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Old 12-02-2007, 11:17 PM   #11 (permalink)
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Here is chapter 6 (lol the ending is funny post if you want more

As the battlefield was dead in silence, everyone was making preparations to bring Ken to the hospital, Shane however was sitting there in complete shock, A couple minutes later Ken arrives at the hospital, "Is it going to be all right?" Shane asked, "Hopefully, one inhale of the poison toxic fumes could kill a normal person instantly,but he is one of the five master samurai and he was taken to the hospital fast enough so he should survive", said Lady Hikaru with much worry in her voice, "Please don't die, Please don't.................. said Sai in a pleadful voice, "I was wondering where did that poison thing come from on that guy?" said Shane questioningly, "From the the capsule in his knee lady Hikaru said answering Shane's question, While Shane and Lady Hikaru were talking about that all Sai was doing was praying "Please don't die, Please don't die...................." said Sai in an extremly pleading voice, Will Hikaru survive the poison find out in the next epic enstalment

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im on chap 5 now and the manga's really good
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im on chap 5 now and the manga's really good
all right tell everyone you see

here is chapter 7

We fade into the hospital in the morning, "Excuse me are u the nurse?if so are the visiting hours over?" said Sai, "No they just began, Who would u like to visit?' said the nurse questioningly, "Ken Oritema" said Sai, " Sorry to tell u this but.................he died just this morning' said the nurse sadly, NO ur lying!, he's alive, HE"S ALIVE!, he can't die, As Sai said that she ran towards Ken's room grief stricken, "Ken! you can't die, Lady Hikaru said u wouldn't die, that makes her a lier, u were suppose to live because u were a master samurai!" said Sai choking on her words in pain and grief, NOOO! Sai screamed as she ran outside "Lady Hikaru you lied!" said Sai in much grief, "So you've heard that the poison was to strong for Ken"said Lady Hiakru, NO! NO! NO! NO! said Sai while ponding the soft snow viciously,
"There may be a way to bring him back with a summoning technique, but it will drain almost all of my Rikichi" said Lady Hikaru, "I don't care how much rikichi u use, just try it!" said Sai hopefully, "All right all try my best, but we gotta head inside" said lady Hiakru, Back inside the hospital, "Excuse me Miss nurse, but is it okay if i try a resurrection on Orutema Ken, i am one of the five master samuri" said Lady Hikarul, "Y-Yes go ahead but be careful said the nurse with uncertainty, Lady Hikaru and Sai head to Ken's room, "Hopefully this resurrection technique will work", I'm the only one who can perform it so stand back" said Lady Hikaru,"Okay! here goes summoning technique, rising of Zoritino Tonbi!", Lady Hkaru and then the ground starts shaking, and then a CRASH!, "So what do u need Hikaru?' said the mysterious voice, 'We need u to resurrect this boy" said Lady Hikaru, "All right i'll put all my power into it!" said Zoritino, at that moment a shadow arm appears, "What is he going to do with that shadow arm said Sai nervously, "Well he is going to stick it through his body so he can ressurect Ken" said Lady Hiakru reassuringly, "Ohhh man, i think my heart just skipped a beat" said Sai more nervously, "All right here i go!" shouts Zoritino, after that all u hear are some clashing and banging noises, "Resurrection Technique!" shouts Zoritino, suddenly a loud BOOM!, and then nothing, out of the silence they hear a voice "mmmm, Morning everyone did i miss something?" said Ken questioningly, "You wouldn't believe, said Sai as relief washed over her.

To be continued..............
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Old 12-03-2007, 09:46 PM   #14 (permalink)
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and here is chap 8 say if you want more

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"I was really dead?" said Ken with confusion, "Yep that is what Lady Hikaru and Sai said", said Shane, "I'snt that right Sai?"said Shane questioningly, "Sai?', "uhhh Sai u there?","What is she looking at? said Shane curiously, "It looks like a job opening for the ramen and sushi shop" said Ken, All of the sudden there hear a thud and Sai hits the ground, Uhhh is Sai alive said Shane and Ken while prodding and poking Sai, All of a sudden, Sai jumps up and dashes of toward the Ramen shop, " Hey! wait up Sai!" yells Ken as the now only see her outline int he distance, Ken and Shane race to the Ramen shop, as they arrive, "Why did you run away from us like that?" said Ken to Sai questioningly, "Ever since i was a small child, right before my father died, he said his most favorite thing to do was cook" said Sai with mournful voice, We fade into one of Sai's flashbacks, Sai i know this is a little weird, but one of my favorite hobby's is cooking" said Sai's dad, " Daddy that's not weird it's.....Cute!" said a young Sai in a young and innocent voice, " They say here in Samu, whenever u cook and put love into it, the person who eat's it's will become immortal" said Sai's dad, back to the current scene, " That night I-I..........................killed my father" said Sai in a shaky voice, back to the flash back, "Daddy i can cook!, I ate the food i made and put all my love into it!, now I wanna see if i'm immortal said Sai excitedly with a knife on her throat, "Sai no! i was lying! don't do it! said Sai's father desperately, " No i will" said Sai convinced, while moving the sharp metal knife across her throat, NOOOOOOOOO! Sai's father yelled while jumping toward Sai, "Whaaaa??" said Sai misunderstood while accidentally raising the knife and stabbing her dad, *sob**sob*"Father what have i done!" i'm sorry, i-i'm so sorry", said Sai in so much grief that she was choking on her words, " Sai have to tell u something before i....(a wheezing sound), die, is to never stop cookin-, Sai's father gives his final breath and passes on, "DADDY?": yells Sai, back to the current scene,"F-from that day on i-i pledged to be the best cook ever, in honor of my dad said Sai with while crying with remorse, Wow! cooking actually looks fun" said Shane with enthusiasm, "I guess i'll try it out too" said Ken, suddenly BOOM!, "get out of here u fools!" yells the ramen shop owner, we fade into another ramen shop
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Old 12-03-2007, 10:51 PM   #15 (permalink)
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all right i'm gonna add the rest here is chap 9

at the next ramen shop, BOOM!, "GET OUT!" yells the ramen shop owner, seconds later at the next ramen shop, KABOOM!, "GET OUT OF HERE!" said the ramen shop owner furiously, "Ughh.... how do u do it Sai?" asked Shane questioningly, "Do what?, ohhh.... u mean cook, well i'm not an ramen expert, but i good at making pastries, like pies and etc"said Sai, "Hey Sai do u still actually believe if u put all ur love into cooking u'll become immortal?"asked Ken, "Nope, that's all in the past now" said Dai wistfully, "You think that, that legend is not real" said a mysterious voice. "Then ur cheating yourself" said the mysterious man while skillfully jumping down from the roof in one bound,"let me introuduce myself i am Cai Kitaksu", Later at the ramen shop while everyone was having a steaming bowl of ramen, "Whaaaa?, so there really is a food that exists that will actually make u immortal!" said Shane in disbelief, "Yes but u have to have enough rikichi to eat it or..... it'll kill u ...instantly said Cai, "T-Tell me ur full name said Sai in a ste=ate of shock and confusion, "As i said before it's Cai Kitaksu" said Cai, "No i mean your full first name" said Sai demandingly, "It's Cai and nothing else" said Cai, "N-No it's not!, it's Zuru!" said Sai, "Sai?' said Cai confusingly, "Y-You've grown so much!"said Zuru, "What have u become Zuru?, why do u call yourself Cai Kitaksu? said Sai confused, "Errr... what's going on?" said Shane confused, "I have no idea" said Ken equally as confused, "The truth is Sai i-i'm wanted by.......black samurai" said Zuru, "Why? would u be wanted by the black samurai said Sai confused, "I-I don't wanna say why" said Zuru, "Please tell me Zuru!" said Sai demandingly, "I-I killed our mother......" said Zuru shamefully, Wha-a...., that's a horrible thing to do!" said Sai angrily, "Pfffff...... you killed are father so now were even!. so u have no right to judge me!" said Zuru angrily, "This is getting interesting" said Shane, "Let's just slowly run away like scared little children" said Ken, "Come on Shane, Ken were leaving" said Sai as she started to walk away, "Wait Sai!" yelled Zuru, "What do u want" said Sai emotionley, "I have a reason for killing mother, if i didn't kill her she would have killed you" said Zuru, "and please take this map, it will help u", as Zuru handed it to Sai, "Thank you for the information and the map Zuru, I love u goodbye" said Sai, Later that evening, "Hmmmm i wonder what that map is about?" said Shane curiously, "Hmph i bet i know" said Sai with a smile.
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here is chap 10

In the distance we hear a walkie talkie sound fffzzzzz, "Ha ha there coming boss" said Zuru greedily, "Good......" said the boss with a grin. Back to Ken, Sai and Shane, "So are u actually saying that this map will lead us to the food of immortality?" said Ken skeptically, "Yes seriously, what else could it possibly lead us to?" said Sai reassuringly, "So were gonna find whatever it is right?" said Shane impatiently, "Yes but first we gotta find and then rent a boat" said Ken, "But...... were flat out broke" said Sai honestly, We see Sai, Ken and Shane at the boat shop, "Get back here with my boat trouble makers!" said the boat shop owner furiously, "Paddles faster baka's!" said shouted Sai, "All right are you sure were on the right ocean?"said Shane questioningly, "Here let me check the map.......yup this is the right one" said Sai, "We just keep following this route and-all of a sudden an arrow swishes through the air and plunges in to Sai's back and she falls heavily on the bottom of the boat, "Aaauuugghhhhh...." Sai grunted in agony, "Sai, Sai are u okay!?" said Shane horrified, "N-No you BAKA! what just-aauugghh(a surge of pain goes through Sai's body)-hit me?" said Sai painfully, "Well you have an arrow stuck in ur back.... but who shot it?' said Ken angrily and confused, "Me you fools!" said the mysterious stranger, "I am Jiro i was sent to assassinate you and i will carry out my mission!" said Jiro with killing intent in his voice, "Sai stay back it's dangerous and you are in no condition to fight Me and Shane will handle this, okay?" said Ken worriedly "Alright"said Sai agreeing, "Four times the strength of you two combined would not beat me!" said Jiro with an overconfident grin on his face, "What about me?" said the stranger with killing intent in his voice, "Huh Zook i never expected you to arrive, well now that means three kills in one day" said Jiro surprised, "Wow..... don't these people know were the goos guys" said Shane confused, "Time to die" said Zook ........

to be continued..........
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here is chap 11

"Hmph i beat you and your pathetic family six years ago" said Jiro arrogantly , "Teh don't underestimate me! i have been training for awhile"said Zook, Zook then chants his family language/art," KUMAE SAMEE AKA TIRI", "KUMAE SAMEE AKA TIRI, KUMAE SAMEE AKA TIRI!!!" chants Zook. all of a sudden we hear the wind gust by and something arrizes from the water. "WHAAATTT??? you could not have been able to master the Akiri clan demon ressurection in that period of time" said Jiro in shock, "Go my water demons, drain his rikichi until it is gone" says Zook, "Augghhhhhh!!" yells Jiro in pain and then falls into the water, "Wow.... that was amazing" says Shane in awe, "What kind of-(stops in the middle of her sentence and grips her stomach in pain)-technique is that?" said Sai questioningly "I'll tell you later but first we must attend to your wound that arrow has poison in it and it is spreading quickly" said Zook with a reassuring smile, later we fade into seeing the gang having a conversation, "So what was your name again?" asked Shane questioningly, "Zook Akiri , i am a Toro that is a name for a person who brings back demon souls to fight in my village" said Zook proudly, "Oh and also i'm not trying to be nosy but i can tell by the map that you are looking for the food of immortality" said Zoro, "Yea so what?"said Ken, "Hmph aren't you a cocky one.... not to brag or anything but i have taken a bite of the food of immortality, like the results?" says Zook.
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here is chapter 12

"Wha-at!?" said Shane in shock, "You actually tool a bit of the food of immortality?" said Shane in amazement","....Um wasn't obvious he mastered the Akiri clan demon resurrection technique in less then four seconds, a normal person would have died instantly" said Sai, "Hmm..... so your the smart one eh?" said Zook questioningly, "Anyway.... if you found the food of immortality, you can lead us to it right?" said Shane questioningly, "Sorry but no can do" said Zook as he shook his head, "Whaa?" said Shane and Sai in unison, "The reason is, whenever someone finds the hidden food of immortality food-(Zook is cut off by Ken)-"You have to hide it again" said Ken smartly, "Yes that is correct but also, when you find the food of immortality, a microscopic insect attaches it's self to you, once you confirm the place where you are going to hide the food again, the insect goes into your rikichi flow and clears your mind on any information of the food" said Zook, " So your saying that you know squat about the food?" said Shane clearly disappointed, "Yep that's right" said Zook honestly, "hmph your useless, let's go already" said Shane rudely, "Please wait! can i please join your trio?" asked Zook, "What's the point you already found the food, so then what's the point of being with us?" asked Sai, "Well i want to catch up on my training and besides it may be fun" said Zook "I say we let him join, you saw how good he was at fighting and he may have some important information about the sea we are on" said Ken, "Alright.... Welcome aboard Zook!" said Shane with a smile
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and here is chap 13 (a bit emo lol)

"So Zook, is there an island or a city nearby here?" said Ken questioningly, "Well to be frank the closest civilization is two hundred and seventeen miles from here" said Zook honestly, "Ohhhh great......" said Shane with a sarcastic happiness, "Oh cheer up Shane, I got a new move to teach you" said Zook reassuringly, "Really!?, awesome!" said Shane with a new found hope, ....a couple of hours later......., "Hmm.... so this is how you have to do it?" asked Shane, "Yep that's it, want me to demonstrate again?" asked Zook, "Okay so you first take out any sharp object or weapon and you slice it across your wrist were the strongest and least weak veins are" said Zook, Zook quickly slits his wrist you hear a squish sound, "Ahhhh..... A-anyway you hastily suck up your blood and mix it in with your rikichi" said Zooks numb with pain, Then Zook sucks his blood up in a slurping sound, as he trys to keep the blood his mouth he manages to say, " Ven, yoush shpit it witsh all yoursh might" said Zook with every breath trying to retain his blood from dripping out of his mouth, Zook gargles his blood and then he takes a huge breath and spits out with all his might, at that moment a needle on fire zooms out of Zook's mouth and burns the iron sword as it sizzles into a molten metal, " A-and there you have it" said Zook out of breath, "But be warned only use this move at the most critical of times it is very dangerous" warns Zook, "So the end result is that when your blood and rikichi mix together it makes a fine needle that can burn anything?" asks Shane, "Yep that's the end result".
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sorry only 13 chapters that's all that has been written so far, sorry u'll have to wait a while to see what happens next
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