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Old 04-16-2008, 12:54 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Revenge


I knew who you were
Ever since we first met
Your pathetic voice I hear
Your pathetic face I’ll never forget

You don’t have a charm
What are you boasting about?
Just be thankful I’ve done you no harm
So get the hell out!

You think you’re so smart
You think you’re all that
One day I will crush your heart
You’d wish we’d never met

Your self centeredness will kill you one day
Most likely by my bare fists
I’ll burn you in the pits of dismay
And you’ll forever cease to exist

You’ve put me down so much now
Wait til’ my revenge takes place
No mercy I will tolerate or allow
Neither will you feel my grace

All I want to to see you cry
At my feet of superiority
Leaving you out there to die
And wither from reality

Cuz you have been the reason
Why I suffer again and again
You’ve taken my life without hesitation
Now face my rage and pain

May you someday come to see
What a great mess you’ve done
Upon facing judgement and meeting me
Your worst nightmare has just begun
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Old 04-16-2008, 12:56 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Default Re: Check out my Sasuke Poem

it started out 4 sasuke but the i wrote it about someone i hate..goes out all the idiots who piss me off

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Old 04-16-2008, 01:06 AM   #3 (permalink)
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it started out 4 sasuke but the i wrote it about someone i hate
was it about Geosterloks
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Old 04-16-2008, 01:07 AM   #4 (permalink)
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go out to the I hate sasuke clan all of them
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Old 04-16-2008, 01:10 AM   #5 (permalink)
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its a good poem, but not my type of writing, I prefer something like the Jabberwocky
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Old 04-16-2008, 01:11 AM   #6 (permalink)
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give me a moment i'll write another about something..in like 20min
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Old 04-18-2008, 12:40 PM   #7 (permalink)
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good shit dude. but hate is a strong word. lets use dislike
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Old 04-19-2008, 03:05 AM   #8 (permalink)
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^lol, mm yea that was a good poem
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it was. a bit hateful but good.
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it was. a bit hateful but good.
yea but put ur self in Sasukes position it is fitting
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