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Shikamaru Nara · 06-08-2008, 08:01 AM

hey ppl wats up its me. in here if you can think of a poem then post it here and let others comment on it. ill start

Together we stand
Hand in hand
Forever together
Holding eachother
Always to love

For your my dove
Through your eyes
I see no lies
True and honest
Your the fondest

So carry on
This joyfull song
Forever we'll last
Since the past
Bullet and pistol
James and Crystal.

Shikamaru Nara · 06-08-2008, 08:13 AM

heres another

blood and violence
death and silence
together are why,
the reason i cry
i want it to quit

the beating the hit
i hate it much
it hurts to touch
when living in this
hoping hits miss

so many a bruise
the painfull abuse
if only i could
stop it i would

JanembaX · 06-08-2008, 08:18 AM

wow those are good i never was godd with poems but i got qoutes

I may never get to see u as often as i like. i may not get to hold u in my arms all through the night but deep in my heart i truly no ur the one that i love and can never let go.

everyone wants to be your sun.. but not me. i want to be your moon so I can light up your darkest moments when your sun isn't around.

Shikamaru Nara · 06-08-2008, 08:24 AM

wow nice. i wrote these poems. you write that?

we live in a place
where we all have a face,
where we all have a voice
and make our own choice,
but each one chosen

ends with use frozen
chosing another
which hurts eachother
you choose your ways
for a few days

then we see
the effect that these
choices have had
that drive other mad
to choose the wrong

we think were strong
but then we fail
and end our tale.

Leiv · 06-08-2008, 08:26 AM

Great flow, and all three are very good. You should expand your style however

JanembaX · 06-08-2008, 08:27 AM

ya i use to write poems but they were never good yours are great doe

Shikamaru Nara · 06-08-2008, 08:27 AM

yea im not good with others though. im not good at random poems. the first is about me and my gf the second are really about life

Leiv · 06-08-2008, 08:29 AM

Well I didn't mean subject, but try poems with adding more to the lines, haikus, and none rhyming poems. Expands your horizons as a poet, and improves your work

Shikamaru Nara · 06-08-2008, 08:30 AM

k ill try it

Ultimate Jinchuriki · 06-08-2008, 08:31 AM

welll my poetry is unrhymmed...*if that's really a word*

06-08-2008, 08:01 AM	#1 (permalink)
Shikamaru Nara Closet Anime Addict Lvl.10 Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: village hidden in the leaves Posts: 6,950	poetry thread hey ppl wats up its me. in here if you can think of a poem then post it here and let others comment on it. ill start Together we stand Hand in hand Forever together Holding eachother Always to love For your my dove Through your eyes I see no lies True and honest Your the fondest So carry on This joyfull song Forever we'll last Since the past Bullet and pistol James and Crystal. __________________ Cpt. of the 12th squad of PURE DESTRUCTION.Crimson alchemist of The State Alchemists.anmegabe's son.red crescent tigress's hubby.one chosen to succeed ultimate master pervy toad sage kenny.Squall of the FF FC.Chaos Keyblade(gots me own house) [Only registered and activated users can see links. ] PLEASE JOIN [Only registered and activated users can see links. ] taking banner requests as favors

06-08-2008, 08:13 AM	#2 (permalink)
Shikamaru Nara Closet Anime Addict Lvl.10 Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: village hidden in the leaves Posts: 6,950	Re: poetry thread heres another blood and violence death and silence together are why, the reason i cry i want it to quit the beating the hit i hate it much it hurts to touch when living in this hoping hits miss so many a bruise the painfull abuse if only i could stop it i would __________________ Cpt. of the 12th squad of PURE DESTRUCTION.Crimson alchemist of The State Alchemists.anmegabe's son.red crescent tigress's hubby.one chosen to succeed ultimate master pervy toad sage kenny.Squall of the FF FC.Chaos Keyblade(gots me own house) [Only registered and activated users can see links. ] PLEASE JOIN [Only registered and activated users can see links. ] taking banner requests as favors

06-08-2008, 08:18 AM	#3 (permalink)
JanembaX The Pervy One Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: On a sofa reading, writing, and drooling Posts: 26,268 Blog Entries: 2	Re: poetry thread wow those are good i never was godd with poems but i got qoutes I may never get to see u as often as i like. i may not get to hold u in my arms all through the night but deep in my heart i truly no ur the one that i love and can never let go. everyone wants to be your sun.. but not me. i want to be your moon so I can light up your darkest moments when your sun isn't around. __________________ Proud member and Sannin of the uchiha clan join now Kazekage Kazekage of the shinobi nations Mangekyou Sharingan Captain Commander of the 2nd squad recruiting now Co-founder of the death note group. Ryuuk human partner Kira (Lite) 6th Espada:Grimmjow Jeagerjaques Owner of the AC card business ? Goku of the DBZ groups Gotenks of the DBZ groups Body Guard For The Jerry Springer Thread animegabes step-son Tobi The Good Boy

06-08-2008, 08:24 AM	#4 (permalink)
Shikamaru Nara Closet Anime Addict Lvl.10 Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: village hidden in the leaves Posts: 6,950	Re: poetry thread wow nice. i wrote these poems. you write that? we live in a place where we all have a face, where we all have a voice and make our own choice, but each one chosen ends with use frozen chosing another which hurts eachother you choose your ways for a few days then we see the effect that these choices have had that drive other mad to choose the wrong we think were strong but then we fail and end our tale. __________________ Cpt. of the 12th squad of PURE DESTRUCTION.Crimson alchemist of The State Alchemists.anmegabe's son.red crescent tigress's hubby.one chosen to succeed ultimate master pervy toad sage kenny.Squall of the FF FC.Chaos Keyblade(gots me own house) [Only registered and activated users can see links. ] PLEASE JOIN [Only registered and activated users can see links. ] taking banner requests as favors

06-08-2008, 08:26 AM	#5 (permalink)
Leiv Lives in Ichigo's Closet Join Date: May 2008 Location: Omnipresent Posts: 11,695 Blog Entries: 5	Re: poetry thread Great flow, and all three are very good. You should expand your style however __________________ Antagonist, I am the beginning of the end. BRAND NEW STORY check it out if you are so inclined [Only registered and activated users can see links. ]

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06-08-2008, 08:27 AM	#6 (permalink)
JanembaX The Pervy One Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: On a sofa reading, writing, and drooling Posts: 26,268 Blog Entries: 2	Re: poetry thread ya i use to write poems but they were never good yours are great doe __________________ Proud member and Sannin of the uchiha clan join now Kazekage Kazekage of the shinobi nations Mangekyou Sharingan Captain Commander of the 2nd squad recruiting now Co-founder of the death note group. Ryuuk human partner Kira (Lite) 6th Espada:Grimmjow Jeagerjaques Owner of the AC card business ? Goku of the DBZ groups Gotenks of the DBZ groups Body Guard For The Jerry Springer Thread animegabes step-son Tobi The Good Boy

06-08-2008, 08:27 AM	#7 (permalink)
Shikamaru Nara Closet Anime Addict Lvl.10 Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: village hidden in the leaves Posts: 6,950	Re: poetry thread yea im not good with others though. im not good at random poems. the first is about me and my gf the second are really about life __________________ Cpt. of the 12th squad of PURE DESTRUCTION.Crimson alchemist of The State Alchemists.anmegabe's son.red crescent tigress's hubby.one chosen to succeed ultimate master pervy toad sage kenny.Squall of the FF FC.Chaos Keyblade(gots me own house) [Only registered and activated users can see links. ] PLEASE JOIN [Only registered and activated users can see links. ] taking banner requests as favors

06-08-2008, 08:29 AM	#8 (permalink)
Leiv Lives in Ichigo's Closet Join Date: May 2008 Location: Omnipresent Posts: 11,695 Blog Entries: 5	Re: poetry thread Well I didn't mean subject, but try poems with adding more to the lines, haikus, and none rhyming poems. Expands your horizons as a poet, and improves your work __________________ Antagonist, I am the beginning of the end. BRAND NEW STORY check it out if you are so inclined [Only registered and activated users can see links. ]

06-08-2008, 08:30 AM	#9 (permalink)
Shikamaru Nara Closet Anime Addict Lvl.10 Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: village hidden in the leaves Posts: 6,950	Re: poetry thread k ill try it __________________ Cpt. of the 12th squad of PURE DESTRUCTION.Crimson alchemist of The State Alchemists.anmegabe's son.red crescent tigress's hubby.one chosen to succeed ultimate master pervy toad sage kenny.Squall of the FF FC.Chaos Keyblade(gots me own house) [Only registered and activated users can see links. ] PLEASE JOIN [Only registered and activated users can see links. ] taking banner requests as favors

06-08-2008, 08:31 AM	#10 (permalink)
Ultimate Jinchuriki Lives in Ichigo's Closet Lvl.10 Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: i forgot... im always lost Posts: 18,784	Re: poetry thread welll my poetry is unrhymmed...if that's really a word __________________ maybe my heart its too small for love, maybe my mind its to cold for this, everything i do its for you, even if you dont feel like that, i love you more than my own life, and i want you to be mine...

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