Story

[Spicynoodle]

Bleh idk o_O
guess write a story and post it onto this thread? hah, couldn't think of a thread starter thing. It could be any kind of story so feel free to post <u>any</u>.
Rules are:
Make it appropriate
No plagurizing

thats about it i suppose. o_O
hmm i'll post mine shorty.

[Spicynoodle]

Two Brothers

Chapter one - The betrayal

He had his hand tighty gripped around his hilt of the sword, staring at his opponent. Adrenaline rushed through his vains like racing horses. His sweat shown, glistening, in the night sky. The moon was shining over the two, revealing their wounds. Blood was dribbling down their face, hitting the cold blackness that they were standing on.
"Why did you do it!?" yelled Erith. Tears were running down his face. "Why did you slaughter them, why did you slaughter our parents?!"
"It's something you wouldn't understand, something that had to be done." his brother said. He started to chuckle, and then he stood there glaring at Erith, emotionless. No guilt, no sorrow, nothing.
"I will kill you, my brother, i swear it. You will die Zen!" More tears were pooring down Erith's face. He charged with rage and sorrow. He clenched his sword, raised it up and slashed.
"Haha, is that what you call power little brother?" Blood was dripping from Zen's chest. He held his hand upon the opened wound. Zen got his sword out and started to laugh again. His shirt was stained in redness, still bleeding through his hands. He lunged his sword straight into his brothers stomach. Erith fell over staring his last stare at his brother. He slowly closed his eyes
"I hate you, Zen..." and his head fell onto the floor. His lifeless body was laying on the volcanic ground.
"Pathetic..." said Zen. He walked off laughing.
Was Erith dead?

[gaara's wrath]

i would do this but im already writeing the story for the tainted light...............

i may think of one later.....

[Saphire Reign]

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^Wow I like that..awesome..can u make more?

so can anyone post a story?

[gaara's wrath]

yes..........

[Saphire Reign]

hey then i'm gonna post one too

[Saphire Reign]

This story will bounce back and forth between 2 ppl..first it's a girl named alexis

The Man with White Hair

Alexis

I peeked out from around the oak tree I was standing behind, so I could catch a glimpse of the man who destroyed my village. I made sure I only stuck my head out far enough that I could see him. He had striking white hair that was just over shoulder length long. I could not see his face because he was turned but I did see he was wearing a long sleeved shirt and around the elbow, his shirt slit open down the rest of his arm. His pants were black and they flared out at the feet.

I slowly pulled out my sword. There would be only one chance to take him. I closed my eyes and thought about my family’s faces. I heard him stop moving; I steadied my blade, took a deep breath, and stepped out from behind the tree.

He didn’t turn at once but kept his back to me “Can I help you?” I growled, “Only thing you can do to help me is die.” He didn’t even flinch “And why is that?”
“My family!”
“I have no quarrel with you or your family. I don’t even know you.”
“Liar! You destroyed the village of Laso and that included my family!” He didn’t say anything so I took it as a sign that he was remembering, I sneered “Do you remember then?” This time he turned to face me, his eyes looking me over “Yes, I remember quite well in fact.” I didn’t let my face change “Before I kill you I would like to know one thing.” A smile played on his lips “Oh, what’s that?”
“All I want to know is why, why did you ?” He sighed, “Well, I think it’s because one of them ticked me off. Ah, yes, a guy named Nathan was the one.”
“What did he do?”
“He wouldn’t leave me alone so I killed him and others got involved and wait just a second why didn’t I kill you?” Regret and guild filled my face before I could stop them “I had gone to another village for something for my mother.” I put my sword out in front of me “Enough talk, it’s your time to die.” I came at him, swinging my sword to the right. He looked as though he dissolved, then reappeared behind me “Shall we make a wager on this battle?” I swung again and he dodged, I growled, “I don’t see why not.” He came at me and I jumped back, he smirked “Shall we say this is what will happen: If you win, you can kill me, but if I win, you get to be my servant for six months. Deal?”
“Deal.”

end chapter 1

[AnimeisAwesome7]

Originally Posted by Saphire Reign

This story will bounce back and forth between 2 ppl..first it's a girl named alexis

The Man with White Hair

Alexis

I peeked out from around the oak tree I was standing behind, so I could catch a glimpse of the man who destroyed my village. I made sure I only stuck my head out far enough that I could see him. He had striking white hair that was just over shoulder length long. I could not see his face because he was turned but I did see he was wearing a long sleeved shirt and around the elbow, his shirt slit open down the rest of his arm. His pants were black and they flared out at the feet.

I slowly pulled out my sword. There would be only one chance to take him. I closed my eyes and thought about my family’s faces. I heard him stop moving; I steadied my blade, took a deep breath, and stepped out from behind the tree.

He didn’t turn at once but kept his back to me “Can I help you?” I growled, “Only thing you can do to help me is die.” He didn’t even flinch “And why is that?”
“My family!”
“I have no quarrel with you or your family. I don’t even know you.”
“Liar! You destroyed the village of Laso and that included my family!” He didn’t say anything so I took it as a sign that he was remembering, I sneered “Do you remember then?” This time he turned to face me, his eyes looking me over “Yes, I remember quite well in fact.” I didn’t let my face change “Before I kill you I would like to know one thing.” A smile played on his lips “Oh, what’s that?”
“All I want to know is why, why did you ?” He sighed, “Well, I think it’s because one of them ticked me off. Ah, yes, a guy named Nathan was the one.”
“What did he do?”
“He wouldn’t leave me alone so I killed him and others got involved and wait just a second why didn’t I kill you?” Regret and guild filled my face before I could stop them “I had gone to another village for something for my mother.” I put my sword out in front of me “Enough talk, it’s your time to die.” I came at him, swinging my sword to the right. He looked as though he dissolved, then reappeared behind me “Shall we make a wager on this battle?” I swung again and he dodged, I growled, “I don’t see why not.” He came at me and I jumped back, he smirked “Shall we say this is what will happen: If you win, you can kill me, but if I win, you get to be my servant for six months. Deal?”
“Deal.”

end chapter 1

it was very good

i would post mine but it already have a thread and story

[Saphire Reign]

thanks A7...and I LOVE your story

[AnimeisAwesome7]

Originally Posted by Saphire Reign

thanks A7...and I LOVE your story

Thank you urs is good u should continue