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Old 07-14-2008, 10:37 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Sorry it's late but my computer was all wierd-ish. Anyway here is chapter one of Dragon Ball DX.


Chapter 1: "Find Those Dragonballs!"

Years have past since Goku, Vegeta, and all of the other Z-Fighters fought and protected Earth over and over again. Goku and Vegeta, being the pure blooded Saiyans they were, became fathers to half-Saiyan, half-Human children. There children had children, and so did their children. The Saiyan gene started to spread. Now 34% of the Earth's population has some Saiyan blood in them. This means that the Earth has more potential heroes then ever before. Though it also means more potential villians as well. So let's find out which one Goshen, a 13 year old decendant of Goku, will choose.

"Boy, am I stuffed!", said the satisfied Goshen. He was having a meal at a local restaurant. He was trying to decide what to order next and while he was thinking he was looking around at the restaurant. He stared at the round tables, the bolted down chairs, and through the window he could see the town's bank. He then yelled to the waitress, "Can I have some more soup please?" The waitress, a young attractive girl, replied, "Yes, of course", and brought out a bowl of soup for the suppossedly stuffed Goshen. He accepted it and said, "Thanks." What Goshen didn't notice was that across the street, at the bank, five men with black masks and guns drove up to it and two of them went inside to take all of the money. The other people in the restaurant did notice and some of them rushed outside screaming,"What the hell is going on?" or " Let me see!", while he just sat and ate his soup. The police drove up to the bank and yelled through a megaphone, "Come out with your hands up! We have you surounded!" One of the bank robbers said, "We have hostages. Do what we say or they're dead!", as he walked out onto the bank steps with the other one that went inside. To scare the police he fired his gun, luckily missing everyone, but he shot through the window that Goshen was sitting by. He missed Goshen but he shot and shattered his bowl of soup. Goshen was angered by this and yelled through the also shattered window," Hey, you bastards ruined my soup!" "Oh yeah? What are you going to about it, kid?" "I'm gonna do this. KA...ME...HA...ME..." "What is he doing?", said one robber to another, "I don't know. Do you know?" "How should I know?" Goshen finished with a, "HAAAAA!!!" He let loose a blue beam of energy from his hands aimed straight at the would-be thieves who all said at once, "HOLY CRAP!" The blast knocked them all on conscious and ruined the front of the bank. Goshen handed money to the waitress, who stayed inside, saying, "Thanks for the soup." He jumped through the broken window and flew away to the crowd's astonishment.

While flying in the sun lit sky Goshen said to himself, "Now, to get back to work." He pulled out a small device. "I should thank Briefs for getting me this dragon radar. Now where was it again? The radar says its right below me." He looked down and realized that below him was a lake. "Well this sucks. I was hoping this would be easy. Well no one ever said finding the Dragon Balls would be easy. This one will make five." He dove down into the water. He stayed under for a long time but came up with the six star ball in his hand proclaiming," Who's the best? Me, that's who!" "I hope you don't mind if I take your find, now do you, oh great one," said an ambiguos voice. "Hey who are you? Why do you want this ball?"The mysterious person flew down to where Goshen was in the water. "My name is Broady, as for why I want that ball, I don't think it's any of your buisness." Who is this mysterious person and what does he want with the dragon balls? Only time will tell.

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those Saiyan sure get around
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are you gonna put more chapters up soon?
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sayains be workin
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yes soon enough there will be more chapters
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pretty good cuz ive liked DBZ since i was like 5-now
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It's gonna go up once a week.
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Nice, awesome story. i'm looking forward to the next chapter.

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yea it is cool i wonder what vegetas descendants ganno be like
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yea it is cool i wonder what vegetas descendants ganno be like
hes probably gonna be goshens rival.....well at least i hope thatll make it more intresting.
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