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Light · 02-06-2008, 01:54 AM

It gets WAY cooler, you'll see. Once I reveal more about Ichi(since I've already thought up the plot of every single chapter until the end), it gets AWESOME.

And there was a reason I killed off Karin, but unfortunately you won't find out why until WAAAAAY later.

zabuzassword · 02-06-2008, 01:58 AM

awwww...........

Demon King Piccolo93 · 02-06-2008, 01:59 AM

nxt chapter plzzzz

Light · 02-06-2008, 02:02 AM

Blehhh...I dunno...It's a LOOOONG chapter, and I have to go to bed in like an hour...

EDIT-I have plenty of time to write the next chapter, so here it is.

Twilight-Chapter 4: The Team

Ichimori: Gaaaah....I'll NEVER find him...*Wanders aimlessly in a town*
Shopkeeper: Can I help you?
Ichimori: I'm looking for a teenager. Spiky brown hair, kinda tall, big claymore?
Shopkeeper: Heh, you've almost perfectly described yourself, besides the hair.
Ichimori: Well, we're pretty tight.
Shopkeeper: Sorry, I haven't seen anybody like that, but he'll be easy to spot if he has a claymore like yours, right?
Ichimori: Yeah, ya can't miss him.
Shopkeeper: Okay, I'll be on the lookout for anyone like that. You just keep looking.
Ichimori: Thanks for your help. *Walks away* Man, this isn't just a town, it's the country's port town. How am I supposed to find him?!
Man's voice: *Shouting* HEY!!! YOU CAN'T DO THAT!!! YOU LITTLE CHEATER!!! GET OUTTA HERE!!!
Boy's voice: Hey, hey! Watch it! Not the vest, NOT THE VEST!!! *Gets pushed out of the club and falls down* OWWWW!!!
Ichimori: Heh heh heh...You never change, do you?
Boy: Oh, hey Ichi. Where have YOU been all this time?
Ichimori: Killing Raiken, what else? You?
Boy: Gambling, what else?
Ichimori: *Sigh* I should've known. Kaiten, get up, would ya?
Kaiten: Huh? Oh, uh, right. *Gets up and dusts himself off* I HOPE YOU'RE HAPPY!!! YOU CRAPPED UP MY VEST!!! Hmph!
Ichimori: C'mon, I gotta talk to you.
*They walk to an alley*
Kaiten: What do you want?
Ichimori: I'm gonna save the world from the Twilight.
Kaiten: Oh no...Oh no no no. Oh NO. I SAID I would help you avenge your brother. But THIS?! I don't give a CRAP about the world! I thought YOU didn't either!
Ichimori: I thought so too...But I watched a little girl get killed by one of the Raiken. And I promised I would-
Kaiten: YOU AND YOUR PROMISES!!!
Ichimori: What's wrong with saving the world?
Kaiten: I'll TELL you "what's wrong"! EVERYTHING!!! We don't BELIEVE in destiny! I'll bet that girl tried to tell you you were the Savior, right?
Ichimori: ...
Kaiten: And if I was there and not you, she would think I was the Savior, right?
Ichimori: ...
Kaiten: EXACTLY! Anyone with a sword can save the world! Raiken are frickin' WEAK!
Ichimori: She's a LITTLE GIRL, Kaiten.
Kaiten: Like I give a damn. Besides, why would you want to destroy the Twilight? That's what gave you Ukazi.
Ichimori: I don't WANT Ukazi!!! And the Twilight just MADE him, it didn't seal him inside of me! I don't KNOW who did.
Kaiten: *Sigh* If you want to save the world, fine. But I'm not comin'.
Ichimori: And what will you do instead? You have NOTHING. No family, no money, NOTHING. Just like me.
Kaiten: ...
Ichimori: You're right. If YOU were there, and not ME, Karin would say that YOU were the Savior. That's because we BOTH are!
Kaiten: Bullsh-
Ichimori: You're wrong about the Raiken. The reason they're weak is because their the HENCHMEN. There are stronger ones out there.
Kaiten: So you think we're BOTH the Saviors?
Ichimori: That's what I'm saying.
Kaiten: ...Fine. I'll help you. But when it's all over, even the part where we avenge your brother, we do what I want.
Ichimori: Which IS?
Kaiten: Gambling! Having FUN!
Ichimori: You're not even OLD ENOUGH to gamble.
Kaiten: Like anyone CARES anymore?
Ichimori: Good point...Okay, so in order to save the world, we're gonna need more than just US.
Kaiten: You just said WE were the Saviors!
Ichimori: Yeah, but there are more.
Kaiten: How many more?
Ichimori: Just a few.
Kaiten: Gah...Fine.
Ichimori: It might take some time find them all, but once we do, we'll assemble a team.
Kaiten: What's the team called?
Ichimori: I dunno...How 'bout Twilight?
Kaiten: Why the hell would we be named that?!
Ichimori: 'Cause we're trying to destroy it.
Kaiten: I GUESS that makes sense...
Ichimori: I'm serious though, it may be another few months or even a YEAR before we find the first member.
Kaiten: What do we do in the meantime?
Ichimori: Train, kill Raiken, protect people. That kinda stuff.
Kaiten: Sounds like a plan. Where will we stay?
Ichimori: If worst comes to worst, we can always stay at Yin's place, but we should be able to get some money and find an Inn.
Kaiten: Who's Yin?
Ichimori: Some girl.
Kaiten: Ah. So what do we do right now?
Ichimori: Let's visit Yin.
Kaiten: What's up with this Yin? It's like you're obsessed with her.
Ichimori: I'm not OBSESSED.
Kaiten: Then what is it?
Ichimori: I dunno...
Kaiten: Okay, fine, let's go.
*They leave the town and run through the fields*
Ichimori: Here we go. She lives in that cottage over there.
Kaiten: Man, what a DUMP.
Ichimori: Well it's just her and her Grandma now that Karin's gone.
*They walk up to the house*
Ichimori: *Knocks*
Yin: *Opens door* Ichi! I didn't expect to see you so soon!
Ichimori: Just wanted to see how you were doing.
Yin: It's been like 4 hours...
Ichimori: Y-Yeah...
Yin: Well come in! Is that Kaiten?
Ichimori: Yup.
Kaiten: Hi.
Yin: It's nice to meet you.
*They walk inside*
Yin: Grandma, we have guests.
Ichimori: W-Wait a second! We're only stopping by!
Yin: You've got nowhere else to go! You're living with US. I won't take "no" for an answer this time!
Ichimori: Bah, fine.
Yin: Besides, we live in these HUGE fields. It's perfect for you to train.
Ichimori: I guess so...
Kaiten: So it's just you and your Grandma?
Yin: Yeah...My parents were taken from me by the Raiken a few years ago...Karin hardly remembered them. And now they've taken her too...
Ichimori: We tried...
Yin: I know...
Ichimori: ...
Yin: Ichi...I've decided...I want to fight the Raiken and destroy the Twilight with you and Kaiten.
Ichimori: Absolutely not! Your Grandma will be here all alone, and you don't even know how to use a sword!
Yin: My Grandma has already approved, and I can learn how to use a sword. Where did you learn?
Ichimori: In my clan, when you are born, you are born with the ability to manipulate the four elements. We quickly learn how to use a sword, and when we are 15 we can leave the village.
Yin: You're part of a clan?!
Ichimori: Yeah. Haven't you noticed the symbol on the back of my jacket?
*On back: The Japanese symbols Fire, Earth, Wind, Water and a circle around them*
Yin: Oh, I didn't notice!
Ichimori: You probably haven't heard of them because they were all wiped out.
Yin: ?!
Ichimori: A single man attacked our village, and killed everyone that was there.
Yin: So how did you survive?
Ichimori: My brother and I disobeyed our parents and went to play in the woods. When we came back everyone was dead.
Yin: What did you do?
Ichimori: We lived on. We trained as hard as we could. We found out that I was only capable of manipulating fire.
Yin: And?
Ichimori: When I was six, and my brother was 12, the man came back and killed him. The only reason I was spared was because I was a weakling, and he left me to die in the cold instead.
Yin: Then what?
Ichimori: I met Kaiten, and from then on I swore revenge. As the years went by, my hate only grew. I began to kill Raiken. I met Karin by chance.
Yin: Did anyone survive besides you?
Ichimori: ...When I was little my father left the village to go live his life. Only he never returned.
Yin: !
Ichimori: I believe he is still alive, totally unaware that I am the last surviving member of his family.
Kaiten: It's getting late, Ichi. I'm tired.
Ichimori: Yeah, we should go to bed.
Yin: We have a few spare bedrooms upstairs.
Ichimori: Okay. 'Night.
Kaiten: 'Night.
Yin: Goodnight, guys.

Female's voice: As they go to sleep, they each dream of the next day. Could Yin be the next member of Twilight? And even after Ichimori reveals more of his past, he is still shrouded in mysery...What is the secret behind that sword of his? And who exactly IS this "Ukazi"?

TO BE CONTINUED

zabuzassword · 02-06-2008, 11:27 PM

that WAS long but good.

i like kaiten...hes cool

Light · 02-07-2008, 01:54 AM

You'll like the other members of Twilight too once they appear. Ichimori's supposed to be the coolest(since he's the main character =P), but right now he's pretty weak. You'll see, once the series is almost over, you'll be like "WOW, I can't believe Ichimori used to be so WEAK!!!"

Yeah there's no way I could've posted this chapter last night lol.

zabuzassword · 02-07-2008, 02:41 AM

yeah lookin back at bleach thats wat i wonder about ichigo

Demon King Piccolo93 · 02-07-2008, 02:48 AM

cool that was a good chapter cant wait till the next comes out and the story progressess

Demon King Piccolo93 · 02-07-2008, 03:49 AM

uhhh should i hav read tales of the shinigami first cuz i havnt red that yet sooooooooooo

Light · 02-07-2008, 08:24 PM

Well that depends. If you watch/read Bleach then you should read it, but if you don't then you shouldn't read it.

Chapter 5 will be up later, I've been busy lately, but expect it to be up some time tonight.

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02-06-2008, 01:54 AM	#11 (permalink)
Light Limping Samurai Lvl.5 Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Searching for the remaining two members of Twilight, my group. Our goal is to destroy the Twilight. Posts: 275	Re: Twilight It gets WAY cooler, you'll see. Once I reveal more about Ichi(since I've already thought up the plot of every single chapter until the end), it gets AWESOME. And there was a reason I killed off Karin, but unfortunately you won't find out why until WAAAAAY later. __________________ [Only registered and activated users can see links. ] [Only registered and activated users can see links. ] [Only registered and activated users can see links. ]

02-06-2008, 01:58 AM	#12 (permalink)
zabuzassword Limping Samurai Lvl.5 Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: in a place where the nearest anime convention is 300 miles away Posts: 394	Re: Twilight awwww........... __________________ click here to read Sa ken Tsukiishi(moonstone) [Only registered and activated users can see links. ]

02-06-2008, 01:59 AM	#13 (permalink)
Demon King Piccolo93 Rookie Ninja Lvl.4 Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Inside of your head Posts: 191	Re: Twilight nxt chapter plzzzz

02-06-2008, 02:02 AM	#14 (permalink)
Light Limping Samurai Lvl.5 Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Searching for the remaining two members of Twilight, my group. Our goal is to destroy the Twilight. Posts: 275	Re: Twilight Blehhh...I dunno...It's a LOOOONG chapter, and I have to go to bed in like an hour... EDIT-I have plenty of time to write the next chapter, so here it is. Twilight-Chapter 4: The Team Ichimori: Gaaaah....I'll NEVER find him...Wanders aimlessly in a town Shopkeeper: Can I help you? Ichimori: I'm looking for a teenager. Spiky brown hair, kinda tall, big claymore? Shopkeeper: Heh, you've almost perfectly described yourself, besides the hair. Ichimori: Well, we're pretty tight. Shopkeeper: Sorry, I haven't seen anybody like that, but he'll be easy to spot if he has a claymore like yours, right? Ichimori: Yeah, ya can't miss him. Shopkeeper: Okay, I'll be on the lookout for anyone like that. You just keep looking. Ichimori: Thanks for your help. Walks away Man, this isn't just a town, it's the country's port town. How am I supposed to find him?! Man's voice: Shouting HEY!!! YOU CAN'T DO THAT!!! YOU LITTLE CHEATER!!! GET OUTTA HERE!!! Boy's voice: Hey, hey! Watch it! Not the vest, NOT THE VEST!!! Gets pushed out of the club and falls down OWWWW!!! Ichimori: Heh heh heh...You never change, do you? Boy: Oh, hey Ichi. Where have YOU been all this time? Ichimori: Killing Raiken, what else? You? Boy: Gambling, what else? Ichimori: Sigh I should've known. Kaiten, get up, would ya? Kaiten: Huh? Oh, uh, right. Gets up and dusts himself off I HOPE YOU'RE HAPPY!!! YOU CRAPPED UP MY VEST!!! Hmph! Ichimori: C'mon, I gotta talk to you. They walk to an alley Kaiten: What do you want? Ichimori: I'm gonna save the world from the Twilight. Kaiten: Oh no...Oh no no no. Oh NO. I SAID I would help you avenge your brother. But THIS?! I don't give a CRAP about the world! I thought YOU didn't either! Ichimori: I thought so too...But I watched a little girl get killed by one of the Raiken. And I promised I would- Kaiten: YOU AND YOUR PROMISES!!! Ichimori: What's wrong with saving the world? Kaiten: I'll TELL you "what's wrong"! EVERYTHING!!! We don't BELIEVE in destiny! I'll bet that girl tried to tell you you were the Savior, right? Ichimori: ... Kaiten: And if I was there and not you, she would think I was the Savior, right? Ichimori: ... Kaiten: EXACTLY! Anyone with a sword can save the world! Raiken are frickin' WEAK! Ichimori: She's a LITTLE GIRL, Kaiten. Kaiten: Like I give a damn. Besides, why would you want to destroy the Twilight? That's what gave you Ukazi. Ichimori: I don't WANT Ukazi!!! And the Twilight just MADE him, it didn't seal him inside of me! I don't KNOW who did. Kaiten: Sigh If you want to save the world, fine. But I'm not comin'. Ichimori: And what will you do instead? You have NOTHING. No family, no money, NOTHING. Just like me. Kaiten: ... Ichimori: You're right. If YOU were there, and not ME, Karin would say that YOU were the Savior. That's because we BOTH are! Kaiten: Bullsh- Ichimori: You're wrong about the Raiken. The reason they're weak is because their the HENCHMEN. There are stronger ones out there. Kaiten: So you think we're BOTH the Saviors? Ichimori: That's what I'm saying. Kaiten: ...Fine. I'll help you. But when it's all over, even the part where we avenge your brother, we do what I want. Ichimori: Which IS? Kaiten: Gambling! Having FUN! Ichimori: You're not even OLD ENOUGH to gamble. Kaiten: Like anyone CARES anymore? Ichimori: Good point...Okay, so in order to save the world, we're gonna need more than just US. Kaiten: You just said WE were the Saviors! Ichimori: Yeah, but there are more. Kaiten: How many more? Ichimori: Just a few. Kaiten: Gah...Fine. Ichimori: It might take some time find them all, but once we do, we'll assemble a team. Kaiten: What's the team called? Ichimori: I dunno...How 'bout Twilight? Kaiten: Why the hell would we be named that?! Ichimori: 'Cause we're trying to destroy it. Kaiten: I GUESS that makes sense... Ichimori: I'm serious though, it may be another few months or even a YEAR before we find the first member. Kaiten: What do we do in the meantime? Ichimori: Train, kill Raiken, protect people. That kinda stuff. Kaiten: Sounds like a plan. Where will we stay? Ichimori: If worst comes to worst, we can always stay at Yin's place, but we should be able to get some money and find an Inn. Kaiten: Who's Yin? Ichimori: Some girl. Kaiten: Ah. So what do we do right now? Ichimori: Let's visit Yin. Kaiten: What's up with this Yin? It's like you're obsessed with her. Ichimori: I'm not OBSESSED. Kaiten: Then what is it? Ichimori: I dunno... Kaiten: Okay, fine, let's go. They leave the town and run through the fields Ichimori: Here we go. She lives in that cottage over there. Kaiten: Man, what a DUMP. Ichimori: Well it's just her and her Grandma now that Karin's gone. They walk up to the house Ichimori: Knocks Yin: Opens door Ichi! I didn't expect to see you so soon! Ichimori: Just wanted to see how you were doing. Yin: It's been like 4 hours... Ichimori: Y-Yeah... Yin: Well come in! Is that Kaiten? Ichimori: Yup. Kaiten: Hi. Yin: It's nice to meet you. They walk inside Yin: Grandma, we have guests. Ichimori: W-Wait a second! We're only stopping by! Yin: You've got nowhere else to go! You're living with US. I won't take "no" for an answer this time! Ichimori: Bah, fine. Yin: Besides, we live in these HUGE fields. It's perfect for you to train. Ichimori: I guess so... Kaiten: So it's just you and your Grandma? Yin: Yeah...My parents were taken from me by the Raiken a few years ago...Karin hardly remembered them. And now they've taken her too... Ichimori: We tried... Yin: I know... Ichimori: ... Yin: Ichi...I've decided...I want to fight the Raiken and destroy the Twilight with you and Kaiten. Ichimori: Absolutely not! Your Grandma will be here all alone, and you don't even know how to use a sword! Yin: My Grandma has already approved, and I can learn how to use a sword. Where did you learn? Ichimori: In my clan, when you are born, you are born with the ability to manipulate the four elements. We quickly learn how to use a sword, and when we are 15 we can leave the village. Yin: You're part of a clan?! Ichimori: Yeah. Haven't you noticed the symbol on the back of my jacket? On back: The Japanese symbols Fire, Earth, Wind, Water and a circle around them Yin: Oh, I didn't notice! Ichimori: You probably haven't heard of them because they were all wiped out. Yin: ?! Ichimori: A single man attacked our village, and killed everyone that was there. Yin: So how did you survive? Ichimori: My brother and I disobeyed our parents and went to play in the woods. When we came back everyone was dead. Yin: What did you do? Ichimori: We lived on. We trained as hard as we could. We found out that I was only capable of manipulating fire. Yin: And? Ichimori: When I was six, and my brother was 12, the man came back and killed him. The only reason I was spared was because I was a weakling, and he left me to die in the cold instead. Yin: Then what? Ichimori: I met Kaiten, and from then on I swore revenge. As the years went by, my hate only grew. I began to kill Raiken. I met Karin by chance. Yin: Did anyone survive besides you? Ichimori: ...When I was little my father left the village to go live his life. Only he never returned. Yin: ! Ichimori: I believe he is still alive, totally unaware that I am the last surviving member of his family. Kaiten: It's getting late, Ichi. I'm tired. Ichimori: Yeah, we should go to bed. Yin: We have a few spare bedrooms upstairs. Ichimori: Okay. 'Night. Kaiten: 'Night. Yin: Goodnight, guys. Female's voice: As they go to sleep, they each dream of the next day. Could Yin be the next member of Twilight? And even after Ichimori reveals more of his past, he is still shrouded in mysery...What is the secret behind that sword of his? And who exactly IS this "Ukazi"? TO BE CONTINUED __________________ [Only registered and activated users can see links. ] [Only registered and activated users can see links. ] [Only registered and activated users can see links. ] Last edited by Light; 02-06-2008 at 10:56 PM..

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02-06-2008, 11:27 PM	#15 (permalink)
zabuzassword Limping Samurai Lvl.5 Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: in a place where the nearest anime convention is 300 miles away Posts: 394	Re: Twilight that WAS long but good. i like kaiten...hes cool __________________ click here to read Sa ken Tsukiishi(moonstone) [Only registered and activated users can see links. ]

02-07-2008, 01:54 AM	#16 (permalink)
Light Limping Samurai Lvl.5 Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Searching for the remaining two members of Twilight, my group. Our goal is to destroy the Twilight. Posts: 275	Re: Twilight You'll like the other members of Twilight too once they appear. Ichimori's supposed to be the coolest(since he's the main character =P), but right now he's pretty weak. You'll see, once the series is almost over, you'll be like "WOW, I can't believe Ichimori used to be so WEAK!!!" Yeah there's no way I could've posted this chapter last night lol. __________________ [Only registered and activated users can see links. ] [Only registered and activated users can see links. ] [Only registered and activated users can see links. ]

02-07-2008, 02:41 AM	#17 (permalink)
zabuzassword Limping Samurai Lvl.5 Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: in a place where the nearest anime convention is 300 miles away Posts: 394	Re: Twilight yeah lookin back at bleach thats wat i wonder about ichigo __________________ click here to read Sa ken Tsukiishi(moonstone) [Only registered and activated users can see links. ]

02-07-2008, 02:48 AM	#18 (permalink)
Demon King Piccolo93 Rookie Ninja Lvl.4 Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Inside of your head Posts: 191	Re: Twilight cool that was a good chapter cant wait till the next comes out and the story progressess __________________ Look I Can Tear My Arm Off!!!!

02-07-2008, 03:49 AM	#19 (permalink)
Demon King Piccolo93 Rookie Ninja Lvl.4 Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Inside of your head Posts: 191	Re: Twilight uhhh should i hav read tales of the shinigami first cuz i havnt red that yet sooooooooooo __________________ Look I Can Tear My Arm Off!!!!

02-07-2008, 08:24 PM	#20 (permalink)
Light Limping Samurai Lvl.5 Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Searching for the remaining two members of Twilight, my group. Our goal is to destroy the Twilight. Posts: 275	Re: Twilight Well that depends. If you watch/read Bleach then you should read it, but if you don't then you shouldn't read it. Chapter 5 will be up later, I've been busy lately, but expect it to be up some time tonight. __________________ [Only registered and activated users can see links. ] [Only registered and activated users can see links. ] [Only registered and activated users can see links. ] Last edited by Light; 02-09-2008 at 06:33 PM..

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