Poetry Thread

[Dany1908]

to tell the truth i don't wan't to mix my poems with all
in the blog ppl can see them and read
i really don't care iff few members hates poems and say we spam the logs with them
i requested a subforum for only poems and stories
when will be up i'll make a thread with all my poems
hpe all will do that but i won't stop posting in my blog
there first after the thread

[southkorea]

Originally Posted by easternjohnny

double zero

i though i was a hero,
zapped twice as a zero,
now i feel low,
without a shining glow,
try to pick up myself somehow,
but kicked back down with a pow!
now feel so shallow,
and luck is hanging bad a tow,
i will stand tall,
so i am the sadder poet of them all
oh no ,
a double zero,
no vote
twice for this dolt,
power of love seems gone away,
how gray,
sadness go away please and never stay,
well here i am a timid fellow,
the number one of being double zero!

That one was good.

[twotails12]

As I walk, I see a gate
As I walk, I see smoke, that clouds my eyes
As I walk, I see a men with guns
As I walk, I hear the screams of men, women, children
As I walk, I cletch my mothers hand
As I walk, I feel my mothers tears that fall down apon me


As I stand, My mother holds me close
As I stand, I look at my family. My father, My sister, My brother.
As I stand, I look at them confused.
As I stand, I ask why are you crying, I'm told to stay quiet
As I stand, My mother whispers in my ear. (run with your father)
As I stand, I look up at my mother, her face filled with tears, she pushes me back into my father and ****steps forward to a man.
As I stand, I look toward my mother.
As I stand, I hear my mother yell RUN!

As I run, I hear gun shots
As I run, I don't see my mother
As I run, I hear dogs barking
As I run, I look around and see my family, My father, My sister, My brother
As I run, I hear my sister scream. My father tells me to not look
As I run, I hear my brothers screams. My father tells me to not look back
As I run, I hear my fathers screams. I look back and no ones their
As I run, I run alone.



As I stand, I look around
As I stand, I see a dog house


As I hide, I hear footsteps
As I hide, I see dogs
As I hide, I feel scared
As I hide, I hide alone, and frightened
As I hide, I hear them coming closer
As I hide, I see two men walking toward me
As I hide, I am caught

As I squirm, I hear them talking in German
As I squirm, I hear gun shots
As I squirm, I fell a pain in my side
As I Squirm, I'm dropped to the floor

As I lay their, I wounder......why

[koi.no.michi]

Falling

Hidden tears
Shattered heart
As I fall again and again

It seems as if my world is ending
Falling one last time.

Everytime I see your face
That smile I wish was mine alone
Everything that I have always wanted
Everything I’ve ever dreamed of
And yet, the one thing I will never own

Gazing out my frosted window
The faded stars cry of night cry for me
Stretching out my wings for once
I’m writing this song for you ‘cause this will be—
—The last time that I fall for you.


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[Ayato Kamina]

"I Am The Ocean"

I am the ocean
Ever changing
You are the moon
Always shining
My tides rise and fall
While you pull my soul

I am the sand
Always grating
You are the rain
Always drenching
My grain never changes
Until you cry, My heart wavers

I am the jet black sky
Your the sun's morning rays
You keep me warm
Your the light of my day

Forever we love
Forever we stay

[Perverted Monk]

Ah well i suppose it's been awhile since I've been on haha... Uh, this is something I wrote (obviously) about this chick I was dating at the time...
It originally was going to be a part of a song but... I'd rather not finish the piece
(she wasn't worth the trouble) lol

I'm oblivious to everything
Tell me what's happening
So fed up with that angry look!
Oh, my world torn asunder
By my series of blunders
A snow globe perspective violently shook
Oh, But I didn't get it...
I never do
Throw me a bone?
Or at least a ****ing clue!
Didn't have the guts to say that we were through...

[nagato yuuki]

Originally Posted by Ayato Kamina

"I Am The Ocean"

I am the ocean
Ever changing
You are the moon
Always shining
My tides rise and fall
While you pull my soul

I am the sand
Always grating
You are the rain
Always drenching
My grain never changes
Until you cry, My heart wavers

I am the jet black sky
Your the sun's morning rays
You keep me warm
Your the light of my day

Forever we love
Forever we stay

The first poem I've read from you and my favorite so far

[Shikamaru Nara]

Originally Posted by Perverted Monk

Ah well i suppose it's been awhile since I've been on haha... Uh, this is something I wrote (obviously) about this chick I was dating at the time...
It originally was going to be a part of a song but... I'd rather not finish the piece
(she wasn't worth the trouble) lol

I'm oblivious to everything
Tell me what's happening
So fed up with that angry look!
Oh, my world torn asunder
By my series of blunders
A snow globe perspective violently shook
Oh, But I didn't get it...
I never do
Throw me a bone?
Or at least a ****ing clue!
Didn't have the guts to say that we were through...

Your still on here monk? Long time no talk to. Still making great poems i see.

[Tiny Ninja]

Blinding Love

With the silent storm she blew in,
By her beauty I was taken in.
Mesmerised, hypnotised,
I was spell-bound and yet agonised.

Her delicate being, her tiny breadth,
With every gaze she stole my breath.
Like shards of glass she cut my heart,
Left scars that tear when she departs.

I gave my heart, a souvenir,
For her to play when she'd appear.
She'd grasp it tight so carelessly,
Her love was almost cruelty.

For she meant the world to me,
I gave her all that I could be.
And as the days came by and went,
She'd broken everything I lent.

And just with one final step,
She ripped apart what was left.
She blew away as she came,
Left nothing but this boundless pain.


Le explanations and shizzles:
http://www.animecrazy.net/forums/blo...te-poem-o.html

[ZonieCatz]

Tiny Ninja - nice poem! The imagery made me think of how ice splinters can be surprisingly sharp.