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| Psp Fan | the focal is nice n try use some stock image for the background.. coz the background seems so plain... i like the black n white one... maybe because the background just have a dots or star.. .. maybe adding a stock image to the background can make it more better..
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| Ultimate Hokage | ![]() I tried coloring... read a tut on dev art & tried to remember it but too lazy 2 go back & follow exactly... would appreciate if anyone has a line drawing i can practice with? (& please don,t tell me 2 ggoogle since didn,t have much luck...) I know this is pretty crappy but it's my first effort ... used sketchbook express on tablet. tell me a couple things i can do to improve? (on coloring) Spoiler Thanks!
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| My Orders Are Absolute. | Quote:
![]() Just some shading and then it's perfect.
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| Ultimate Hokage | Thanks Desire but UR too kind ![]() Pls explain what is meant by some shading? diff colors? more shadows? blending? other?
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| Psp Fan | Quote:
I see shading in there... I think there is no issue on shading or colouring at all... the thing I think you can improve on, is the shapes more.... the face and such have a bit wigly lines.... also I think if you used a curved line with pentool the lines would be better.... you could also add some harder lines in there to make it look more tight as a whole.... Also would suggest to add some loose lines of hair to make it look a bit more scruffy and more hair like.... (normally hair doesnt go as perfectly as you showed there I think....) although here I am being picky and just trying to give some ideas.... all in all you did a great job, specialy if this is your first try... ^^
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| Ultimate Hokage | Quote:
Are you sure no tips on coloring? Yeah the lines look a bit like I drew them w/ left hand or something. I have Gimp and just yesterday started learning the path tool which makes lines & then adds curves to them. I think this is the same as Pentool, right? Yeah the hair probly needs more detail. Will have to work on that in future. *** I'd like to practice coloring on a bleach pic. If I get a manga image off of google then convert the white to transparent w/ Gimp maybe I can do it that way. Seems like a lot of work tho... LOL
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| Spunky <3 | Quote:
here is some line art for youhttps://www.google.com/search?tbm=is...w=1519&bih=862 | |
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| Psp Fan | Quote:
I know that for sure, cause I have done both..... (although only started Drawing/Digi-Painting not that long ago...) About Colouring: The colours could be better, yeah, but I am not gonne judge you on the colour choice.... cause it is prolly a choice what colour you wanted to use... I would say, you could work a bit on adding some more lines and smaller details.... (dot lighting at the cheek for instance....) Wait, is it alright if I edit the Piece, so I could show maybe what I mean.... (not saying I can do a better job, but maybe I could try and show what I mean at least...)
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