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Old 12-09-2007, 12:35 AM   #101 (permalink)
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WOW are u serious? it's that good?
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Old 12-09-2007, 12:36 AM   #102 (permalink)
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u should try..........
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Old 12-09-2007, 12:37 AM   #103 (permalink)
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yes! it really is that good!
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Old 12-09-2007, 01:14 AM   #104 (permalink)
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could you put more up maybe???
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Old 12-09-2007, 01:22 AM   #105 (permalink)
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An hour later we stopped. Alec stretched “It’s time to stop for the night.” Lecto all the sudden popped out behind us “Finally, I found you.” Alec sat “Finally, I thought you weren’t going to show up.”
“Yeah right.” I sat down next to Alec and closed my eyes. I felt Lecto look at Alec. Alec cleared his throat “Sit down Lecto.” I heard Lecto sit next to me “Master, you were quite kind to your brother today.”
“I needed information.”
“Did you get it?”
“Most of it.” I sighed “Boys I’m trying to sleep so zip it.” They went quiet but I heard them chuckle.


My eyes opened to a foggy mist. I was soaked to my bone and stood up, shivering. The sun still wasn’t quite up yet and as I glanced around. I sensed no one “Guys, anyone here?” A figure appeared in the fog “Hello, daughter.” I took a step back “Dad?” He walked toward me and I could see him, it was my dad, with him white hair and blue eyes. He came forward “Alexis.”
“How are you here?”
“You’re dreaming.”
“Why are you here?”
“To answer one of your questions.”
“Um, which one?”
“The one about Alec.”
“Alec?”
“Yes, the man that killed us.”
“I’m sorry dad. I tried to hate him but something got in the way. I’m sorry.” He put his hands on my shoulders “Honey, I love you and want you to be happy. I hear he has an excuse for killing us?”
I nodded “It was on one of his bad days.”

“Butterfly, don’t live your life thinking about what your mother or I or your brother would want you to do.”
“I want to avenge you, I don’t want your deaths to be in veins.”
“We are already dead.”
“I know but-.”
“There are no buts about it, we are dead and you are alive. Can I ask you something?” I nodded; he continued “Do you like this guy?” My face flushed and I nodded. He lifted my head up with his fingers “Answer me.”
“Yes, dad, I do like him.”
“Then what are you waiting for?”
“I wanted to avenge-.”
“No more, no more, I release you from trying to avenge us and free you to live your life.” A tear rolled down my cheeks “I love you dad.” He pulled me to him, hugged me hard, and whispered “I always have and always will love you, my dear daughter. Oh and by the way I-I approve of him, even though he killed us, for some strange reason I approve of him.” He started to disappear “Dad, please don’t go.” The wind blew my hair and the rest of his body disappeared “Daddy!!”


My eyes opened and I felt tears on my cheeks. I wiped my eyes and glanced around. Alec was lying next to me, watching me “Are you O.K.?” I nodded and glanced at Lecto then back to Alec. He sat up “Why were you crying in your sleep?” I looked down “I saw my father.” I looked up and he waited for me to continue “He spoke to me and answered my question. He gave me an interesting answer.” Alec looked into the sky “Today is going to be a hot day. Can I ask what question?”
“Don’t worry, I’ll tell you when I’m ready.” He nodded and glanced at the sleeping Lecto “Wake up, Lecto!” His eyes opened and he stood up “Yes master?”
“Time to go.” He glanced at me “Why is your face red?” I pulled my hand to my face “Um” Alec shook his head “She’s just hot Lecto.” He nodded “O.K….Next question, where are we going?” Alec glanced around the forest “We need to find Chikao.”
“Why?”
“First off I need to ask him a question then depending on his answer I may let him live.” Something about the way he said that didn’t let me question him, I just looked down. Alec sighed “Well, let’s get going.” He turned and bent down, I cleared my throat and stepped up to him “You want me to get on?”
“Why else would I be crouching down on the ground like this?” I took a shaky breath and climbed on. He stood up and started running, Lecto following closely.
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Old 12-09-2007, 01:32 AM   #106 (permalink)
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...You have me "on the edge of my seat" wanting to know what's next o.0
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lol im tryin to catch up ^hey hina
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Old 12-09-2007, 01:41 AM   #108 (permalink)
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Old 12-09-2007, 01:41 AM   #109 (permalink)
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yeah same!!!!! i love the twist you just put in!!!! its amazing how well you can write!
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can you put more up again???? sorry i just love the story and i can't get enough of it
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