12-05-2007, 10:58 PM
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Two brothers (a story)
I decided to post my story onto a different thread. I went with the flow. :P anywayss...
Two Brothers Chapter one - The betrayal He had his hand tighty gripped around his hilt of the sword, staring at his opponent. Adrenaline rushed through his vains like racing horses. His sweat shown, glistening, in the night sky. The moon was shining over the two, revealing their wounds. Blood was dribbling down their face, hitting the cold blackness that they were standing on. "Why did you do it!?" yelled Erith. Tears were running down his face. "Why did you slaughter them, why did you slaughter our parents?!" "It's something you wouldn't understand, something that had to be done." his brother said. He started to chuckle, and then he stood there glaring at Erith, emotionless. No guilt, no sorrow, nothing. "I will kill you, my brother, i swear it. You will die Zen!" More tears were pooring down Erith's face. He charged with rage and sorrow. He clenched his sword, raised it up and slashed. "Haha, is that what you call power little brother?" Blood was dripping from Zen's chest. He held his hand upon the opened wound. Zen got his sword out and started to laugh again. His shirt was stained in redness, still bleeding through his hands. He lunged his sword straight into his brothers stomach. Erith fell over staring his last stare at his brother. He slowly closed his eyes "I hate you, Zen..." and his head fell onto the floor. His lifeless body was laying on the volcanic ground. "Pathetic..." said Zen. He walked off laughing. Was Erith dead?
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12-06-2007, 05:49 AM
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Re: Two brothers (a story)
oh yeah. It needs one, badly.
If not, the lounge is going to be flooded with stories later. :P
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12-06-2007, 01:03 PM
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Re: Two brothers (a story)
noodle....make more...this is a good story...plz
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12-06-2007, 09:29 PM
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Re: Two brothers (a story)
it's very good mine is called Ginseng not the way Gaara spelled it lol i spelled the thread name wrong whoops
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