[CENTER][size="7"]EVER HEAR THE NAME [COLOR="DarkRed"]ULTI?[/COLOR][/size]
[size="5"][COLOR="Blue"]NO? WELL WELCOME TO[/COLOR][/size]
[size="7"][COLOR="Red"]HELL[/COLOR] *****!!!!![/size]
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[size="7"]Now prepare for [COLOR="DarkRed"]SUFFERING!!!![/COLOR][/size][/CENTER]
[size="5"][COLOR="Blue"]NO? WELL WELCOME TO[/COLOR][/size]
[size="7"][COLOR="Red"]HELL[/COLOR] *****!!!!![/size]
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[size="7"]Now prepare for [COLOR="DarkRed"]SUFFERING!!!![/COLOR][/size][/CENTER]
Ehh...boredom got me to write...
Posted 08-20-2011 at 07:10 PM by ultimentman2
It's dark, darker than dark. Almost pitch black, I held my hand out in front of me. I tried desperately to find a light switch, or some form of illumination. Desperately I searched, scouring my hands all over the place, until I finally bumped something and it hit the ground. I quickly reached the the item and picked it up. I ran my hand over it, and I could tell it was a flash light. I quickly looked for the switch on it, and turned it on.
I waved the light around, I could tell I was in a room of some sort. I saw what looked to be a window, and I ran over to it. I threw aside the blinds, and pulled up the window. I tried to reach out of it, but I felt a wall as I tried. It felt to be brick, and cement. I knew I wouldn't be able to escape from here. I flashed the light around again, looking for another exit.
Then I saw a door! I quickly to the door, I feverishly tried to open it, fiddling with the knob and any other locks or assortment of handles on the door. I finally got it to unlock and open, as it opened it swung faster than I thought I had pushed it open, and I fell onto the ground outside of the door. I quickly closed my eyes, and tried to stop my body from falling, but I didn't react quick enough. I landed on the ground with a loud thud, surprising even myself. As I opened my eyes, I could see a person standing in front of me. He was wearing what looked like a suit and tie, like he was a butler or attendant of some sort.
I could see him looking down at me, with this face of perplexity. Wondering what in the world I was doing, I rolled over onto my back and while staring up at him, I asked, very bewildered where I was.
A puzzled look rolled over his face, like the waves roll in on the beach, and in a soft yet commanding voice he said "My lord, we are at your vacation home". This perplexed me massively, who was this man who called me "Lord", and where was the vacation house. I quickly got up and ran to another window, and opened the blinds enough that I could see out. I saw what looked to be a beach, though I was still confused. "Who am I? Where am I? What am I doing here?" These thoughts raced through my mind until that man in a suit and tie came up behind me, and placed his hand on my shoulder. It startled me back into reality, he looked at me with concern in his eyes "My lord, are you alright." He asked, sounding very concerned.
"I am your lord?" I asked, puzzled.
"yes, my lord." he replied. "Are you ok, my lord?" he asked again.
I knew that something was happening and that this body I was in wasn't my own. As I looked at him, and then at myself. I could see that this body was quite muscular, it seemed to be very well defined and up-kept.
"Yes..." I replied slowly to this man, who I had assumed to be an attendant for whomsoever body I had been placed inside of. He smiled, and had me follow him back to the room which I had broken out of.
He reached inside the door, and I heard a click of some sort and the room became bright with light. I could see a impressive bed, a very nice dresser and many other luxuries that I had never seen before.
"Sir, it's time for you to get dressed. So turn around and I shall help you change." He said to me, which made me almost have an audible gasp. I was unable to make sense of what was going on, but I followed his command. Like it was almost a natural every day thing.
I turned around, and he quickly unbuttoned the shirt I had on, and slipped off the night pants I was wearing. I was amazed at how fast he worked, in a matter of minutes he had stripped me out of the night clothes I had on and put me into the clothes of what appeared to be a prince would wear.
"There you go, my lord." He said as he finished.
"thank you..." I said slowly in return, still staring in a conveniently placed mirror, at the body which I had been placed in. I looked myself over and over, and I still could not believe that this was my own body. The body I knew wasn't this well defined. I had a pretty skinny body, more built up from fighting at school and around the neighborhood I lived in. This body appeared to be built from hours of rigorous work outs and specially planned meals or something of the sort.
Ok, gonna stop here for now >_>
I'm starting to get bored of writing this, but I have a general idea of where I could take it, though I'll only continue if I get like 5 actual comments >.>
I waved the light around, I could tell I was in a room of some sort. I saw what looked to be a window, and I ran over to it. I threw aside the blinds, and pulled up the window. I tried to reach out of it, but I felt a wall as I tried. It felt to be brick, and cement. I knew I wouldn't be able to escape from here. I flashed the light around again, looking for another exit.
Then I saw a door! I quickly to the door, I feverishly tried to open it, fiddling with the knob and any other locks or assortment of handles on the door. I finally got it to unlock and open, as it opened it swung faster than I thought I had pushed it open, and I fell onto the ground outside of the door. I quickly closed my eyes, and tried to stop my body from falling, but I didn't react quick enough. I landed on the ground with a loud thud, surprising even myself. As I opened my eyes, I could see a person standing in front of me. He was wearing what looked like a suit and tie, like he was a butler or attendant of some sort.
I could see him looking down at me, with this face of perplexity. Wondering what in the world I was doing, I rolled over onto my back and while staring up at him, I asked, very bewildered where I was.
A puzzled look rolled over his face, like the waves roll in on the beach, and in a soft yet commanding voice he said "My lord, we are at your vacation home". This perplexed me massively, who was this man who called me "Lord", and where was the vacation house. I quickly got up and ran to another window, and opened the blinds enough that I could see out. I saw what looked to be a beach, though I was still confused. "Who am I? Where am I? What am I doing here?" These thoughts raced through my mind until that man in a suit and tie came up behind me, and placed his hand on my shoulder. It startled me back into reality, he looked at me with concern in his eyes "My lord, are you alright." He asked, sounding very concerned.
"I am your lord?" I asked, puzzled.
"yes, my lord." he replied. "Are you ok, my lord?" he asked again.
I knew that something was happening and that this body I was in wasn't my own. As I looked at him, and then at myself. I could see that this body was quite muscular, it seemed to be very well defined and up-kept.
"Yes..." I replied slowly to this man, who I had assumed to be an attendant for whomsoever body I had been placed inside of. He smiled, and had me follow him back to the room which I had broken out of.
He reached inside the door, and I heard a click of some sort and the room became bright with light. I could see a impressive bed, a very nice dresser and many other luxuries that I had never seen before.
"Sir, it's time for you to get dressed. So turn around and I shall help you change." He said to me, which made me almost have an audible gasp. I was unable to make sense of what was going on, but I followed his command. Like it was almost a natural every day thing.
I turned around, and he quickly unbuttoned the shirt I had on, and slipped off the night pants I was wearing. I was amazed at how fast he worked, in a matter of minutes he had stripped me out of the night clothes I had on and put me into the clothes of what appeared to be a prince would wear.
"There you go, my lord." He said as he finished.
"thank you..." I said slowly in return, still staring in a conveniently placed mirror, at the body which I had been placed in. I looked myself over and over, and I still could not believe that this was my own body. The body I knew wasn't this well defined. I had a pretty skinny body, more built up from fighting at school and around the neighborhood I lived in. This body appeared to be built from hours of rigorous work outs and specially planned meals or something of the sort.
Ok, gonna stop here for now >_>
I'm starting to get bored of writing this, but I have a general idea of where I could take it, though I'll only continue if I get like 5 actual comments >.>
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Hum...12 views, and I'm betting nobody actually read it ~_~Posted 08-20-2011 at 08:20 PM by ultimentman2
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Posted 08-20-2011 at 08:33 PM by temariboi15
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Well since somebody does seem to actually be interested, i'll turn this from a blog to a thread.
That way I'll have more of a character limit per post, cause if I remember right a blog is limited to somewhere around 1,000 or something of the sort.Posted 08-20-2011 at 09:17 PM by ultimentman2
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Posted 08-21-2011 at 12:13 AM by Yuri Hyuga
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[COLOR="Black"]lol, yeah I did a test blog just C&P'ing the same word over and over to see what the limit was and it seems it was raised to 10,000 characters. As for threads posts, idk what the limit is but man the thread I made probably exceeded 10k characters.
[/COLOR]Posted 08-21-2011 at 02:32 AM by ultimentman2
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. And I want to read the rest
