I had lost a lot,
I had always knew
I always knew what it would do
*please tell me what you think*
This was one of my favorite poems. (I was sad when it only got a B.)
I had always knew,
that it wouldn’t be caught.
I always knew what it would do.
It always flew.
With myself I fought.
I had always knew,
I searched for a crew,
For my old one had left me in a boiling pot.
I always knew what it would do.
My heart felt like goo.
For happiness, I sought.
I had always knew
I always knew it would never come true
My heart was left to rot.
I always knew what it would do.
I felt I had lost a lot,
I had always knew
I always knew what it would do
*please tell me what you think*
This was one of my favorite poems. (I was sad when it only got a B.)
A Piece of Light
Alone in fear he sits in the corner.
Darkness surrounds him whispering words of hate.
He picks himself up and takes a few blind steps forward.
The darkness trips him with it laughs of cruelties putting him back where he started.
He closes his eyes and lets the tears run down his cheeks.
A tiny glow breaks through, and slowly turns into a shining light.
The light pushes the darkness away into the corners of his mind.
He opens his eyes and looks up to see the shining face of friendship.
*don't forget to give me feedback!*
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lol, I think both of 'em are awesome
you is a gr8 poet girl keep it up, hey do your wanna enter a poetry contests that will be coming out soon? it's just fer fun and it's on AC, you got a good chance of winning it Posted 06-30-2009 at 03:46 PM by J.K.Murphy
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some nice poems u have there
u should enter my poem contestPosted 06-30-2009 at 04:19 PM by Dany1908 - yeah see she knows her stuff she's quite the poet to ya know and Dany is the one running the contest too the me and her and probs a few other will be droning on about to every tom dick and harry going
Posted 06-30-2009 at 05:43 PM by J.K.Murphy
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