my....emotions....

[animebuff2006]

Originally Posted by mimzy

thanks ....
i wrote it a couples of weeks ago...
but i like to write always did and always will...
but here is another one from long time ago...

hugging my soft pillow
as i gather my lost shattered thoughts
i reach for my pen
my best friend...my old fellow

why do i turn to my pen?
because is the only one
who knows me deeply from within
through thick and thin

i turn to you when im so weak
for you are the only one who understand me
when i really feel that i cant speak
even the hardest feelings you make me spit out of my chest
you can take the burden and always make me rest

Ahh I see, another interesting poem with passion of emotion. But I noticed that your both of your poems state one thing that is clear. You believe no one knows you, either because you do not let others see you or are natural blind of you. I just so happen to notice that, and whether that is just a coincidence or truth, I just wanted to ask. Why is that?

[animefan_001]

wow mimzy really gd poems!!

[mimzy]

Originally Posted by animebuff2006

Ahh I see, another interesting poem with passion of emotion. But I noticed that your both of your poems state one thing that is clear. You believe no one knows you, either because you do not let others see you or are natural blind of you. I just so happen to notice that, and whether that is just a coincidence or truth, I just wanted to ask. Why is that?

I'm sorry can't answer that question....
lol

[animebuff2006]

Originally Posted by mimzy

I'm sorry can't answer that question....
lol

Understood, I do apologize for my curiosity lol

[DarkAngle]

Here's one poem i wrote :

He sees things but he never touches them...
He hears things but dosen't say it out loud....
Just like a cloud he drifts through the sky....

Here is another one i wrote and is my most fav:

She says her life is a happy life
Everyone believes her that her life is happy
No one cares about her despair
She smiles infront
She cries at the back
She laughs infront
She cuts her self behind
She is lost in sorrow and despair.......

[gaara's wrath]

interesting poems i may make one later

[DarkAngle]

Originally Posted by gaara's wrath

interesting poems i may make one later

no matter what type they are poems are the most interesting and beautiful things you get in the form of words.......

[gaara's wrath]

yea....cant think of what style poem i want to do though.........

[DarkAngle]

Originally Posted by gaara's wrath

yea....cant think of what style poem i want to do though.........

lol you won't know that untill you write a few poem of your own...then you'll realise what suits you best.....usually the poems that suit you best are the poems you write freely and feel satisfied with after you have written them........

[gaara's wrath]

well the real problem is that i have a format for this one poem, but i cant find a style for it that seems correct for it