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This is a manga originally created by Hitake Kakashi (a member here) i'm am the editor of the manga, This manga is called Ginseng, tell me what you think of it if you read it
all right the main characters are Uzeru Shane, Kopato Sai, Oritema Ken, and Ushiba Hikura.
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all right first chapter
The main characters of the story are Uzeru Shane, Kopato Sai, Oritema Ken and Ushiba Hikura The story starts with Shane walking down a street, "GYAAAAAAH!", A gang member gives Shane a nasty look, gulp!I'm sorry! I'm sorry!, All i did was bump into u, ( which he added with an innocent look in his eyes), I said sorry like three times! said Shane apologetically "Shut the kid up! Iki, said Bonzu the gang boss, "i'll shut the kid up"," Ken get the kunai knife!". "Stop it! you guys ur gonna hurt him! said Sai, "Shut Up! says Iki in an angry voice and then flings the kunai at Sai, "AHHHH" Sai sobs in pain, " Guys this isn't right Ken says in an worried voice, at that moment Ken gets an kunai flung at his face, " Shut up! Ken, says Iki angrily,"Your gonna wish u never bumped into us says Iki in an menacing voice, At that moment an samurai sword pierces the air and heads straight for Iki's hand,"AHHHH! who the hell threw that! Iki says in an furious voice, "Me" says Hikura smugly, who jumps down from a branch, "You guys are lucky that this fight is in the public", "AHHHH! Lady Hikura says Iki worriedly,"You guys better not do this again says Hikura while examining Ken's scar, "Come with me, while rubbing Ken's arm," Who me" says Ken, "Yea u" says Hikura, "Also what are ur names?, pointing at Shane and Sai," I'm Shane and I'm Sai" which they said at the same time, "Come with me for a treat of Ramen said Hikura. To be continued............
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Here's the second chapter
"So you said ur names were Ken, Sai and Shane?" asked Hikaru, "Yeah!" said Shane enthusiascally," We're gonna get ramen right? said Shane, " Yup" said Hikaru, "YAAAY!" said Shane with much happiness, While the four sat down to enjoy their ramen, a question popped into Hikaru's mind, "So Ken how did u get into the Atsuruki gang?", " I don't know...... I'm the youngest in the gang seven said Ken puzzled, " And that scar on ur arm, is that the scar of th-I mean hows ur ramen?" said Hitaru questioningly," Hey Miss Hikaru that gang seemed surprised to see u?"said Sai "Huh...... you don't know, I'm the legendary master samuri!" said Hikaru with suprise, You mean ur the one my mommy always tells me stories about said Sai with unbelieved eyes, "Hahaha" said Hikaru with delight,"Hey why don't we meet here tommorow morning?", "Sure!"said Ken, Sai and Shane all at once enthusiascally, The next morning......." I can't wait to see Lady Hikura aga-at that moment Sai heard the clashing of swords and Lady Hikura in the thick of battle with an enemy, " Sai! go wake up Ken and Shane and leave the village!" said Lady Hikuara in an worridy voice, Sai rushed to Shane and Ken's house, "Shane, Ken we gotta get out of here!, the village is under attack!" said Sai with much emphasis, At that moment the trio, Ken, Sai and Shane, rush out to the forest leaving there village behind. To be continued................
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Hey A7 where can we read this then?
*outposted* sorry im reading it now...
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lol me and hitake made it post if you want more
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Oh yeah sure. Its pretty good so far
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okay here's chap 3 (i have thirteen done)
A couple years later..... cling, cling the sound of metal swords clashing rang out through the air, "Your to weak to try to be a master samuri if u can't even beat me!" said Ken with much confidence, " G-Guys let's go back to the Inn it's r-really cold" said Sai as every snowflake that fell made her feel colder, " Yea i guess it's pretty cold we should head back Shane" said Ken, "What are u afraid of being beaten!?" said Shane mockingly, at that moment a frigid wind blew by, " Y-Yea it's pretty cold we should head back now, Once inside the Inn "Here's ur hot chocolate sweetie" said the room service worker with a smile (handing the cup to Sai), and here's ur coffe sir, "Thank you" said Shane "Ken do u want anything?", No thanks said Ken politley, "As soon as we get up next morning i'm gonna keep training to become the best samuri in the world!" said Shane with much confidence, " Speaking of morning i'm headed to bed said Ken with a yawn, "Yea me too" said Sai sounding equally as tired, "Yea i guess I am also" said Shane. The next morning...... "Wow there's already ramen in my room and i haven't even got out of bed yet cool!" said Shane while slurping it down, After that Shane proceeds to Ken's door and knocks on it, " Come on Ken let's go train and let's not bring Sai this time, all she will do is complain how cold it is", said Shane, Shane and Ken walk outside,"You are going down this tim-Shane is cut off by the sound of crackling twigs and a huge cloud of smoke which is coming from the huge forest fire, " Holy crap! how can a fire survive in heavy snow like this?" asked Ken surprisingly, "I dunno how, but we have to check it out!" said Shane with much curosity, As they run toward where the fire started burning, Shane and Ken both pant out of, running so fast toward the fire, "Hahahahaha' said a mysterious menacing voice, " Do not interfere with my work!" says a mysterious man who jumps down from a tree, " my name is Toshibo Ochiro and anyone who stands in my path will......................die To be continued...................
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and here is chapter 4 i gotta go i'll post more later
At the inn in the morning Sai just wakes up "Yawwnn!" , " Come on guys let's go tra- "Where did they go?" asked Sai confused, There in the snow bank Sai hears mumble mumble "Once i get my hands on that little theif i'm gonna rip his throat ou-Sai is then cut off by a huge cloud of smoke hovering in the sky, Sai gasps in horror "So that's where Ken and Shane went of to train, "better get over there fast looks like trouble" said Sai hurridly, Ten minutes later "Almost there just a little further" Sai says while she trips, At that moment the ground starts shaking, "Huh?" says Sai puzzled, at that moment Sai hears a "Splash,Spalsh", "Need a lift?" says the mysterious voice, "It can't be!" says Sai unbelivingly, "But it is" says the mysterious voice, "L-Lady Hikaru?" say's Sai questioningly, "Yup it's me,So where do u need to go?" says Lady Hikaru, A couple minutes later at the forest, "How can we beat him he's so strong!" says Shane doubtfull, unoticed Lady Hikaru and Sai arrive at the scene "You can beat him from help with us", "Lady Hikaru is that really u" says Kena and Shane at the same time doubtfully, "Yes it reallt me" sayd Lady Hikaru reasuringly, "Toshibo Ochiro, what are u doing picking on squirts like this?", "You know him?" asks Shane, "I'll explain later" says Lady Hikaru, at that moment they hear a splash! and some snow is melted in an blink of an eye, "Wow! how did he do that?" says Sai puzzled, "You see that hole in his hand?,that is where sound waves pass through that can melt almost anything" says Lady Hikaru informing the others, "So that's what u were saying, to keep away from the hand" says Ken, " Ye-Watch out!", the sound of swords clashing rings out through the air, " Wow! that sword is huge" says shane in amazement, "We need to get stronger" say's Ken worridly, " I know what will stop it, Ken look at his eye" says Lady Hikaru confidently, 'N-No it can't be....why did u make me notice that!, you son of a bi-, enraged Ken extends his arm to punch one of his allies, only to be stopped dead by Lady Hikaru catching his fist, "Take ur anger out on him, not ur allies!" says Lady Hikaru angrily, " Here this will help, Secret technique water demon!", "AGGGHH!" Ken crys out, "Now channel ur anger into ur samuri technique, rising of the water demon", says Lady Hikuar reasuringly, "Samuri technique, Rising of the water demon!" Ken yells out, silence pierces the air and then the grounds starts rumbalig and then BOOM!, nothing......... and then RAARRR!, the water demon rises from the ground, "Haha, good move but not good enough!, Black ninja technique!, Rising of the black shadow demon!. To be continued.............
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yea i am sometime alright here is chap 5 "But i thought only the five master samuri's had enough rikichi, to summon that, wait a minute does that mean?" say's Sai questioningly, "Yes he is a master samuri!, by the time he is my age he will be ten times as strong and powerful as you" said Lady Hikaru, "So just leave the battle to him"," Ohhhh alright said Shane in shock, "Why does Ken hate this Toshiro guy so much?, and also how do u know Ken hates him" said Sai questioningly, " Well, he told me when we first met, you and Shane were busy fighting over who could eat ramen faster" said Lady Hikaru with a laugh, *FLASHBACK*, "So Ken what happened with ur family?" asked Lady Hikaru, "W-Well it was a massacre" Ken said while weeping, "By who?" said Lady Hikaru, " W-Well it's painful to remember but the guy had a robot eye, a hole in his hand and knee, said Ken shakingly, (in the backaround Shane and Sai, "Ha beat you!"),*back to current scene*, "Poor Ken, no family, and no one to protect him or give him courage" Sai said feeling sorry for Ken, "You'll pay for killing my family!, water demon rip his heart out, I will get my revenge here!" said Ken in a furious voice, "Hahaha, you against me? The odds are like the chances ur water demon beating my shadow dem-Toshibo is suddenly cut off by a sword plunging into him, "I wouldn't talk so arrogantly before you die" says Ken confidently while he put's Toshibo's hand on his sword in his body,as he does that sound waves ripple into Toshibo's body, "You'll pay for this in hell!' Toshibo say's as he spits out his final words, "This is for my family!" Ken say's while charging toward Toshibo, All of a sudden a poison bomb flings in towards Ken, "AGGHHHH!" shouts Ken as it hit's him, At that moment Toshibo blow's up into nothing, "KEN!" shout's Sai with much worry,"Sai go get help!" Lady Hikura demands, " Ken, honey are you all right?!" said Lady Hikaru with much worry, "AGGHHH!" Ken say's with much pain, "Ken, it's all right, it's all right" said Lady Hikaru in a reassuring voice, at that moment the demon's puff away and the battle field is in dead silence............... To be continued..........................
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