Twilight

[Demon King Piccolo93]

next chapter plzz im dieng of waiting

[zabuzassword]

where r u light?
also whenever u decide to come back... moonstone has been posted cept its under a thread that says sa ken tsukiishi

[Light]

Sorry, I had some last minute homework to do and COMPLETELY forgot.

Here's Chapter 5.

Twilight-Chapter 5: To Find a Teacher...

*The next day*
Ichimori: *Opens door* See ya, Yin! We'll be back soon!
Yin: Where are you guys going without me?! I'm part of Twilight too!
Ichimori: You can't be in our team yet, I already told you. You have no training.
Yin: So YOU train me!
Ichimori: All I can do is teach you how to use a sword. You have to be BORN with the ability to use elements.
Yin: Why would I need to know elements anyway?
Ichimori: Because, you can't get past by JUST using a sword. Okay, we're going. C'mon, Kaiten.
Kaiten: Right. *Walks out door*
Yin: Wait! You still haven't told me where you're going!
Ichimori: To find you a teacher.
Yin: You just said YOU could teach me how to use a sword!
Ichimori: I don't have time, I'm the Savior, remember?
Yin: *Sigh* Okay, you guys can go. As long as you don't try to go after the Ten Captains of the Twilight.
Kaiten: The who?
Yin: See, the Raiken you guys are used to are just the foot soldiers. At the top, there are Ten Captains who command them.
Ichimori: Where are they?
Yin: Well, there is no escape out of the Twilight shroud, everyone knows that.
Kaiten: So what?
Yin: Some people believe there is a gate that seperates the Twilight shroud from the Earth's natural sky.
Ichimori: !
Yin: And others believe that the Ten Captains dwell beyond that gate.
Ichimori: Don't worry, Yin. We're just going to get you a teacher. We won't go after the Ten Captains, promise.
Yin: Good. Now get outta here, and if you don't come back with a teacher, I'll beat the-
*Door closes*
Yin: ...Crap outta you.
*Meanwhile*
Kaiten: *Running across the fields* When are we gonna go after the Captains?
Ichimori: *Running across the fields* When we've aquired all the members of Twilight.
Kaiten: Maaaan...I wanna fight them NOW.
Ichimori: We can't. Now quit talking about that, Yin will kill us if she find out we're plotting to go after them.
*They arrive at the town*
Ichimori: Okay, we're here. And we're JUST here to find Yin a teacher. That means NO GAMBLING.
Kaiten: Bleh...Why are YOU always in charge?
Ichimori: Because I'm the sensible one. *Starts walking away*
Kaiten: Hey! Wait! What's THAT supposed to mean?! *Runs after him*
Ichimori: *Rolls eyes* Oh, nothing.
*They walk through town for a few hours*
Kaiten: Man, we've been walking for so long, and we haven't found a teacher!
Ichimori: Just be patient. This is a PORT town. It's got EVERYTHING.
Kaiten: Yeah, but this is Kazin, the smallest Port Town in the country!
Ichimori: Trust me, okay? It's not that hard to find a good teacher. Huh?
*They stop in front of a small cottage*
Ichimori: *Reading sign* "The Great Mow, Martial Arts and Sword Classes".
Kaiten: Sounds promising.
Ichimori: Yeah, let's go in. *Opens door*
*Bell rings*
Old Man: Ah, welcome. I am the Great Mow, Martial Arts and Sword Master.
Ichimori: I need some sword lessons for a friend of mine. Her name's Yin, she lives a little ways off from Kazin.
Mow: Very well. I will teach her everything I know.
Ichimori: How long will it take?
Mow: Using my unique method, it will only take a few weeks.
Ichimori: That seems reasonable. How much is it?
Mow: It depens how long she takes the classes.
Ichimori: Okay, thanks, Master Mow. C'mon Kaiten.
*They leave the shop*
Ichimori: *Walking through town* Yin will be happy.
Kaiten: *Walking through town* Especially since it's only for a few weeks.
Ichimori: Yeah, that's the part I can't believe. Everything he knows, for a few weeks, and we don't have to pay anything until she's done.
Kaiten: *Stops* Uh oh.
Ichimori: *Stops* What is it?
Kaiten: Even if it IS only for a few weeks, we don't have ANY money!
Ichimori: Ouch, you're right. Yin's Grandma is poor, too.
Kaiten: How are we gonna get the money? Kill Raiken?
Ichimori: No. We're the Saviors. We kill Raiken because we want to save the world, not as a job. We shouldn't expect anything in return.
Kaiten: Then what should we do?
Ichimori: You could gamble.
Kaiten: Not in THIS town, after my last performance.
Ichimori: Magarin isn't too far from here.
Kaiten: Okay, problem solved then. Let's go home.
*Later*
Yin: Hey guys. Did you find me a teacher?
Ichimori: Yep. He's a master with a sword, and he's gonna be teaching you for a few weeks.
Yin: Great! But how will we afford it?
Ichimori: Kaiten's a great gambler...When he's not CHEATING!
Kaiten: Hey, that was ONE time!
Ichimori: Oh, WHATEVER.
Kaiten: Anyway, Magarin is only a few miles away, so I'll be going THERE every other day or so.
Yin: That's awesome!
Ichimori: Glad ya think so. Me and Kaiten are going out to train for now, see ya later!
*They both walk out the door*
Yin: (This is great! In a few weeks I'll be on THEIR level!)

Female's voice: The third member of Twilight is discovered! Yin looks forward to her training, as well as being equal to Ichimori and Kaiten...

TO BE CONTINUED

[zabuzassword]

i still like kaiten the best

[Light]

Lol. Out of the five members of Twilight, my favorite is a guy named Li(pronounced "Lee").

Crap I just spoiled it! Oh well, it isn't that big of a detail.

Here's Chapter 6.

Twilight-Chapter 6: A New Threat

*Many hours later*
*Door opens*
Yin: Ichi, Kaiten-san, you're just in time for dinner!
Kaiten: What are we having?
Grandma: Soup.
Ichimori: Aw, don't you have any meat?
Yin: Sorry Ichi, we're poor.
Ichimori: But Kaiten and I need to keep our strength up! You should also start eating better if you're going to save the world, Yin.
Kaiten: *Whispering* You're not supposed to say those kinds of things to girls, idiot!
Ichimori: Oops.
Yin: Grrrr...Fine, tomorrow night you can go eat in the town, but for now you're eating soup, and you're gonna like it.
Ichimori: Maaaan...*Sits down*
Grandma: So Yin, I hear you're getting lessons from a sword master?
Yin: Yeah, I start tomorrow! I'm so excited!
Ichimori: ...
Yin: What's wrong, Ichi?
Ichimori: Something's not right...
Yin: ?
Kaiten: Yeah, I feel it too. There's a demonic aura with an enormous killing intent...
Yin: A Raiken?
Ichimori: No, this is worse...
Yin: ?!
Ichimori: Kaiten, let's go. *Gets up*
Kaiten: Right. *Gets up*
Yin: W-Wait! Can't you wait?
Ichimori: It's getting closer by the second, Yin. We have to go.
Yin: Fine, but come back alive, mister Savior.
Ichimori: *Grins* You bet.
*Ichimori and Kaiten run out the door*
Grandma: I'm starting to believe that Karin was right about that boy...
Yin: *Smiles* She WAS right. Ken Ichimori...The one to save us...
*Meanwhile*
Ichimori: *Sprinting* My GOD, the closer we get, the more apparent its horrible aura becomes...
Kaiten: Yeah...I've never felt anything like THIS before...
Ichimori: *Sprinting* Get ready, it's almost upon us.
Kaiten: *Sprinting* HERE IT COMES!!! *Gets knocked back by a black explosion*
Ichimori: *Stops* KAITEN!!! *Gets knocked back by another black explosion* Guh...
Demonic Figure: Ken Ichimori and Inuchiki Kaiten, the two "Saviors" of the world...We meet at last.
Ichimori: Who are you?!
Demonic Figure: I am one of the Raikon.
Kaiten: What are THEY?
Raikon: We are the next level up after the Raiken.
Ichimori: !!!
Raikon: There are an infinite number of Raiken, only twenty Raikon, and ten Raikan, also known as the Ten Captains.
Ichimori: (Oh no...I don't think we can beat this guy...!) Kaiten! Don't hold back. Use everything you've got.
Kaiten: Right!
Raikon: *Laughs* "Everything you've got"?! You don't have ANYTHING!!!
Ichimori: *Eyes turn black* Looks like you should've done a little more research, pal. *Hair turns black and grows long and spiky*
Raikon: !!!
Ichimori: *Teeth become jagged and yellow* We'll CRUSH you!
Raikon: Ah, you're trump card...You can take on the form of a Raiken...But you still can't beat me!
Ichimori: KAITEN, NOW!!!
Kaiten: *Stabs the Raikon through the chest from behind*
Raikon: Guh...! Damn, I made a mistake...
Ichimori: That's right...DON'T UNDERESTIMATE ME!!! *Runs up and stabs the Raikon*
Raikon: Heh...Heh heh heh....HAHAHAHAHA!!!!
Kaiten: What's so funny?!
Raikon: You've got it wrong, Ken Ichimori...I DIDN'T underestimate you!
Ichimori: ?!
Raikon: *Sword appears in his hand, he stabs Ichi*
Ichimori: AAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!
Raikon: My mistake was, I wasn't using my full power on you two! *An enormous black aura erupts around him*
Ichimori: Ugh...I can't move...
Raikon: My blade is condensed with demonic aura, it can paralyze you with one strike!
Ichimori: !!! (This is BAD...)
Raikon: *Turns around and stabs Kaiten*
Kaiten: AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!
Raikon: Heh heh heh...Now that you're both paralyzed, I'll easily kill you and return to the Twilight a hero!
Ichimori: You....Bastard...!
Raikon: Just for that, I think I'll start with YOU! *Stabs Ichi*
Ichimori: GAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!
Raikon: If you're already paralyzed, and I stab you AGAIN, the aura in my sword melts you from the inside out!
Ichimori: !!!
Raikon: Take THIS, "Mister Savior"!!! *Stabs Ichi*
Ichimori: *Coughs* (Damn...Losing consciousness...Karin...I've...Failed....)
Voice: So weak...
Ichimori: ?
Voice: You can't even kill a frickin' Raikon...YOU PEICE OF CRAP!!!
Ichimori: (Who...ARE you...?)
Voice: Who indeed? Let me "show" you...
Ichimori: (W...What are you doing?! STOP!!! AAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!) *Stands up*
Raikon: WHAT?! HOW CAN YOU MOVE?!
Ichimori: Well, if it isn't little Karano...
Raikon: No...You CAN'T BE...
Ichimori: That's RIGHT, Karano. THIS is what I've been reduced to...Stuck inside a stupid, weak, shrimpy frickin' HUMAN!!!
Karano: No...No....NO!!!!
Ichimori: Brings back some memories, huh?
Karano: STAY AWAY!!! LEAVE ME ALONE!!! YOU'RE DEAD!!!
Ichimori: Is THAT what you think? *Raises sword*
Karano: BACK THE HELL OFF, I MEAN IT UKAZI!!!!
Ichimori: No...I don't think I WILL. *Swings sword down*
Karano: NOOOOO!!!!
*Karano is decapitated*
Ichimori: *Turns to Kaiten* If he dies, the paralysis wears off. You should be good now. Well, my work here is done.
Kaiten: Wait, I-
Ichimori: *Eyes, hair, teeth and sword return to normal* Ugh...What HAPPENED...?
Kaiten: Ukazi used your body as a puppet! I didn't even know he could DO that!
Ichimori: Neither did I...I have to be careful from now on. I can't let him control me.
Kaiten: C'mon, we better go back to Yin's place.
Ichimori: Don't tell her about Ukazi taking over me, okay?
Kaiten: Right. We'll leave that part out. Let's go!
*They run off towards Yin's house*

Female's voice: A new threat, The Raikon, and a possible second threat, The mysterious "Ukazi". As our heroes race back to Yin, the evil presence which resides within Ichimori continues to grow stronger...

TO BE CONTINUED

[Demon King Piccolo93]

Mooore plz

[Light]

Sorry guys, I had another homework overload, I only JUST finished. I hate to say it, but you can expect me to forget ALOT nowadays, I'm getting TONS of homework, plus I have an upcoming project. I'm not gonna have as much time to post chapters as I used to do.

But the GOOD news is that in a month or two I'll have free time again, and I try my best to post new chapters every day.

Anyway, chapter 7 should be up tomorrow, unless I get killed by homework lol.

EDIT-Okay, this time there's no excuse: I just plain forgot.

Here's Chapter 7 anyway. Sorry there's not much action, but there will be soon, promise. We're getting close to the first arc.

Twilight-Chapter 7: The Legendary Threesome

*Ichi and Kaiten tell Yin what happened*
Yin: The RaiKON?
Ichimori: Yeah. There's three levels, Raiken, Raikon, and Raikan.
Kaiten: But nobody actually CALLS them the Raikan, they're known as the Ten Captains.
Ichimori: Right.
Yin: This is bad...You guys were barely strong enough to take down a Raikon, but imagine fighting one of the Captains!
Ichimori: Which is why we need to train as if our lives depended on it.
Kaiten: And in this case, they probably do.
Yin: Right, let's go to Kazin, I wanna meet this "Master Mow".
Ichimori: Okay, let's hurry.
Yin: We'll be back before dinner, Grandma!
*They all run out the door*
Ichimori: *Running* It won't take long, Yin, he said it's only a few weeks.
Yin: *Running* Which is good, with any other master it could take YEARS.
Kaiten: *Running* We don't know how patient this guy is, though.
Ichimori: *Running* I don't think we need to worry though, he seemed like a nice guy.
*They arrive at Kazin*
Kaiten: Okay, it's only a few blocks away.
*They arrive at the building*
Mow: Ah, you are the two I met the other day.
Ichimori: Good to see you again, Master Mow. This is Yin.
Yin: Uh, hi.
Mow: I see. Do you own a sword, Yin?
Yin: Er, no.
Mow: Do you know how to USE a sword?
Yin: No.
Mow: Have you ever SEEN a sword besides the ones that these two boys have?
Yin: No.
Mow: *Sigh* Okay, based on her answers, this training should take...About a month.
Ichimori: WHAT?! You said it would be a few WEEKS!
Mow: Yes, if this girl knew anything about swords, it would take about two weeks, but she is completely hopeless, so it is now a month.
Ichimori: Well, FORGET IT! We don't have that kind of time! C'mon guys, let's go.
Yin: Ichi, wait!
Ichimori: What?
Yin: I don't care if takes MORE than a month, I wanna learn!
Ichimori: *Sigh* Fine, fine. Kaiten and I are going out to train, we'll see you in a few hours.
Yin: Right!
*Later*
Kaiten: Man, I can't believe she STILL wanted to train with that old windbag.
Ichimori: Well, we can't make a big deal about it. It's Yin's choice. If it takes too long we'll leave without her.
Kaiten: But where else are we gonna find the other three members of Twilight?
Ichimori: I dunno, but so far all that Yin's proved is that she doesn't have what it takes to become one of us.
Kaiten: We'll see...
*A week passes*
Ichimori: Hey, Yin, you got a sec?
Yin: Sure, Ichi. What's up?
Ichimori: Well, it's been a week since Mow started teaching you, and you haven't shown us what you've learned.
Yin: A LOT. I almost have a complete mastery of a sword.
Ichimori: SERIOUSLY?! Then why did he say it would take a month?
Yin: Learning how to use a sword is easy, but what takes a month is learning Master Mow's unique style of a sword.
Ichimori: ?
Yin: Master Mow has created a secret style called the Mestugeshi Style, and he alone knows it. But he's teaching it to ME!
Ichimori: That's great!
Yin: Yeah, it uses a bunch of twirls and stuff. Hey, what style do you use, Ichi?
Ichimori: I don't use one at all.
Yin: Huh?!
Ichimori: Yin, look at my sword. It's a huge claymore. You can't really an elegant style with a monster like this. Same with Kaiten.
Yin: Without a style, you're just fighting recklessly with that huge sword.
Ichimori: I already said, it's impossible to use a style with a claymore. Besides, it's not reckless.
Yin: Then what is it?!
Ichimori: Just like Mow, my clan created their own form of using a sword. But it's not elegant enough to be called a STYLE.
Yin: Well did ALL of the people in the Ken Family have big swords like yours?
Ichimori: No, there were only two other swords like this.
Yin: Tell me about them.
Ichimori: My sword is called Zangeto. In the Raiken's strange language, it is directly translated to "The Blade of the Hero".
Yin: Wow...
Ichimori: The next sword was Zansuke(pronounced Zan-soo-kay). In the Raiken's language, it is directly translated to "The Blade of Power".
Yin: And the last one?
Ichimori: The last sword was Zantoki, which is translated to "The Central Blade". Together, they were the Legendary Threesome.
Yin: ?
Ichimori: The founder of the Ken Family, Ken Hado, created the Legendary Threesome.
Yin: What did he do with them?
Ichimori: Hado had three sons. He gave Zangeto to the oldest son, Zantoki to the middle son, and Zansuke to the youngest.
Yin: And?
Ichimori: And that's how it went for generations. It was always passed down in that order. But...
Yin: What?
Ichimori: A few generations before me, a powerful Raiken named Ukazi stole Zansuke.
Yin: !
Ichimori: Then the generations after it became two sons, not three. This led to MY generation.
Yin: So what happened?
Ichimori: Something very strange happened. Up until my generation, Zangeto had been given to the oldest son.
Yin: And did they give it to your older brother?
Ichimori: Nope. They realized that I was STRONGER than my brother, and they made an exception and gave the sword to ME.
Yin: So your brother got Zantoki instead?
Ichimori: That's right.
Yin: Was your brother mad?
Ichimori: No, he didn't mind. Anyway, we lived in happines for a while, until I turned four, and...
Yin: The massacre happened?
Ichimori: Yes. A man with a mask infiltrated our village and killed EVERYONE. Uchiroh and I trained for another two years, and...
Yin: He came back?
Ichimori: ...He came back and killed Uchiroh right before my eyes, then took his sword and jacket as trophies.
Yin: Why didn't he kill YOU?
Ichimori: Who knows...Probably because letting me live was ten times worse than killing me...There was one more thing that happened BEFORE he killed the entire clan.
Yin: What?
Ichimori: Remember that Raiken, Ukazi?
Yin: Yeah.
Ichimori: They sealed him inside of me when I was a baby.
Yin: What? Why?!
Ichimori: Ukazi was terrorizing the world, using OUR family's sword. He earned himself the title "Ukazi the Human Slayer".
Yin: So they sealed him inside of you?!
Ichimori: They believed I was the only one who could contain him. But they miscalculated...
Yin: ?
Ichimori: Zangeto, or the Hero Blade, was a simbol of good. But putting pure evil into the wielder of pure good...
Yin: What? What happened???
Ichimori: *Unsheathes sword* By putting evil into the sword when it was good, it made it a balance.
Yin: A balance?
Ichimori: Yeah. If they had just left me alone, this sword would be pure good, and I could EASILY kill one of the Ten Captains.
Yin: ?!?!
Ichimori: But now that half of this sword is pure evil, it's not a strong.
Yin: I don't understand.
Ichimori: Okay, this explanation might make it easier. Right now, this sword is like 50-50. Half is good, half is evil.
Yin: Got it.
Ichimori: But, there's a way to choose between which one I want to use. In other words, there is a way to go 100%, not 50-50.
Yin: How?
Ichimori: I'm don't know yet, but it probably involves gruesome training.
*Kaiten walks in*
Katien: Hey guys, what were you talking about?
Ichimori: I told her about the Legendary Threesome and a bit of my past. Including Ukazi.
Kaiten: Cool. Oh, Yin, it's about time for you to go to Mow's place.
Yin: OH, I almost forgot! Thanks, Kaiten! Bye, guys!
*Yin runs out door*

Female's voice: Yin finally begins to understand Ichimori, who is becoming less of a mystery. In a few weeks, she will be one of them...

TO BE CONTINUED

EDIT 2-Okay, some feedback would be nice, guys. >> It's been like a week now, and I'm not going to do this, nor have the time for it, if you guys are just gonna disappear for a week. So until you say something, no more chapters.

[zabuzassword]

hey yeah sorry i have been really sick recently so i havent really been on or posted new chapters in weeks but my spring break is comin up so i'll definitely have time then
i really like twilight and its really good
hows that for feedback?

[Demon King Piccolo93]

nooo i want more chapters its just i didnt want 2 nag for em and u werent ever on like ever so yeah

[animefreak5157]

hmmm?
please post more.whenever you can.but if its a bother than you can take a break.