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JanembaX · 06-08-2008, 05:36 PM

(claps) you are good you are good

Shikamaru Nara · 06-08-2008, 05:37 PM

eh i just realized ways to make it better but thnx. i forgot to put in transitions

dany_elle1908 · 06-08-2008, 05:38 PM

mh...good...........

Reverse_Soul · 06-08-2008, 05:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shikamaru Nara

no i found one. i got this thanks to leivs story

soldier of shadows
he fights alone
silent and deadly
you never know
killing with stealth

he does it for money
its too late
by the time you realize
your life is over
killed by this man

by the name of leiv
he sneaks behind
pulles out his blade
and slits your thraot
never again

will you see a day
that people dont fear
the elvin assassin
beware him now
for you may be next

Lmao you should show this to him when he gets on

Shikamaru Nara · 06-08-2008, 05:41 PM

i will ill send him a PM with it. i was just reading his story and so i thought id write a poem caus its fun to write bout other ppl bout it

animebuff2006 · 06-08-2008, 05:43 PM

Well this is something I wrote while ago,I was pretty angry when I wrote this so it might come off a little harsh at first. I am not sure what category this poem can fall into. (if this is a poem at all LOL) but I do hope you enjoy it.

Common Sense, where has it gone in today's society? Has it flown the coop , or just abandon us because it was tired and disgusted with today's people stupidity? We should all think about this, for common sense is a rarity that is like a black rose, it is a essence on the verge of extinction. How can we save ourselves from the ever growing population of idiocy, stupidity, and ignorance. Those things are like a leech, latching itself on to us and draining our intelligence and taking over what is known as common sense. We must fight this parasite, we must gain our common sense back and understand that who we are now and what we can become hand in hand with common sense is more glorifying than all of money, social status, and power can ever give us. For with even those, you still cannot cure stupid.

Hollow Master · 06-08-2008, 05:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Leiv

Well I didn't mean subject, but try poems with adding more to the lines, haikus, and none rhyming poems. Expands your horizons as a poet, and improves your work

lol the same advice u gave me

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shikamaru Nara

k ill try it

lol i think it works

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shikamaru Nara

no i found one. i got this thanks to leivs story

soldier of shadows
he fights alone
silent and deadly
you never know
killing with stealth

he does it for money
its too late
by the time you realize
your life is over
killed by this man

by the name of leiv
he sneaks behind
pulles out his blade
and slits your thraot
never again

will you see a day
that people dont fear
the elvin assassin
beware him now
for you may be next

lol mind i steal the topic?(i wont steal ur work tho)

Shikamaru Nara · 06-08-2008, 05:44 PM

sure. i got it from the story leiv wrote but i dont mind u using the topic

Hollow Master · 06-08-2008, 05:45 PM

_____________The Truth__________
As she gets ready to leave
And kisses her son good-bye
He puts on that smile and says good-bye
But its all just a lie

As He shut the door,
the mask fell down
As He turned around
And the boy fell to the ground

The boy tried to hide
In a place He couldn’t find
But no place came to mind
And the boy just wishes that He was kind

As He pops the pills
His eyes go red
The boy desperately tries to hide under the bed
But he still fears his mom will find him dead

lol this is my second poem (since i started to write again)

Hollow Master · 06-08-2008, 05:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shikamaru Nara

sure. i got it from the story leiv wrote but i dont mind u using the topic

lol ya i read that too

i LOVED it

cant wait till next chapter is released

and ty

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Shikamaru Nara Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: village hidden in the leaves Posts: 6,482	Re: poetry thread i will ill send him a PM with it. i was just reading his story and so i thought id write a poem caus its fun to write bout other ppl bout it __________________ Cpt. of the 12th squad of PURE DESTRUCTION.Crimson alchemist of The State Alchemists.anmegabe's son.red crescent tigress's hubby.one chosen to succeed ultimate master pervy toad sage kenny.Squall of the FF FC.Chaos Keyblade(gots me own house) [Only registered and activated users can see links. ] PLEASE JOIN [Only registered and activated users can see links. ] taking banner requests as favors

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animebuff2006 Senior Member Join Date: May 2008 Location: An abyss of knowledge and understanding Posts: 1,398	Re: poetry thread Well this is something I wrote while ago,I was pretty angry when I wrote this so it might come off a little harsh at first. I am not sure what category this poem can fall into. (if this is a poem at all LOL) but I do hope you enjoy it. Common Sense, where has it gone in today's society? Has it flown the coop , or just abandon us because it was tired and disgusted with today's people stupidity? We should all think about this, for common sense is a rarity that is like a black rose, it is a essence on the verge of extinction. How can we save ourselves from the ever growing population of idiocy, stupidity, and ignorance. Those things are like a leech, latching itself on to us and draining our intelligence and taking over what is known as common sense. We must fight this parasite, we must gain our common sense back and understand that who we are now and what we can become hand in hand with common sense is more glorifying than all of money, social status, and power can ever give us. For with even those, you still cannot cure stupid. __________________ 5th seat of squad 6, Lieutenant of Chief Intelligence Commissioner of the Order of the Black KnightsTeru Mikami with Thanatos, Bojack and Android 13 of the DBZ groups, The strong are not always vigorous, the wise not always ready, the brave not always courageous, and the joyous not always happy. But we stand strong anyway through those hard times, to continue moving on.

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Shikamaru Nara Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: village hidden in the leaves Posts: 6,482	Re: poetry thread sure. i got it from the story leiv wrote but i dont mind u using the topic __________________ Cpt. of the 12th squad of PURE DESTRUCTION.Crimson alchemist of The State Alchemists.anmegabe's son.red crescent tigress's hubby.one chosen to succeed ultimate master pervy toad sage kenny.Squall of the FF FC.Chaos Keyblade(gots me own house) [Only registered and activated users can see links. ] PLEASE JOIN [Only registered and activated users can see links. ] taking banner requests as favors

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Hollow Master Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: in my mind... Posts: 4,252	Re: poetry thread _____________The Truth__________ As she gets ready to leave And kisses her son good-bye He puts on that smile and says good-bye But its all just a lie As He shut the door, the mask fell down As He turned around And the boy fell to the ground The boy tried to hide In a place He couldn’t find But no place came to mind And the boy just wishes that He was kind As He pops the pills His eyes go red The boy desperately tries to hide under the bed But he still fears his mom will find him dead lol this is my second poem (since i started to write again) __________________ Proud Member of:Espada,Gotei 13,Uchiha Clan(Sanin) and Uzamaki Naruto Fan Club 2nd Squad Captain of Pure Destruction, Ichigo of the True Vizards(Leader) Shinigami Daiō of the Death Note Group Captain of the 10th Squad *Twin Katana to UltraX and Weapon of Shin* Shadow Jonin of the Shinobi Nations, General of the Black Order Shadow user of JUTSU MAKERS

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