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Old 12-03-2007, 04:02 AM   #21 (permalink)
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chapter 5:the iron fortress's prison

zack and co are on toshergos ship and the iron fortress is in view.

zack: hey saku

saku(with here armour on again) :what?

zack: before we go to the fort i have been woundering something.

saku:what would that be?

zack:well your sister didnt come with us on the boat when we left midgren why is that?

saku: she stayed at a very safe place there where those Leviathan jerks cant find her

zack: thats good

toshergo: were there!

zack: are we just going up to it

toshergo: yes

zack: thats crazy they will shot us down

toshergo: its ok word hasent gotten out yet.

they entered the iron fortress through two huge gates once they were there they went to get fuel for the ship in a store and saw a tv on and it had a huge guy with brown spiky hair and a evil look on his face and he said this

???: there has been some rebels in midgren and deska.this is what they look like (it shows pics of zack,saku and toshergo faces.)

store owner: (shocked)you the rebels please dont hurt me just take this fuel and go

zack:who was that guy?

store owner: that was the great 10-the titan

saku: dont be asking for names now! lets just go!

they start running out of the store and the store owner went on the phone after they left and said

store owner: those rebels from deska and midgren are here.

zack and co and still running and as they get to the ship they find out that the ship is gone and next to were it was is about 50 Leviathan members

Leviathan member: your under arrest

the next scene shows zack and co being thrown into a cell

Leviathan member: you will spend the rest of your days in here

after the Leviathan members leave....

saku: a stuiped jail cell wont hold me

toshergo:you shouldnt do th............

as he said that she punched it and she gets shocked and shot back

toshergo:that is a electric bar

saku: how the hell should i have known that?!

toshergo points at a sign that says danger elecitric bars

saku: ..................then how do you suggest we get out of here?

zack: well i could just bust them down with some magic

after he said this he took of his glove and fired a shot of pure magic and the bars and they broke,but a alarm was triggured too. zack and co run through the jail and run into a gruop of Leviathan members(20 of them)

???: seems like im going to get and have some fun.

toshergo:are you going to try and stop us? you should know that we killed numbers 100,99,73,50 and 33 of the GODs

15: ha so what im 15-the phantom

15 then shots some blue dust from his hands and saku and toshergo and they get knocked out

15: take those two away from my sight

two Leviathan members drag saku and toshergo away

zack: how dare you hurt my friends

zack pulls out a pistol and shots it,but the shot gos through 15(making a hole) and some blue dust came out of the hole out (then afterwards went back into him filling the hole in)

15: if that is all you can do then this wont be any fun,you guys leave us alone now

Leviathan members:yes sir (then they left)

15: now lets see how long you will last agaisnt me
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chapter 5:the iron fortress's prison

zack and co are on toshergos ship and the iron fortress is in view.

zack: hey saku

saku(with here armour on again) :what?

zack: before we go to the fort i have been woundering something.

saku:what would that be?

zack:well your sister didnt come with us on the boat when we left midgren why is that?

saku: she stayed at a very safe place there where those Leviathan jerks cant find her

zack: thats good

toshergo: were there!

zack: are we just going up to it

toshergo: yes

zack: thats crazy they will shot us down

toshergo: its ok word hasent gotten out yet.

they entered the iron fortress through two huge gates once they were there they went to get fuel for the ship in a store and saw a tv on and it had a huge guy with brown spiky hair and a evil look on his face and he said this

???: there has been some rebels in midgren and deska.this is what they look like (it shows pics of zack,saku and toshergo faces.)

store owner: (shocked)you the rebels please dont hurt me just take this fuel and go

zack:who was that guy?

store owner: that was the great 10-the titan

saku: dont be asking for names now! lets just go!

they start running out of the store and the store owner went on the phone after they left and said

store owner: those rebels from deska and midgren are here.

zack and co and still running and as they get to the ship they find out that the ship is gone and next to were it was is about 50 Leviathan members

Leviathan member: your under arrest

the next scene shows zack and co being thrown into a cell

Leviathan member: you will spend the rest of your days in here

after the Leviathan members leave....

saku: a stuiped jail cell wont hold me

toshergo:you shouldnt do th............

as he said that she punched it and she gets shocked and shot back

toshergo:that is a electric bar

saku: how the hell should i have known that?!

toshergo points at a sign that says danger elecitric bars

saku: ..................then how do you suggest we get out of here?

zack: well i could just bust them down with some magic

after he said this he took of his glove and fired a shot of pure magic and the bars and they broke,but a alarm was triggured too. zack and co run through the jail and run into a gruop of Leviathan members(20 of them)

???: seems like im going to get and have some fun.

toshergo:are you going to try and stop us? you should know that we killed numbers 100,99,73,50 and 33 of the GODs

15: ha so what im 15-the phantom

15 then shots some blue dust from his hands and saku and toshergo and they get knocked out

15: take those two away from my sight

two Leviathan members drag saku and toshergo away

zack: how dare you hurt my friends

zack pulls out a pistol and shots it,but the shot gos through 15(making a hole) and some blue dust came out of the hole out (then afterwards went back into him filling the hole in)

15: if that is all you can do then this wont be any fun,you guys leave us alone now

Leviathan members:yes sir (then they left)

15: now lets see how long you will last agaisnt me

That was goo hopefully Zack will survive
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^hey Hitsu i updated mine check it out and yea Gaara ur is awesome
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hmm i wounder when i will chapter 6 (it will be a very action pack chapter)
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Old 12-06-2007, 12:11 AM   #26 (permalink)
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gaara these are really good but i wouldnt have posted it on the interenet.
someone can easily steal your ideas.
just pointing it out.
also how do u do color like that in your "zack art" [like the one in the orange].
i sketch but i could never get the color part right.
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Old 12-06-2007, 12:15 AM   #27 (permalink)
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gaara these are really good but i wouldnt have posted it on the interenet.
someone can easily steal your ideas.
just pointing it out.
also how do u do color like that in your "zack art" [like the one in the orange].
i sketch but i could never get the color part right.
thanks for the concen but i will know if someone stills my ideas and it becomes a manga/anime and may be able to prove they stole it . even if that doesnt work i would be happy enough that it would be made into a manga/anime and i could always think of something eles

anyway zack's pants are red......

his jacket is white...

the staps are red

his eyes are red

his hair is red

his glove (left hand) is white

and he has peach skin (white)
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lol i know but HOW do u make it look so profesional like that? which tools do you use?
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o i didnt make them gama bunta did...... (well except 42-the tornado sam made that)
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oooo she did? do you personally know her
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