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Old 06-08-2008, 05:36 PM   #21 (permalink)
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(claps) you are good you are good
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Old 06-08-2008, 05:37 PM   #22 (permalink)
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eh i just realized ways to make it better but thnx. i forgot to put in transitions
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Old 06-08-2008, 05:38 PM   #23 (permalink)
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mh...good...........
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Old 06-08-2008, 05:40 PM   #24 (permalink)
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no i found one. i got this thanks to leivs story


soldier of shadows
he fights alone
silent and deadly
you never know
killing with stealth

he does it for money
its too late
by the time you realize
your life is over
killed by this man

by the name of leiv
he sneaks behind
pulles out his blade
and slits your thraot
never again

will you see a day
that people dont fear
the elvin assassin
beware him now
for you may be next
Lmao you should show this to him when he gets on
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Old 06-08-2008, 05:41 PM   #25 (permalink)
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i will ill send him a PM with it. i was just reading his story and so i thought id write a poem caus its fun to write bout other ppl bout it
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Old 06-08-2008, 05:43 PM   #26 (permalink)
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Well this is something I wrote while ago,I was pretty angry when I wrote this so it might come off a little harsh at first. I am not sure what category this poem can fall into. (if this is a poem at all LOL) but I do hope you enjoy it.

Common Sense, where has it gone in today's society? Has it flown the coop , or just abandon us because it was tired and disgusted with today's people stupidity? We should all think about this, for common sense is a rarity that is like a black rose, it is a essence on the verge of extinction. How can we save ourselves from the ever growing population of idiocy, stupidity, and ignorance. Those things are like a leech, latching itself on to us and draining our intelligence and taking over what is known as common sense. We must fight this parasite, we must gain our common sense back and understand that who we are now and what we can become hand in hand with common sense is more glorifying than all of money, social status, and power can ever give us. For with even those, you still cannot cure stupid.
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Old 06-08-2008, 05:43 PM   #27 (permalink)
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Well I didn't mean subject, but try poems with adding more to the lines, haikus, and none rhyming poems. Expands your horizons as a poet, and improves your work
lol the same advice u gave me
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k ill try it
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no i found one. i got this thanks to leivs story


soldier of shadows
he fights alone
silent and deadly
you never know
killing with stealth

he does it for money
its too late
by the time you realize
your life is over
killed by this man

by the name of leiv
he sneaks behind
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and slits your thraot
never again

will you see a day
that people dont fear
the elvin assassin
beware him now
for you may be next
lol mind i steal the topic?(i wont steal ur work tho)
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sure. i got it from the story leiv wrote but i dont mind u using the topic
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Old 06-08-2008, 05:45 PM   #29 (permalink)
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_____________The Truth__________
As she gets ready to leave
And kisses her son good-bye
He puts on that smile and says good-bye
But its all just a lie

As He shut the door,
the mask fell down
As He turned around
And the boy fell to the ground

The boy tried to hide
In a place He couldn’t find
But no place came to mind
And the boy just wishes that He was kind

As He pops the pills
His eyes go red
The boy desperately tries to hide under the bed
But he still fears his mom will find him dead


lol this is my second poem (since i started to write again)
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sure. i got it from the story leiv wrote but i dont mind u using the topic
lol ya i read that too i LOVED it cant wait till next chapter is released

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