Lucy! the unwanted child
Traped between a burning town and a vast ocean i began to think how will i get of this perdicament.
*building start's to fall towards me*
Vega:I HATE MY LUCK!!!!!!!!!!!
i start runing with building falling around dodging one burning wood after another untill something cut me in the shoulder not feeling anypain i kept on running thinking
Vega: please don't die please don't die
with the heat from the fire hindering my sight i saw what appear to be a sign. I ran towards it to see which way was out. As i got close to it there was a figure under it. I kept on running towards it when i got there the figure changed into a little girl crying i went up to her
Vega: what are you doing here?
little girl: *still crying* they tied me here
Vega: what?
i looked at her hands they were tied to the pole. I dug through my pockets to see if i can find something useful but came up empty. I got on my knees and started trying to untie her.
Vega: stop crying!!!!!
with the heat becoming unbearable i tried my hardest to untie her with more then five nots tying her to the pole. i got the first two undone. then she started yelling
Vega: SHUT UP SHUT UP
little girl: the fire is here
Vega: what?
i looked back to see hell on earth.
Vega: god damnit
i started moving faster not realize the blood coming from my fingers. i got the third not
Little girl: hurry!!! hurry please hurry
Vega: i am doing my best here
i got the fourth one
Vega: *thinking* yes one more
all the sudden my shoes started burning.
Vega: AAAA
i tried to get my shoes off but the fire was face to face with me. my skin started to burn from face but all i could think of was not letting this little girl die. i left my shoes and started untying the not my feet started to burn inside my shoe. finally i got the last not with not a second too soon. we ran but my feet were burning so i threw my shoes i tried to run after the little girls but my feet gave up on my so i started crawling on my knee.
Vega: HEY help me!!!!
but she was long gone. I crawled after her footprints with the fire inchs behind me. My knees started bleeding
*start's to cry*
Vega: damnit is this how i die?
still crawling like a helpless child i saw a road out of town. i got up with all my strength determinant to make it out alive i ran ran with all the fiber in my being. when i got out of town i started to faint. before i hit the ground i heard some voice stay
Unknow voice: So your finally ou.....
few seconds later i was in tunnel it was all dark and cold.
Vega: where am i now? am i death?
the tunnel started to light up and a figure started to appear it was very very small but with each second it got bigger and bigger and bigger untill it was bigger then me. Then i started to fall inside it freefalling faster i tried to yell but i couldn't hear anything. i tried to yell again but no voice then i heard a voice different from my voice i followed it. to a bright light.
Vega: I DON'T WANT TO DIE
i woke up yelling with cold sweat
unknow voice: hahahaha your not death.
Vega: what?
i looked down started counting all my fingers 1,2,3...10. searched through my body just to make sure everything is there. with a sigh of relief i fall back
Vega: ouch!!
unknow voice: go easy now you still have 3rd degree burns on your head.
looked at the voice and it was that little girl.
Vega: you!! why did you leave me you asshole?
little girl: i love my life too much
Vega: huh? what a stupid reason whatever so you got a name?
Little girl: my name is Lucy
Vega: so where is everyone?
Lucy: they all left
Vega: and your parents?
Lucy:i don't know where they are
Vega: how annoying!!! ok kid good luck i am going.
Lucy: where are we going?
Vega: WE?? there is no we there is only I
i got up took one step then a sharp pain went up my body bring me down.
Vega: AAAAAA
Lucy: you dumbass don't move your feet got burned remember.
then it all hit me back the fire, my feet getting burned, my knees bleeding.
Vega: Damn damn damn damn damn!
i punch the ground and another sharp pain went through my body
Vega: AAAAAAA
Lucy: stop hitting things!!! stay here
she left me then came back with a table that had wheels.
Lucy: Come on get on we can't stay here we will die if we do.
Vega: and how do you want me to do that??
Lucy: man up and get on
Vega: "man up and get on" i will man you up you stupid little kid come here and help me.
she came around and tried to help me get up but she was no use i could feel how weak she was. So i got on the table and she started pushing it. she kept on pushing it untill we got to a town that was few miles away.
Vega: hey kid do you know where we are going?
Lucy: stop calling me kid. we are going to james town.
we came into town all dirty and stinky everyone around us looking at us like we are some low-life beings. Without a warning someone threw a rock at lucy.
Rock thrower: get out of here you devil
everyone: yea get out here
everyone started throwing rock's at us
Vega: AAA you bastards AAAAAA
but lucy kept on walking with rocks hitting her. she started to bleed from her head. i looked back at her to see the pain in her eyes i crawled on my elbows to cover her from the rocks. after some minutes we were out of town i let go of her but she kept on pushing. few minutes later we came up on a small house she stoped there.
Lucy: ok come on get's go
she offered me her shoulder. i grab with pertending i was getting help from her we walked to the front door she knocked
Lucy: Doctor open up please Doctor!!
the door started to up and out came yasoo
~~~~~To be conintued~~~~~~~~~~~
*building start's to fall towards me*
Vega:I HATE MY LUCK!!!!!!!!!!!
i start runing with building falling around dodging one burning wood after another untill something cut me in the shoulder not feeling anypain i kept on running thinking
Vega: please don't die please don't die
with the heat from the fire hindering my sight i saw what appear to be a sign. I ran towards it to see which way was out. As i got close to it there was a figure under it. I kept on running towards it when i got there the figure changed into a little girl crying i went up to her
Vega: what are you doing here?
little girl: *still crying* they tied me here
Vega: what?
i looked at her hands they were tied to the pole. I dug through my pockets to see if i can find something useful but came up empty. I got on my knees and started trying to untie her.
Vega: stop crying!!!!!
with the heat becoming unbearable i tried my hardest to untie her with more then five nots tying her to the pole. i got the first two undone. then she started yelling
Vega: SHUT UP SHUT UP
little girl: the fire is here
Vega: what?
i looked back to see hell on earth.
Vega: god damnit
i started moving faster not realize the blood coming from my fingers. i got the third not
Little girl: hurry!!! hurry please hurry
Vega: i am doing my best here
i got the fourth one
Vega: *thinking* yes one more
all the sudden my shoes started burning.
Vega: AAAA
i tried to get my shoes off but the fire was face to face with me. my skin started to burn from face but all i could think of was not letting this little girl die. i left my shoes and started untying the not my feet started to burn inside my shoe. finally i got the last not with not a second too soon. we ran but my feet were burning so i threw my shoes i tried to run after the little girls but my feet gave up on my so i started crawling on my knee.
Vega: HEY help me!!!!
but she was long gone. I crawled after her footprints with the fire inchs behind me. My knees started bleeding
*start's to cry*
Vega: damnit is this how i die?
still crawling like a helpless child i saw a road out of town. i got up with all my strength determinant to make it out alive i ran ran with all the fiber in my being. when i got out of town i started to faint. before i hit the ground i heard some voice stay
Unknow voice: So your finally ou.....
few seconds later i was in tunnel it was all dark and cold.
Vega: where am i now? am i death?
the tunnel started to light up and a figure started to appear it was very very small but with each second it got bigger and bigger and bigger untill it was bigger then me. Then i started to fall inside it freefalling faster i tried to yell but i couldn't hear anything. i tried to yell again but no voice then i heard a voice different from my voice i followed it. to a bright light.
Vega: I DON'T WANT TO DIE
i woke up yelling with cold sweat
unknow voice: hahahaha your not death.
Vega: what?
i looked down started counting all my fingers 1,2,3...10. searched through my body just to make sure everything is there. with a sigh of relief i fall back
Vega: ouch!!
unknow voice: go easy now you still have 3rd degree burns on your head.
looked at the voice and it was that little girl.
Vega: you!! why did you leave me you asshole?
little girl: i love my life too much
Vega: huh? what a stupid reason whatever so you got a name?
Little girl: my name is Lucy
Vega: so where is everyone?
Lucy: they all left
Vega: and your parents?
Lucy:i don't know where they are
Vega: how annoying!!! ok kid good luck i am going.
Lucy: where are we going?
Vega: WE?? there is no we there is only I
i got up took one step then a sharp pain went up my body bring me down.
Vega: AAAAAA
Lucy: you dumbass don't move your feet got burned remember.
then it all hit me back the fire, my feet getting burned, my knees bleeding.
Vega: Damn damn damn damn damn!
i punch the ground and another sharp pain went through my body
Vega: AAAAAAA
Lucy: stop hitting things!!! stay here
she left me then came back with a table that had wheels.
Lucy: Come on get on we can't stay here we will die if we do.
Vega: and how do you want me to do that??
Lucy: man up and get on
Vega: "man up and get on" i will man you up you stupid little kid come here and help me.
she came around and tried to help me get up but she was no use i could feel how weak she was. So i got on the table and she started pushing it. she kept on pushing it untill we got to a town that was few miles away.
Vega: hey kid do you know where we are going?
Lucy: stop calling me kid. we are going to james town.
we came into town all dirty and stinky everyone around us looking at us like we are some low-life beings. Without a warning someone threw a rock at lucy.
Rock thrower: get out of here you devil
everyone: yea get out here
everyone started throwing rock's at us
Vega: AAA you bastards AAAAAA
but lucy kept on walking with rocks hitting her. she started to bleed from her head. i looked back at her to see the pain in her eyes i crawled on my elbows to cover her from the rocks. after some minutes we were out of town i let go of her but she kept on pushing. few minutes later we came up on a small house she stoped there.
Lucy: ok come on get's go
she offered me her shoulder. i grab with pertending i was getting help from her we walked to the front door she knocked
Lucy: Doctor open up please Doctor!!
the door started to up and out came yasoo
~~~~~To be conintued~~~~~~~~~~~
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Posted 10-14-2008 at 01:11 AM by elvispacman
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Cool and hey evilspace man lern to read AAA means "screaming" or like AHHHH god noobas today i tell ya...Posted 10-14-2008 at 01:20 AM by clown564
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hey i want you to make a nother mind if i put this on gaia ill make shoure they know you made it and not mePosted 10-14-2008 at 01:21 AM by clown564
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Posted 10-14-2008 at 04:55 AM by vega
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Posted 10-14-2008 at 04:58 AM by vega
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Posted 10-14-2008 at 02:46 PM by Random Dude 91
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