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chapter 1-post 2 chapter 2-post 3 chapter 3-post 4 chapter 4-post10 chapter 5-post 21 chapter 6-post 35 chapter 7-post 39 chapter 8-post 44 chapter 9-post 68 chapter 10-post 72 manga none art: zack-post 5 saku-post 6 toshergo-post 7 50-the reaper-post 8 42-the tornado-post 8 8-the phoenix-post 8
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this chapter shall be edited to so for now ignore the errors
chapter 1:midgren this chapter starts off with three thugs at a bakery thug 1: you didnt pay the money this month so you will pay now one way or the other bakery owner: please dont i have payed the money for this place for 20 years thug 2: we dont care the 3 thugs get out guns but they are shot out of there hands by a stranger named zack useing a pistol thug 3: how dare you fire at us?! zack: you better leave this old man alone or the next shot will go through your heart the three thugs run off bakery owner: thank you........ how can i ever repay you? zack: yes you can ,can you tell me where the dock is? bakery owner: yes it is a few blocks over that way (points to were it is) zack:thanks zack walks to the dock narritive voice(zack):hi im zack age 18,well i guess i cant say my real name is zack. see 3 years ago i lost all of my memory and ended up in a small villege called kistren. i couldn't even remeber my own name so i started calling myself zack. im in a town right now called midgren,i feel sorry for this place becuase of that oganation Leviathan decided to come here. zack reachs the dock zack:is there a boat going to deska? boatman: no,a high ranking member of Leviathan closed the docks there down because of some important factory being used there. zack: where is this guy? boatman: in the central office the next sene has zack going through the doors to central office.there where the three thugs and someone wearing a cloak(number 50-the reaper) thug 1: boss that is the guy that fired at us 50: is that so?.......tell me why are you here? zack: i need a ship that is going to deska 50: i closed the ports to that place down, you couldnt get there even if uou had a boat. why do u want to go there anyway? zack: im suppose to meet someone there 50: well it doesnt matter because when you fire on a member of Leviathan u will die zack: what?!? 50: your lucky, you will be killed by rank 50 of the GODs,the reaper zack: GODs? just as zack said that 50 pulled a sickle from under his clock and it was tail like conneted to his back. zack got out two swords and they charge each other. zack is throw back but conters and slices 50. 50:ahh!! you are no normal human are you? they contenue there battle then... 50: lets see if u can block this 50's sickle swings and then it makes a wind slice. zack does the same thing with his swongs and they collied and destroy each other in mid air 50: you can do the wind slice?! i see i now know who you are.... zack: what do u mean? tell me! 50: you will have to beat me to find out they contunie their battle and zack uses his 6 pistols,2 swords, and some gernades (from his pockets)to fight him while 50 was blocking them with his sickle. 50: you will not be able to kill me zack: oh yea? zack reoves the glove on his left hand to reveal a complety fried hand,he then makes red sphere in that hand and fires it at 50. 50:ahh!!!!!!!!!!!! 50: (weak voice)i see so it is true what they say about you,u do have pure magic in ur left hand. zack: how do u know this? tell me 50: i wont be here long enough to say, but your answers will be on deska..........but im only one GOD there are 7 more there............. 50 dies zack:then i will beat them, it is as simple as that
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chapter 2: the secret of deska
this starts off with zack looking a little depress and is walking along the port of midgren zack: even though i beat that reaper guy i still dont have a way to reach deska zack sighs and his head tips down. then a person ran into zack and falls down, this person had armour on and a pole on the back of it ???: who the hell are you?! zack: that isn't a nice way to greet someone ???: i dont care,what are u going to cry? zack: what is with you? ???: oh damn i have to get going see ya loser the person ran off to a ship that was behind zack zack:....what was with that guy? all of a sudden a scream came from inside the ship the person just went into. zack: what was that? zack runs to the ship and sees 5 more of those Leviathan members with a little girl, and the person from eariler with a fisherman member 1: even if the boss is gone we still control this place, now give us your boat ???: bastards, if you didnt have my sister hostage i would kick ur asses right now fisherman: please i will give you my ship just dont hurt her member 1: so we are in agrement then ???: yes..... zack gets out one of his pistols and shoots the member(member 1) that had ahold of the little girl member 2: who are you?.........wait ur the one who killed the boss member 3: what really? lets get out of here!! the 5 members run off and the one that got shot had to be dragged out ???: thanks maybe your not as big of a loser after all zack: that still sounds insulting fisherman: dont mind this one she is always like that, thanks for your help. by the way my name is toshergo and the name of this one (points at the person) is saku zack: saku that is a odd name for a boy saku face turns into a sour look (there is also a # on her forehead) and gets out her pole and hits zack makeing him fall over saku: im a girl!!! zack: you dont seem like one saku hits him with the pole again and knocks him to the ground toshergo: (wisper to zack) you may not want to keep saying things like that she gets mad very easy as you can see saku: anyway why were you walking around the dock? zack: i needed to find a ship that goes to deska toshergo: hmmmm all ports are closed off there, but for helping saku's sister i may be able to get you there so they set sail to deska and after a few hours they arive. it was somehow able to be docked on the rocks zack:we got here fast toshergo:yup the finest ship in all the seas, a journey like that is nothing to her then two odd looking people walk up to them ???1: what are u doing here? there is no access to this island except for Leviathan members zack: but i need to talk to someone that is here ???2: to bad becuase for disobeying the rules we numbers 99 and 100 of GODs will have to elimanate you zack: more GODs what is a GOD(when they say this it is G-O-D not god) 99: you have never been on the eastern side of the world have you? zack: no, but what does this have to do with anything? 100: this is only known about on the east side and not the west side for now. Leviathan has a elite force called GODs they are also the fruits of their reseach. there are 100 members of GODs and all of us have super-human powers 99: and we are rank from strongest at 1 to weakest at 100 saku: so u guys are weaklingss then? 100: no we are still stronger than you and we will prove it. zack removes his glove again and this time uses a fireball and shoots it at them and they both die zack:...................are those guys really in the same group as that reaper guy? saku: so tell me why the hell did we come here?? zack: i need to talk to someone, thanks for the help toshergo: no problem the scene swichs to zack and some guy wearing white standing on a cliff ???: so you came zack: yes, i had some problems on the way though ???:doesnt matter now i have something important to tell you.see that large tower over there (they both look at this mechanical tower) zack: yes ???: well see the reason why Leviathan doesnt want anyone coming to this island is becuase they are trying to get pure magic there zack: but i thought that i was the only one who could use pure magic! ???:for a time that would be true but they are trying to make the GOD members have that power too. zack: then i must hurry and stop them, i cant let them have that kind of power ???: no need to rush there are 5 GODs guarding that place, but since you are the impacent type i will do a little favor for you. zack: what would that be? ???: you will see soon enough the scene swichs to that guy in white at the base of the tower with 3 GOD members ???(GOD member): intruder you will die here the guy in white puts his right hand stait out to the side of him and 3 small rings and one big ring appear(they have markings on them and the big one would be able to fit the small one in the inside of it) and they form a handle form (3 for the handle and the big one is the piece between the handle and the sword would be) and in side the rings a white sword(7 feet long) comes out (and the handle in the rings) and finaly he grins
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chapter 3 :the first memory
this starts off with zack in deska main market and he is looking around for a weapon shop and he does and enters it. zack:hey i would lik......... he sees saku and toshergo and the conter and saku turns around. saku:what the hell are u doing here, i thought u had somewere to go on here.wait did u make us come all the way here to go the weapon store?!?! zack:no im going to the tower in the center of the island im just here to pick up some ammo shop owner:you are going there(he is in shock) the GODs kill anyone that even make it in a foot of that place. zack:i know,but i have some bussiness there. shop owner:well your going to need some equpment if your going there. zack: okay just let me get out some ca......... shop owner:no no this is on the house just promise me u will beat the jecks up okay? zack: okay zack leaves the store after the owner gave him a large amount of bullets and gernades and saku comes rushing out saku:where do you think your going? your going to need some mussel zack:yea but i dont know anyone like that here saku gets pissed off again and gets pole and hits him ten times while saying "danm.....it........im......coming.......with ........u" zack: okay,okay u can come just stop hitting me toshergo:if saku is coming ill go to zack and co start there way to the center of the island and they climb a hill and when they get the he top the see what looks like a metor impact with a long tower in the middle zack:wow it is a long way down saku gets up behide him and pushes him off with one foot zack: ahhhhhhhhh!!!!!! toshergo:why did you do that? saku:i wanted to see how far the drop was toshergo:.... saku and toshergo climb down the mountian and see zack flat on the ground saku:come on dont be slow zack:why did i have to bring you they start walking to the tower and see 3 corpes zack:they'er.......dead toshergo:who did this? zack looks and them aand see white cut mark on them zack:there is only one person that could leave a cut like this......zakerin saku:who is he? it shows a pic of zakerin(he is the guy in the white from the last ep) zack:he is the strongest being i know.....he can kill anything with just one swing of his almighty sword and is never been hurt. toshergo:being do you mean he isnt human? zack:i dont know anymore......but he is the one who helped me long ago when i lost my memories saku:u never told us that you lost ur memories zack:srry i thought i did.anyway he is the storngest being i know but he never seems to want to take apart of battles........srry i was getting got up in the onl memories i have left, lets keep going they conteniue to the tower and get at the entrance. toshergo:u go in will will stay out here and guard.... zack gos through the tower and makes it up to the flat roof zack : odd when havent seen and GODs ???: o really? zack looks around and sees a red guy with some metal stuff on his arms and also and the base of the tower and guy in a old scuba suit shows up 33:you fell for our trap,im number 33-the inferno and my silent friend down there is 73-the tsnami 33 charges zack and gets out a touch that is his hand and fires at him.zack douges and starts useing his duel katanas on33.the scene swichs to saku, toshergo and 73 73 starts shooting water from out of nowere and saku who defelts them and hits 73 in the head.toshergo then ties 73 with his fishinrod line (this will look pretty cool belive it or not)and 73 breaks it the scene swichs back to zack and 33.zack takes off his glove and shoots fire and 33 fire,33 then comes within 3 feet of zack and fires the totch,zack then gets out the big sword on his back and slices off 33's arm the scene go's back to saku and the others.saku starts hitting 73 with her pole and then gets hit back,73 then starts to make a flood out of no were.toshergo grabs saku and jumps away from the attack and finaly throws a harpoon and 73 killing him 33:73!!!! danm it you will die 33 shoots fire with his gd arm (right) and zack doues it hen he gets out two pistol and fire's the rounds,33 blocks them but zack gos to the other side and fires another two pistols,they are blocked again.then zack gos on the other side again andthrows one pistol in the air (with a string on it)and fires his last pistol and him he blocks it but the stinged pistol reaches the end of the line and the string pulls the pistol and it hits 33's back.then zack grabs that pistol and fires the other 5 rounds.then 33 dies then all of asudden zack looks like he is in pain and grabs is arm,he gets a vison(flashback)it is him looking in a mirror (he is 8)then..... ???:brother are you comeing? young zack:yea.. then zack (current time) faints
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chapter 4 :the end of a zaban
it starts out with zack waking up in a bed with toshergo standing on the side zack: where..am...i? toshergo: well you are on my ship of course zack: how did i.....end up here? a girl walks in to the room right after he said that ???: because u passed you wimp and i had to drag you to this danm ship! zack:toshergo who is this woman the girl gets mad and says saku: im saku you idiot (zack couldnt tell it was her because she wasent wearing her armour) and then she knocks him out toshergo: .........that cant be good for him the next scene happeans on the ships deck with saku and toshergo standing on the edge of the boat and then zack walks out from the room he was in with his handon his head (because of that punch saku did) zack: why do you always hit me saku: because you always ask for it zack: anyway i really need to know something, just who are you guys?there is no way you can be just regular people toshergo: i guess we better tell you then...... this then gos to a scene with toshergo and saku on a cliff with a entire army.and toshergo says...... toshergo: we were once gererals of the great army of zaban and we were at war with Leviathan. after he says that the scene gos shows a girl that has a fan and is at the bottem of the cliff and at the same time toshergo says this....... toshergo: but just one GOD called 8-the phoenix showed up and destroyed our whole army. this then shows a scene with the army being caught on fire.and after that it shows saku and toshergo retreating with a few soilders and toshergo says... toshergo: we retreated ,but it was too late the others with us were killed and just saku and i were able to escape on this ship. it gos back to current time after that zack: so what happened to zaban? toshergo: it was destroyed for rebeling agaisnt Leviathan zack: im sorry........ saku: anyway lets see where was i before you passed out that secound time.... zack: you mean after being knocked out saku: you better keep you mouth shut or it will be a third time. zack shows a shocked look and stops talking saku: thats better now i had to drag from that tower to the ship because we got chased by hundereds of Leviathan members and they also got some glowing blue crystal. so were do u want us to go now zack: so they go the pure magic?! i guess we better go to Leviathan head qaurters,there are some things i must find out there and i cant let them have that kind of power toshergo: that is very far away even worse that now we are most likly on Leviathan's wanted list zack:so i guess we better go to the iron fortress i mean it is the closes island near deska? saku: you fool that is a Leviathan fort. toshergo: we must go........the ship is almost out of fuel and it doesnt have enough to go back to midgren zack so i guess were off to the iron fortress then
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